SirMode{vs}Timepunch

[Advantage]

Ten lines
Due in 1 hour
House Rulez
Mah check

[SirMode]

check

[Advantage]

This mah'fucka wants to change the due time like he's gotta date
12 hours from now yer gunna drop to ya knees...clock-in, dont be late
ya plans of defeating me is dweebish like ya your style of long hair
only time you getta good look at is when niggaz just stop and stare
so i drop lines fast like knees getting blown out.. im already claimed winner
reward me cash coz ya' dont have points to hand out like ya'owe me dinner
last time i hear from ya' is when your beggin me for a forfeit
if this was reality you would end up usin gasonline N' scorch this
i keystyled this verse fast and still KO ya' ass within thirty minutes
next time dont make this a pic battle...edit ya avy and take out ya' image!!!

[SirMode]

Timepunch you're mine punk,
don't see you quakin my mind much,
some mcs threaten with dirty words,
for Sir Modé that's absurd,
to reach for controversy just to get myself heard,
my concern ain't on being the best, just what I've learned,
four more lines left to make my mark on you,
my hairs long and I don't give a fuck, too,
it's true, Timepunch, Sir Modé will devestate,
and remind of how real minds play

[titanium 'c']

last time i hear from ya' is when your beggin me for a forfeit
if this was reality you would end up usin gasonline N' scorch this
i keystyled this verse fast and still KO ya' ass within thirty minutes
next time dont make this a pic battle...edit ya avy and take out ya' image!!!
vs
nada

mode work on a longer rhyme scheme and hitting punches i found tht u dont get votes for jst making statments keep it up tho ur flo was good

can u both rtf on my battle wit datmjboi i'll poll when i get up to 50 posts

[Adrenalyn]

timepunch has
punches personals and a good structure
sirmode has
..................nothing

V/timepunch

mode u gotta throw punches in a battle

[Travistee]

This mah'fucka wants to change the due time like he's gotta date
12 hours from now yer gunna drop to ya knees...clock-in, dont be late
(pretty food i saw what you were doin with the clock in)
ya plans of defeating me is dweebish like ya your style of long hair
only time you getta good look at is when niggaz just stop and stare
(pretty weak)
so i drop lines fast like knees getting blown out.. im already claimed winner
reward me cash coz ya' dont have points to hand out like ya'owe me dinner
(also kind of weak but didnt really matter given your oppenent)
last time i hear from ya' is when your beggin me for a forfeit
if this was reality you would end up usin gasonline N' scorch this
(average i dont think you went in on this one fully as a whole)
i keystyled this verse fast and still KO ya' ass within thirty minutes
next time dont make this a pic battle...edit ya avy and take out ya' image!!!
(prolly one of the best lines)

vs well not much to compare step up your game a bit mode, more punches and multis, some nameplay and shit.

[Advantage]

upp1 vote ppl

[The Nav Man™]

Some punches.

vs

shiiiiiit.


^that.
V/Time.
He actually had a verse.
Sir, you need to elevate, hardcore.

[Advantage]

up..ill rtf

[Rhyme Schemes]

v/ time

time slaughtered mode, mode you need to learn the difference between rappin and battlin, your suppose to take shots at your opponent, try and use some humor that makes a huge effect and you gotta be creative so just keep workin at it no hate homie.

[big_ben]

They were both under par
but this won it for me
"some mcs threaten with dirty words,
for Sir Modé that's absurd,
to reach for controversy just to get myself heard,"

[Knucks]

time punch had a more solid verse. better flow I didnt quote anything cus neitherof you really threw any real punches but timepunch def killed sirmode with better flow and delivery

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