thanks guys.. appreciate it
thanks guys.. appreciate it
I actually liked this piece alot, the flow was great, you had nice vocab but the language was hands down my favorite part of this piece, you kept it fluid and creative which made me want to read more and more, so great job there nigga. The content was cool, I liked how you dived right into the insanity of the character and painted a vivid illusion that slipped in and out of reality, it's something I've been playing with in my writing as well so I can really relate to the styling, very entertaining piece Cry, it's nice to see someone with your achievements still growing and becoming a better writter, keep dropping that dopesauce you twisted bitch,
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RTF and leave links, it's a long one ; )
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...715/index.html
word, I'll hit that up when I feel up to reading a lot haha.
i would crit, if i thought there was a chance someone on this site could take it on board, i mean i thought that was the point of feed, you know, pros & conz...net vets...you gotta love em lmfao
but yea, this was actually a dope drop, #1
iBeast
Lol, who said they couldn't take critique? I'm actually interested in what you liked and disliked. humor me