10 Lines
2 hours
If it's a problem PM me...
10 Lines
2 hours
If it's a problem PM me...
check ... how bout noon just in case? man im pretty buzzed
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whatever....
Noone takes you serious, clown, been a joke from start
Known to leave cats crawling...from laughing so fucking hard (avy)
This herbs known to roll with the wackest kids,
Bring ya crew and I'll fucking Body Trauma<----like car accidents
Spit hot in an instant, come out n dice guy like a blender
While Syco's just getting warmed up.........in a dryer dismembered
Your mind cant handle this, for god sakes clown just bail
Doesn't take a shrink to see Physchological break down and fail
Cut ya crew in pieces, get served if you try to speak
Of course these dudes get eaten, TT<---looks like pi to me
Last edited by The Archetype; March 2nd, 2010 at 11:10 AM
uppin for ya 90 minute verse that was due 17 hours ago,lol
just got in...man i was trashed last nite...i'll show tho..lol
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This is a Game is Global domination, Kings must be defeated
Under Construct? he's good with Tools, "Pardon my Dust" when you Eat It!
He Hops around, actin' like he Murders things....Big Deal
He Copped his crown, at a Burger King...with a Kids Meal!
He "Coulda been a Contender", yeah he wants to Face the Champ
But I'll fixed that, this Win'll leave this Jew Gassed...like Concentration Camps!
Faggot needs to Wake up, i Peeped his whole Steez, He aint Cut
Every drop is a Horrorcore...get offa DZK's Nuts!
He's socially detached, his peers say this lame rebel's an Odd kid
His name fits! he'll never be... on the same level as GOD* Is!
*Gow is in his crew
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This Game is Global domination, Kings must be defeated
Under Construct? he's good with Tools, "Pardon my Dust" when you Eat It!
He Hops around, actin' like he Murders things....Big Deal
He Copped his crown, at a Burger King...with a Kids Meal!
He "Coulda been a Contender", yeah he wants to Face the Champ
But I'll fixed that, this Win'll leave this Jew Gassed...like Concentration Camps!
Faggot needs to Wake up, i Peeped his whole Steez, He aint Cut
Every drop is a Horrorcore...get offa DZK's Nuts!
He's socially detached, his peers say this lame rebel's an Odd kid
His name fits! he'll never be... on the same level as GOD* Is!
*Gow is in his crew
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*sigh*
PLEASE READ BEFORE VOTING
when this battle was made syco had an avy like the one he has now that said :
"You will walk
to me
But you will
Crawl away"
...or something to that effect. he changed it after I dropped, which is whatever, but I didn't want that punch to be ruined. even though it still is.
These bars were well thought out and put together on all levels props kingOriginally Posted by King
Multies/ yes very good usage
Worplay/ that boddy trauma line was ill
Punches/yes closer was good!!
Flow/ Yes good not stretched easy cadance to read
Nameplay/ good finaly someone that doesn't just type the name
Loved this verse its an example of what a complete verse should be
Syco this verse showed u were trashed just the night before, in your first line how it was worded, this was good not gonna line would have taken 85% of rb out. just that i think because it was sort of just thrown together it lacked completeness and more creativness with punches. Don't get this wrong like i said this was also killer
Multies/ yes i liked.
Punches/ Yes. sting level just below kings verse though
Wordplay/ hmm yes and no, some of it was good the other was just ok
Flow/ Good!!!
LOL at the closer
This was a good battle king edged it seems with more preparedness with his bars. the construction was better and more effective other then that syco's verse would have won
Honestly I had to really go on delivery
and king delivered more whole verse
V/ king
Please rtf on this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...861/index.html
This herbs known to roll with the wackest kids,
Bring ya crew and I'll fucking Body Trauma<----like car accidents
^^this was a decent hit homie..
Spit hot in an instant, come out n dice guy like a blender
While Syco's just getting warmed up.........in a dryer dismembered
^^lol, aight...
Cut ya crew in pieces, get served if you try to speak
Of course these dudes get eaten, TT<---looks like pi to me
^^this was fuckin dope my dude....
vs
He's socially detached, his peers say this lame rebel's an Odd kid
His name fits! he'll never be... on the same level as GOD* Is!
^^this was decent Syc...
V/King.
Pretty one-sided imo.
Syc had a lot of misses n King had some pretty nice hits.
No hate Syc homie, stay at the shit my dude.
hey put this at the top
Noone takes you serious, clown, been a joke from start
Known to leave cats crawling...from laughing so fucking hard (avy)
nah
This herbs known to roll with the wackest kids,
Bring ya crew and I'll fucking Body Trauma<----like car accidents
no
Spit hot in an instant, come out n dice guy like a blender
While Syco's just getting warmed up.........in a dryer dismembered
nah man
Your mind cant handle this, for god sakes clown just bail
Doesn't take a shrink to see Physchological break down and fail
noooo
Cut ya crew in pieces, get served if you try to speak
Of course these dudes get eaten, TT<---looks like pi to me
lol nice one!
vs
This Game is Global domination, Kings must be defeated
Under Construct? he's good with Tools, "Pardon my Dust" when you Eat It!
lol nice opener
He Hops around, actin' like he Murders things....Big Deal
He Copped his crown, at a Burger King...with a Kids Meal!
lol digg that
He "Coulda been a Contender", yeah he wants to Face the Champ
But I'll fixed that, this Win'll leave this Jew Gassed...like Concentration Camps!
ok, damn..
Faggot needs to Wake up, i Peeped his whole Steez, He aint Cut
Every drop is a Horrorcore...get offa DZK's Nuts!
lmao right!
He's socially detached, his peers say this lame rebel's an Odd kid
His name fits! he'll never be... on the same level as GOD* Is!
aight closer, better opener tho.
Over all.. one sided battle.. Syco took this with a better verse, and more with harder hitting punches, King had that TT = pie shit, nice concept.
This battle was okay.. and easy to call....
This herbs known to roll with the wackest kids,
Bring ya crew and I'll fucking Body Trauma<----like car accidents
^cool..setup coulda been better..
Spit hot in an instant, come out n dice guy like a blender
While Syco's just getting warmed up.........in a dryer dismembered
^cool one here..
v.s.
He "Coulda been a Contender", yeah he wants to Face the Champ
But I'll fixed that, this Win'll leave this Jew Gassed...like Concentration Camps!
^good flip on an old concepts minus the bad setup..
Faggot needs to Wake up, i Peeped his whole Steez, He aint Cut
Every drop is a Horrorcore...get offa DZK's Nuts!
^just okay, the setup is off..
So yeah, thse were the best lines form the both of you./... I liked them, altho, they coulda been setup better all around.. Still tho, I gotta V/ King for better concepts and delivery.
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