*Champ Match*GodofWar 4-0-1 vs Rupture 4-0-2

[Kenny the G]

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[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

check

[Seyance]

Rup already signed out.

[Kenny the G]

well i put him in the "signed out" list, but technically he said if he won last week he'd may still be a participant, he was undecided. So basically he has until midnight to lemme know one way or the other or i'll assume he decided to sign out.

if rupture doesnt show, then i'll put manic vs gow
gow will face the winner of cry vs tim next week, regardless if he wins or not.

[Rupture]

i'm here

20

[Rupture]

i'm starting writing now, 20-30 lines by tonight

[Rupture]

uhhh

[Rupture]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/conv...=115000&page=3

AIM Convo with Hush
highimvic:he has a inet gf
highimvic:dudes a total lamer
highimvic:some girl in australia
highimvic:he told me in aim
highimvic:an was posting on an old site
highimvic:i know for a FACT
highimvic:she posts at rb
highimvic:names bunny

Lets go...

Forget having sex like rabbits, i'm crushin your rep in two
Bunny's known for fucking but it's ironic thats somethin you'll never do
Not on my level foo, with that personal stuff it's sealed son
How you gonna use lines about girls & can't even get a fuckin real one
He's the cheating bitch of LLL, fans have you rode rugged
Always known for snaking out but still ain't considered cold blooded
Rup the vet & beast, you know the rest.. i'm a top header
Gow the AIM cheat, wack faggot, you know the rest.. are alot better
Never gettin pussy, no bitch is ever caught with this victim
He's only seein a Rack when I break out the medival torture equipment
I drink alot but the faggotry you pull in text is a hopeless sin
Happy hour's to him are the one's he planned to dock Seph votes to win

highimvic:me, seyance, cal, alien, hens ghosted for him
highimvic:seph
highimvic:basically everyone helped him write
me:wtf
highimvic:by help i mean gave lines
highimvic:created a monster tbh, i regret it

Hush said Clash created you, sorry but that facts worthless
Cuz this kids farrrr from a monster in text, Yeti still posts wack verses
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
I showed to save LLL's repuation, now i'm keying reckless
Cuz rememberin..
Gow champin'd be worse flashbacks than fat girls in revealing dresses
So be gone mothafucka, i'm completely slayin this menace
His verse is such a fuckin setback.. you'd think it was replays of tennis
I'm the favorite here, not the type you wanna battle with son
I arrive & people dart their eyes at me & just wanna stab you with one
Internet Gf's, texting & AIMing all week, it's petty & restless
Could say he's leads a double life, cuz it's twice as bad as anyone elses




Champ.

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

lol its rupture aka truculent aka burdens bitch

bout time we do this


highimvic 11:14 pm
(11:14:28 PM): rup IMed me for personals
(11:14:33 PM): apparently he added some lol
(11:14:37 PM): ruptures a lying fag
ThaGrowth24 11:25 pm
(11:25:29 PM): for the battle>?
highimvic 11:27 pm
(11:27:24 PM): didnt i say so
ThaGrowth24 11:27 pm
(11:27:56 PM): i figured hed make some shit up



so ur creating shit for votes,its why we dont believe any lines
cuz ur known for lying in your personals............its the only way u can get replies
and i didnt read ur verse,i was told thru i-m
you was a faggot that was creating fake hush quotes........BY HIM
n ur supposed to be a good dad, ur girl says ur an incredible dude
cuz you always try to change ur son.......from normal to a victim of sexual abuse
and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
u havent got better,or become hotter then me bitch
the only time i seen rupture elevated..........is durin doctor treatments
you dont cock pistols, or run the block wit uzis
the only way u'll ever step up 2 the streets........is when u watch tha movie
its nothin to beat u, ur not a problem when u write n spit
u'll never be a burden to tha game..............just the one who rides his dick
n u should have his back on the mic,if the dude gets checked
but u even failed as a sidekick......................since all you can do is text
and your girl dont like u, so sex with her isnt in the plans now
cuz all she does is dis rupt...........everytime he pulls his pants down
n its funny all you talk is trash, then get loud n stupid
so they should of had me battling hush....instead of wishing this clown would do it
and you think ur the cable holdin rap up, n that may be so tho
cuz after i shut you down n disconnect you....................all we'll see is no shows
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match

fuckin faggot

[Slowhands]

smh @ all these niggas scared to vote first....


