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Defending Champ is: God of War
Last edited by Kenny the G; March 1st, 2010 at 02:11 AM
blackeloheimannunakirap
Check
check, 20, kenny will drop for me. g/l
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Last edited by Slowhands; March 6th, 2010 at 10:59 AM
slowhands' verse
Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
blackeloheimannunakirap
yes sir
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
gl
wtf lol? this shit too intimidating for ya'll or somethin?? fuck...
Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
Umm.. the diss is there, but the rhyme isn't present??
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
predictable there.. lol, but ok
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
heh, ok
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
this was coo... creative
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
eh..
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
corny as hell.. but I lol'ed...
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
ehhhhh, nope...
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
wording seems weird, dunno.. like the concept tho
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
lol, like the double meaning there.. good shit, witty.
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
swear I've seen this done before... seems played
vs
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
like the concept, didn't feel the connect tho...
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
Lmao, this was funny...
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
hmm, decent-ish...
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
not bad... connected
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
Lol, wtf @ never seein an FL play like this.. pretty fresh
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
eh...
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
aiight.. setup made the punch a bit predictable but still, dece...
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
hmm, dece...
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
lol, kinda like my punch on wordz this week.. but coo shit
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
ouch...
prolly one of the better, more entertaining reads this week.. I liked lines from both of ya'll... definitely was feelin the creativity in a couple lines from slow.. that hittin the sack flip had a cool double-punch to it... GoW had the hands on shit and the honorable discharge... good hits... dunno tho, I think I've got GoW by a couple punches in a pretty hot battle. good shit guys.
vote God0fwar by a punch or two...
Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
cool concept, no rhyme
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
I think you could have made this better... nice idea though
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
Mehh
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
nice
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
Not feeling
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
Naww! lmao
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
Meh, not really
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
aight..ish
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
lol
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
Nice
Vs
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
Stretched as hell to me, not feeling this
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
lmao... nice
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
pretty cool
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
Nice
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
Ehhh
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
Kinda cool, though I imagine it's been done
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
lol...
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
Nice again
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
straight personal
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
Solid
really.. really enjoyable battle. Slow you came hard here and I really enjoyed your verse but I think this is one of the best verses i've ever seen from GoW... Apart from his opener, pretty much his whole verse was dope.
So as much as I hope he chokes on something soon,
V - GoW, lmao
Why aint this battle getting votes..?
Last edited by God 0f War; March 7th, 2010 at 07:08 PM
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
vs
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
I actually put together a vote on this like 2 days ago at work, but i accidentally closed the screen when a customer came over, lol.
wasn't quite as close as I expected it to be, but not a blow out. GoW got by a couple bars, seemed like slow wrote this pretty quickly since he didn't know if he was going to be around or not imo. gow just basically had more punches that connected, and some harder hitting lines.
vot gow
Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
played.
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
lol creative.
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
nope. seen this..
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
dope.
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
not hard hitting
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
haa dope.
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
noo.
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
lol cool.
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
ehh not really.
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
ok..
vs.
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
not really a hard hitter.
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
lol coo
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
nah.
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
gooood
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
okk.
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
not bad..
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
niice. lol
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
never seen it. not badd
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
nah.
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
alright
It was obvious GoW was more consistent here, but i thoroughly enjoyed this battle. Both had some creative/humorous ideas thrown out there. God edged this by a bar or 2 and having the lotb. Good champ match, good shit guys.
vote - GoW
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Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
okish punch but it doesn't rhyme lol
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
ok...
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
eh... w/o the proof it doesn't hit as hard...
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
good...
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
not feeling
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
good...
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
not feeling...
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
i see where you were going w/ this, but something's off about it...
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
ok
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
eh... ok...
vs
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
good concept, but the wording is off...
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
good...
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
more creative than hard hitting
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
lol... good shit...
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
another good one...
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
eh... decent personal...
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
good...
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
ok..
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
eh...
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
decentish..
not a bad battle here... Slow did alright but faded towards the end... GoW had some hard hitters in the middle... and even though he went kind of heavy on the nameflips, his punches were consistent...
vote GoW
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
Vs.
