TimePunch VS. Pryme

[Advantage]

Due in 1 hour
house rules
10 lines
mah check

[.Prime.]

yo sry I was busy

check

[.Prime.]

Alright, since the time limits almost up, I'll drop first..

Alright, I can tell that this niggas sexuality twirls
I would bust on this cat, But I dont hit girls
And he don't drop rhymes that are equivalent to mine
Stereotypical rapper droppin rhymes about all his nines
and all the guns that he tokes, and how puts necks into yokes
Livin vicariously trough a username, cause he needs cloaks
See this kids a wannabe, and I rap the shit thats real
This kid probably bumps barry white to show he gots sex appeal
And you aint ironman nigga, cause thats Ghostface's name
You can tell this cats trippin because his rhymes is lame

blah...

[Advantage]

About Pryme
Age:
15
Biography:
Born and raised on the east coast, just trying to get some of my flow out there.
Location:
Worcester, MA
Interests:
Hip Hop, Rock, TV, Boxing, Swimming, and Movies.
Occupation:
MC in progress
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Your the kind of chump that'll get KO'd with fast deliverance
like ya boxing died battlin, now half Mass with an indifference
Ya flow's to outta control to survive like luging @ da olympics
nothing fits you cept anti-tenacious flips like a dead gymnast
I'm always on time with getting down to fight....baby virgins
2 yung 2 read this, your accnt getting closed like pulling curtains
wit dis kid coming at me live....yall would need to pry-me off
coz this dude'z an evolved ton of junk...but yet his punches land soft
pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour
.......he couldnt drop a pretty verse
its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self
.........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words

[Puncha Blurta]

ite, I gotta start by sayin prime, U got a dope sig lol, props
but Ur verse was wack for a text battle verse, it woulda been fine delivered nicely in an audio track but in text U gotta get more complex & witty + learn to throw a mean punch

TP U had this 1:

wit dis kid coming at me live....yall would need to pry-me off
coz this dude'z an evolved ton of junk...but yet his punches land soft
^
good hit
then U had this weird closing piece

pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour
.......he couldnt drop a pretty verse
its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self
.........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words
^
laid out weird as fuck but a pretty cool way to end Ur verse

v/TP for having a better battle verse

rtf!

[iCoMeINPeACe]

Alright, I can tell that this niggas sexuality twirls I would bust on this cat, But I dont hit girls
{{nah}}
And he don't drop rhymes that are equivalent to mine Stereotypical rapper droppin rhymes about all his nines
{{where's the punch}}
and all the guns that he tokes, and how puts necks into yokes Livin vicariously trough a username, cause he needs cloaks
{{nah}}
See this kids a wannabe, and I rap the shit thats real This kid probably bumps barry white to show he gots sex appeal
{{LoL... funny}}
And you aint ironman nigga, cause thats Ghostface's name You can tell this cats trippin because his rhymes is lame blah...
{{nah}}

vs

Your the kind of chump that'll get KO'd with fast deliverance like ya boxing died battlin, now half Mass with an indifference
{{nah}}
Ya flow's to outta control to survive like luging @ da olympics nothing fits you cept anti-tenacious flips like a dead gymnast
{{nice... good wordplay}}
I'm always on time with getting down to fight....baby virgins 2 yung 2 read this, your accnt getting closed like pulling curtains
{{ok... not that serious tho}}
wit dis kid coming at me live....yall would need to pry-me off coz this dude'z an evolved ton of junk...but yet his punches land soft
{{nah... weak}}
pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour .......he couldnt drop a pretty verse its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self .........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words
{{nah... not feeling the structure here}}

V/Time Punch because he had way more punches for what it was and better wordplay... Prime u ainT really do much of anything... that shit was weak as hell

[Tebo]

Pryme - not much

Time Punch -
Ya flow's to outta control to survive like luging @ da olympics
nothing fits you cept anti-tenacious flips like a dead gymnast

overall, Pryme I didn't feel had anything really, needs to brush up more, Time had some more advanced concepts but most didnt land, line I quoted was cool though, overall the more solid verse is Time Punch


RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...495/index.html

[Switch.]

Alright, I can tell that this niggas sexuality twirls
I would bust on this cat, But I dont hit girls
Weak/played
And he don't drop rhymes that are equivalent to mine
Stereotypical rapper droppin rhymes about all his nines
nah
and all the guns that he tokes, and how puts necks into yokes
Livin vicariously trough a username, cause he needs cloaks
meh
See this kids a wannabe, and I rap the shit thats real
This kid probably bumps barry white to show he gots sex appeal
noo
And you aint ironman nigga, cause thats Ghostface's name
You can tell this cats trippin because his rhymes is lame
weak written all over this

vs

Your the kind of chump that'll get KO'd with fast deliverance
like ya boxing died battlin, now half Mass with an indifference
not feeling this
Ya flow's to outta control to survive like luging @ da olympics
nothing fits you cept anti-tenacious flips like a dead gymnast
meh
I'm always on time with getting down to fight....baby virgins
2 yung 2 read this, your accnt getting closed like pulling curtains
meh
wit dis kid coming at me live....yall would need to pry-me off
coz this dude'z an evolved ton of junk...but yet his punches land soft
ight i suppose
pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour
.......he couldnt drop a pretty verse
its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self
.........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words
lol

This was a weak battle but TP defo gets this for being less simple than his opponent and for at least commin with half a decent punch or two. No hate both need to elevate though.

V/TP

[ViS.]

See this kids a wannabe, and I rap the shit thats real This kid probably bumps barry white to show he gots sex appeal

vs

wit dis kid coming at me live....yall would need to pry-me off
coz this dude'z an evolved ton of junk...but yet his punches land soft
pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour
.......he couldnt drop a pretty verse
its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self
.........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words


i got tp takin this with more quotables.. this battle wasnt too strong but it was decent..

v/tp

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...508/index.html

[Advantage]

1st up lol, one more

[elm0 da crackur]

hmm...

Pryme-
Alright, I can tell that this niggas sexuality twirls
I would bust on this cat, But I dont hit girls
And he don't drop rhymes that are equivalent to mine
Stereotypical rapper droppin rhymes about all his nines

^^ flow was very basic, punchs didn't hit very hard and was mostly filler

TP-
pryme's originality is omnious to his self glamour
.......he couldnt drop a pretty verse
its called self destruct...take my battle hammer and just lose ya'self
.........get lost in ya jumbled shitty words
t
^-- this was a sick ender and the rest of the verse flowed very well, punchs didn't land so hard but was still above Pryme

Flow: TP
Punchs: TP
Wordplay: TP

Overall vote- TP

plz rtf http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...645/index.html