Forget having sex like rabbits, i'm crushin your rep in two
Bunny's known for fucking but it's ironic thats somethin you'll never do
- eh 2nd line kinda bland
Not on my level foo, with that personal stuff it's sealed son
How you gonna use lines about girls & can't even get a fuckin real one
- ok, but same concept as 1st line kinda
He's the cheating bitch of LLL, fans have you rode rugged
Always known for snaking out but still ain't considered cold blooded
- meh @ snake concept
Rup the vet & beast, you know the rest.. i'm a top header
Gow the AIM cheat, wack faggot, you know the rest.. are alot better
- didn't really get 2nd line
Never gettin pussy, no bitch is ever caught with this victim
He's only seein a Rack when I break out the medival torture equipment
- decent
I drink alot but the faggotry you pull in text is a hopeless sin
Happy hour's to him are the one's he planned to dock Seph votes to win
- ok
Hush said Clash created you, sorry but that facts worthless
Cuz this kids farrrr from a monster in text, Yeti still posts wack verses
- decent
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
- meh
I showed to save LLL's repuation, now i'm keying reckless
Cuz rememberin..
Gow champin'd be worse flashbacks than fat girls in revealing dresses
- wording meh, concept decent
So be gone mothafucka, i'm completely slayin this menace
His verse is such a fuckin setback.. you'd think it was replays of tennis
- ok
I'm the favorite here, not the type you wanna battle with son
I arrive & people dart their eyes at me & just wanna stab you with one
- ok
Internet Gf's, texting & AIMing all week, it's petty & restless
Could say he's leads a double life, cuz it's twice as bad as anyone elses
-meh

vs

so ur creating shit for votes,its why we dont believe any lines
cuz ur known for lying in your personals............its the only way u can get replies
- meh
and i didnt read ur verse,i was told thru i-m
you was a faggot that was creating fake hush quotes........BY HIM
- ok ish
n ur supposed to be a good dad, ur girl says ur an incredible dude
cuz you always try to change ur son.......from normal to a victim of sexual abuse
- eh
and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
- lol decent
u havent got better,or become hotter then me bitch
the only time i seen rupture elevated..........is durin doctor treatments
- ok
you dont cock pistols, or run the block wit uzis
the only way u'll ever step up 2 the streets........is when u watch tha movie
- wording meh
its nothin to beat u, ur not a problem when u write n spit
u'll never be a burden to tha game..............just the one who rides his dick
- lol
n u should have his back on the mic,if the dude gets checked
but u even failed as a sidekick......................since all you can do is text
- decent
and your girl dont like u, so sex with her isnt in the plans now
cuz all she does is dis rupt...........everytime he pulls his pants down
- wordplay and concept didn't match, but ok
n its funny all you talk is trash, then get loud n stupid
so they should of had me battling hush....instead of wishing this clown would do it
- ok ish
and you think ur the cable holdin rap up, n that may be so tho
cuz after i shut you down n disconnect you....................all we'll see is no shows
- meh
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match
- FUCK YOUR FACE, don't speak my name EVER again. ok ish


Overall - Ok, I'm glad that you both established yourselfs as being gay by posting the "sway" or "propaganda" type shit with the aim convo's. It's homo, so stop and just battle. Either way, decent battle here, surely expected better but w/e. Rupture you had a decent verse, only thing I didn't like is that is was mainly based around the long distance girlfriend concept, or something about chicks, atleast the first half of your verse. Had a few similar lines on the CLASH, created you type feel too. Your second half of the verse was alot better imo on punches and changing the concept up, should have came harder though imo. GoW you had a decent verse aswell, you darted around with concepts, some being lame or killed by wording but you atleast changed it up, had to what i think is a few more decent lines then Rupture, not to mention that Rup alot of your punches, or quite a few was on the same concept, kinda killed it for me. Decent battle but again I feel like you guys could of came harder. up

v - GoW

[Manic.]

Forget having sex like rabbits, i'm crushin your rep in two
Bunny's known for fucking but it's ironic thats somethin you'll never do
not bad, wording was meh, it sure as hell didn't help the punch.
Not on my level foo, with that personal stuff it's sealed son
How you gonna use lines about girls & can't even get a fuckin real one
too simple. funny, but not great.
He's the cheating bitch of LLL, fans have you rode rugged
Always known for snaking out but still ain't considered cold blooded
ok..didn't standout but it was alright.
Rup the vet & beast, you know the rest.. i'm a top header
Gow the AIM cheat, wack faggot, you know the rest.. are alot better
this was dope. good use of misdirection here.
Never gettin pussy, no bitch is ever caught with this victim
He's only seein a Rack when I break out the medival torture equipment
no.
I drink alot but the faggotry you pull in text is a hopeless sin
Happy hour's to him are the one's he planned to dock Seph votes to win
could of done wayyyy better with this concept. Wording ruined this attempt entirely.
Hush said Clash created you, sorry but that facts worthless
Cuz this kids farrrr from a monster in text, Yeti still posts wack verses
not bad.
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
using others names to create a punch is getting old. this would be nice but it's just ok in this case.
I showed to save LLL's repuation, now i'm keying reckless
Cuz rememberin..
Gow champin'd be worse flashbacks than fat girls in revealing dresses
cool concept. not an effective punch whatsoever.
So be gone mothafucka, i'm completely slayin this menace
His verse is such a fuckin setback.. you'd think it was replays of tennis
didn't like this. again it didn't attack your opponent hard.
I'm the favorite here, not the type you wanna battle with son
I arrive & people dart their eyes at me & just wanna stab you with one
this was cool.
Internet Gf's, texting & AIMing all week, it's petty & restless
Could say he's leads a double life, cuz it's twice as bad as anyone elses
cool.