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
I felt like these was a cool battle...slow and gows both also had some good punches that i felt could have been worded a bit harder for an extra sting but i do think it was a very close battle non the less
Vote....Gow
Man both of ya'll came dope really. except slow trailed off towards the end and was more inconsistent throughout while I honestly felt GodOfWar's verse was less skay with generally more harsh/personal hits
Best bars...
SLOW
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
Altho oddly this is a quote from when u trailed off, very nice nameplay..
v.s.
GOD
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
^this musta been pretty ironic for slow to hear so harsh..
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
^just adding to the good nameplays u had in the verse with in a very nicely worded clser..
SMH good drop both of you.. V/GoW....I wish Slow had won.
Slow:
Hush put you on blast, so when it comes to chicks we know the tally
and the last time this dude scored some Bush ..was on a voting ballot
not really feelin this...
this shits a walk in the park, i'll send imposters to hell witha rap verse
cuz only time GOD came off the chain, is when i'm spellin it backwards
decent...
we know you flip lines, and always pullin a bitch move to skirt the win
s'why anything you $pit <-- is probably something we've heard from him
lol...nice jab
i'll crash ya wedding, n give your future wife a real vet to connect with
the bitch was so easy to pick-up, that i could just catch the reception
pretty cool shit here...wordplay was straight
keep claiming i bit, cause once this kicks off ...i plan to vamp his veins
n champ this bitch, while watchin his crimson tide like its a 'Bame game
this was a hellafied miss...im guessin you meant "bama game" even so this shit was kinda filler and forced...
silly fag, this dudes never been down under a chick, this herbs a farie
any wise man would tell ya, its been forever since god left a virgin merry
lmao...this was some funny ass shit to me...nice nameplay and diss
niggas punches are ancient, and i'm in grip w/ techs the way i rock kids
so while i got an ace in the hole, u got one on ya face where a cock sits
naw...
so fuck some name plays, cause no bitches would even want you Raw
n it must be deflating Dog, to know that all War can do is blow up dolls
b]decent...only because of the wordplay/nameplay...otherwise blowup doll concepts are played...you flipped it cool though[/b]
i'm gonna raise the bar, cause i'm just sick and tired of you flippin mine
i could say i'm hittin the sack, ...this faggot will use it as a pick up line
not feelin..
i got this match, must be a son of a gun the way i produce the led dude
cause even if you had the luck of the draw,
just means this doodle be dead soon
cool closer...overall decent verse...had some creative flips and some cool disses...had some misses too but overall a decent read...
Gow:
this kids burdened with racism,n i can prove this
cuz the last time he had a cross to bare he put it in my yard n tried to set fire to it
decent start..
and u'll never be a family man, girls wont touch ur pansy ass
so the only time u'll see slow children at play, is in a neighborhood with handicaps
pretty cool diss...was creatively worded too
this is my season, so dont take my threats for granted
because you couldnt give "the god of war an L", if you said it in spanish
cmon now mayne... : /
n when it comes to bein champ, i know u dont expect ta make it
cuz the only time u'll hear u took it slow, is describing how fast youve elevated
ok there we go...lol...nice
and smoka hyped up u bein a soldier,n said u could spit hard
but you take so many shots in front lines, he should give u an honorable discharge
lol...kinda predictable, but still...lol...
we dont believe ur a gangster, and thats the truth slow
the only time we seen u with a mob connection , is when ur crew votes
consistency...
and ur familys into incest,i heard ur moms pussys very tight
because she's never been fist fucked, but has hands inside her every night
oh damn...lmao
ur not a professional actor, so stop the playin bitch
cuz the only time u'd try to win an oscar, is if hes already in a relationship
lmmfao!
and youve fell into an old routine,cuz u cant find a newer way
so you been here since 2004 and all youve done is changed ur username
yea coolin down now...decentish..
and u should teach newbies a lesson, but uve got no training tools
because the only time u'll hear hands on experience, is in vocation schools
lol..decent closer..
slow had a decent verse but Gow basically killed it...he started off kinda slow (ironically) but kept building up steam...v/Gears..er..i mean Gow
gow wins and retains his title
slowhands loses
blackeloheimannunakirap
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