vs.

so ur creating shit for votes,its why we dont believe any lines
cuz ur known for lying in your personals............its the only way u can get replies
lol dope.
and i didnt read ur verse,i was told thru i-m
you was a faggot that was creating fake hush quotes........BY HIM
no.
n ur supposed to be a good dad, ur girl says ur an incredible dude
cuz you always try to change ur son.......from normal to a victim of sexual abuse
bland and statementish. not good..
and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
funny, but wording was blahhh.
u havent got better,or become hotter then me bitch
the only time i seen rupture elevated..........is durin doctor treatments
ok np. punch wasn't there.
you dont cock pistols, or run the block wit uzis
the only way u'll ever step up 2 the streets........is when u watch tha movie
this gets a big fuck no.
its nothin to beat u, ur not a problem when u write n spit
u'll never be a burden to tha game..............just the one who rides his dick
nice..
n u should have his back on the mic,if the dude gets checked
but u even failed as a sidekick......................since all you can do is text
nope.
and your girl dont like u, so sex with her isnt in the plans now
cuz all she does is dis rupt...........everytime he pulls his pants down
seen this wp one too many times, and small dick concepts are getting boring.
n its funny all you talk is trash, then get loud n stupid
so they should of had me battling hush....instead of wishing this clown would do it
didn't standout. just decent..
and you think ur the cable holdin rap up, n that may be so tho
cuz after i shut you down n disconnect you....................all we'll see is no shows
could of done more with this. kinda flat.
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match
ha dope.


the way i see it is both of yall had a few "standout" lines. GOW had too many misses though. Rupture didn't have as many misses so you could say he was more consistent. Both of you need to work on wording on some of your punches and you woula had a more well rounded verse. Consistency is what separates the 2 of you here because neither of you came elite in this battle.

Vote - Rupture.

[King]

Never gettin pussy, no bitch is ever caught with this victim
He's only seein a Rack when I break out the medival torture equipment
I drink alot but the faggotry you pull in text is a hopeless sin
Happy hour's to him are the one's he planned to dock Seph votes to win
Hush said Clash created you, sorry but that facts worthless
Cuz this kids farrrr from a monster in text, Yeti still posts wack verses
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
I'm the favorite here, not the type you wanna battle with son
I arrive & people dart their eyes at me & just wanna stab you with one
Internet Gf's, texting & AIMing all week, it's petty & restless
Could say he's leads a double life, cuz it's twice as bad as anyone elses

vs

so ur creating shit for votes,its why we dont believe any lines
cuz ur known for lying in your personals............its the only way u can get replies
and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
u havent got better,or become hotter then me bitch
the only time i seen rupture elevated..........is durin doctor treatments
its nothin to beat u, ur not a problem when u write n spit
u'll never be a burden to tha game..............just the one who rides his dick
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match

Pretty close. Being as that I have no idea which AIM convo is the truth and which one is ridiculous, I am going to just give them both credit for being true and ignore inconsistencies. That being said, Rupt edges this out with a slightly more consistent drop here. I have him edging this out by one line. I think having a little better wording helped also. Good battle guys.

Vote Rupture

[Networth]

Man.. I mean really guys this battle wasn't all that impressive to me for a champ match especially.. very either forced wordplay on both sides especially rupture, or odd delivery like in some god of war verse.. Rupture also had poor setups, but GoW's ......'s were a throw off enough to compensate.

Best Bars>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Rup the vet & beast, you know the rest.. i'm a top header
Gow the AIM cheat, wack faggot, you know the rest.. are alot better
^[B]okay, would've liked to feel more sting./B]..
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
^pretty creative personal here..

v.s.

and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
^okay okay..
and your girl dont like u, so sex with her isnt in the plans now
cuz all she does is dis rupt...........everytime he pulls his pants down
^haha, a little better than the first.
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match
^wording is a question, but cool concept n personal attempt.

But yeah V/ GoW by a bar here... he def had more creativity in his verse although it was delivered oddly sometimes. Ruptures ideas were good and his verse flowed well FTMP, but the concepts werent setup well enough in the lines I didn't quotes n therefore seemed force with the style he used.

[Cody Nash]

Forget having sex like rabbits, i'm crushin your rep in two
Bunny's known for fucking but it's ironic thats somethin you'll never do
okay, wording seemed off
Not on my level foo, with that personal stuff it's sealed son
How you gonna use lines about girls & can't even get a fuckin real one
aiight, coo...
He's the cheating bitch of LLL, fans have you rode rugged
Always known for snaking out but still ain't considered cold blooded
okayyy
Rup the vet & beast, you know the rest.. i'm a top header
Gow the AIM cheat, wack faggot, you know the rest.. are alot better
wording was terrible... bleh
Never gettin pussy, no bitch is ever caught with this victim
He's only seein a Rack when I break out the medival torture equipment
seen this done before... it's a really old joke as well...
I drink alot but the faggotry you pull in text is a hopeless sin
Happy hour's to him are the one's he planned to dock Seph votes to win
eh, okay
Hush said Clash created you, sorry but that facts worthless
Cuz this kids farrrr from a monster in text, Yeti still posts wack verses
old concept.. I seem to remember BTK usin this a long time ago
There's so many ghosts in his shit, he's gotta be jokin dude
His verse lookin like a Seyance, & thats ANOTHER who's wrote for you
decent personal.. although being untrue takes away from the sting
I showed to save LLL's repuation, now i'm keying reckless
Cuz rememberin..
Gow champin'd be worse flashbacks than fat girls in revealing dresses
ehhh... not feelin it, stretched
So be gone mothafucka, i'm completely slayin this menace
His verse is such a fuckin setback.. you'd think it was replays of tennis
nah, weak conept imo.. no sting
I'm the favorite here, not the type you wanna battle with son
I arrive & people dart their eyes at me & just wanna stab you with one
aiight, simple but effective.. decent
Internet Gf's, texting & AIMing all week, it's petty & restless
Could say he's leads a double life, cuz it's twice as bad as anyone elses
hmm aiight

vs

so ur creating shit for votes,its why we dont believe any lines
cuz ur known for lying in your personals............its the only way u can get replies
okay, basic.. sort've like feeding off his verse, but it hurt him.
and i didnt read ur verse,i was told thru i-m
you was a faggot that was creating fake hush quotes........BY HIM
nah, not feelin it
n ur supposed to be a good dad, ur girl says ur an incredible dude
cuz you always try to change ur son.......from normal to a victim of sexual abuse
Lol, okay... wtf
and i know ur homeys is rude, about bein labeled queens
cuz all they do is inter rupt............with fingers,hands, and anal beads
sorta forced, but I still lol'ed...
u havent got better,or become hotter then me bitch
the only time i seen rupture elevated..........is durin doctor treatments
okayyy
you dont cock pistols, or run the block wit uzis
the only way u'll ever step up 2 the streets........is when u watch tha movie
eh, I get it.. just was a miss for me
its nothin to beat u, ur not a problem when u write n spit
u'll never be a burden to tha game..............just the one who rides his dick
aiight, coo...
n u should have his back on the mic,if the dude gets checked
but u even failed as a sidekick......................since all you can do is text
eh, okayy
and your girl dont like u, so sex with her isnt in the plans now
cuz all she does is dis rupt...........everytime he pulls his pants down
Lol, aiight-ish
n its funny all you talk is trash, then get loud n stupid
so they should of had me battling hush....instead of wishing this clown would do it
hmm aiight...
and you think ur the cable holdin rap up, n that may be so tho
cuz after i shut you down n disconnect you....................all we'll see is no shows
Heh, okay
your retarded as fuck, atleast thats how ur factored in rap
so you wont be battling slow next week..its how you''ll be diagnosed after this match
eh, nope... not into it



both of you had some mad low points.. I normally enjoy both of you a lot more than this. seems like ya'll were slackin, or just focused too much on personal shit (which really got boring to me)... I think GoW had a couple that made me LOL though, while Rup just had a few good hits and nothing more to me... could've been a better match by both of your standards imo... stay up


vote GoW

[The Commisioner]

rupture won this and by a fairly signifigant margin

godofwar doesn't have close to the same level of polish, the ........... kills reading a line, the flow is much choppier, and some of the concepts are badly forced... ie inter rupt

i thought the change ur son line was ok, after that the concepts were simple and honestly the formatting made me not even want to continue to read

lol at ruptures whole verse being off aim chats, true or not but his punches were executed much better, he had 3 or 4, maybe 5 punches among the more average ones that stood out, his opener was simple but hit, the seph votes hit, the closer was well done

i really don't think this was that close at all and anyone who says/votes otherwise needs to really evaluate themselves and see if they are being honest (maybe you just think im full of shit, whatever)

also in the battles iv seen in lll this season iv seen way too many cats talking about creativity who have little familiarity with how old/simple/etc... a punch actually was and also discounted the importance of stronger technicals

v/ rupture