TimePunch Vs. N.O.T.I.C.

[Advantage]

Due in one hour
Ten lines
house rulez
mah check

[Advantage]

extension another hour, if not sooner

[Notic.]

Fine, but make sure you explain how many lines and rules we agreed on 'cause I don't see anything on your first post. I'll check in later or whatever.

[Notic.]

Check

[Advantage]

The only way this fool gets Noticed is how he spaces out oftenly
you betta 'note-this'*, your bad at rapping so lets talk astronomy
that death angel is blind like a man with no eyes, couldnt even Read
you cant drop ten unless i help your cataracts....with a fifth of weed
Ya record'z looking like the year after last decade ya started ..oh-1!
win i'm finished with you it'll turn into 2, you'll be sum trauma tized scum
...all i gotta do to rip this bitch is throw a left jab to his right apendix.......
not a doc but i know that'll leave his body bitten,ta get his account suspended
i key all my work so im definately locked in when this gets published tonight
your like a suicidal magazine in the works...just edit ya'self right outta sight
*Notic

[Notic.]

Lol just to clear it up my name's pronounced the same as in hypnotic. Lmao

Kid thinks he's a worthy opponent, but all I see is my next victim
'cause he prepared for this battle like a pussy gets wet....he had dick inside assist him
Game recognize game.... and you ain't a key player
My rhymes are carnivorous while yours a Christian with no prayer
This kid's already reached his limit 'cause now he's lyrically overweight
I'll admit it his rhymes gained substance..... they finally considered paperweight
I go through this kid faster than Mediguard gloves in a hospital
Yeah he's worn out so his minds the same as a common house plant... he's a vegetable
Nigga you got confused flow each time you drop to rep your "traumatization"*
'cause his ill mind that spits raw rhymes is a...... dramatization

*No not feeding, I had that written before he dropped so don't vote if feeding is what you see.

[.-Noob.Saibot-.]

Over all not an amazing battle but a close one no really good pinches tht stood out ta ma buh both had decent flow buh I felt like time put more work in IMO I liked both verses I jus personally preferd time . Notic had a better closer buh other than tht I jus vote time for personal preferance

[CanadianPsycho]

I agree. It was close, both had dope verses but lyrically i have to give it to NOTIC

[Tim]

cp vote dqued not explained well enough

[Switch.]

Ya record'z looking like the year after last decade ya started ..oh-1!
win i'm finished with you it'll turn into 2, you'll be sum trauma tized scum
ok at best..i think set up was better though

vs

This kid's already reached his limit 'cause now he's lyrically overweight
I'll admit it his rhymes gained substance..... they finally considered paperweight
Lmao

Average battle tbh...expected more from both but u guys only produced one bar worthy of quoting. So im gonna give the vote to the quotable i felt was better n that was NOTIC's punch. IMO the rest of both ya verses was pretty below par and both can do much better i hope. No hate to either though.

V/Notic

[Notic.]

Lol good look man. Upppp!!

[Advantage]

1-1, could go either way! *uppz*

[Puncha Blurta]

The only way this fool gets Noticed is how he spaces out oftenly
you betta 'note-this'*, your bad at rapping so lets talk astronomy
aint really a punch like this maybe shoulda been the other way around
that death angel is blind like a man with no eyes, couldnt even Read
you cant drop ten unless i help your cataracts....with a fifth of weed
aint really feelin this one, Ur flow is tight tho, structure solid
Ya record'z looking like the year after last decade ya started ..oh-1!
win i'm finished with you it'll turn into 2, you'll be sum trauma tized scum
set up is cool, punch lacks
...all i gotta do to rip this bitch is throw a left jab to his right apendix.......
not a doc but i know that'll leave his body bitten,ta get his account suspended
lol, this ones pretty cool
i key all my work so im definately locked in when this gets published tonight
your like a suicidal magazine in the works...just edit ya'self right outta sight
nice closer

vs

Kid thinks he's a worthy opponent, but all I see is my next victim
'cause he prepared for this battle like a pussy gets wet....he had dick inside assist him
cool opener
Game recognize game.... and you ain't a key player
My rhymes are carnivorous while yours a Christian with no prayer
coulda been better, ok
This kid's already reached his limit 'cause now he's lyrically overweight
I'll admit it his rhymes gained substance..... they finally considered paperweight
lol
I go through this kid faster than Mediguard gloves in a hospital
Yeah he's worn out so his minds the same as a common house plant... he's a vegetable
this ones cool
Nigga you got confused flow each time you drop to rep your "traumatization"*
'cause his ill mind that spits raw rhymes is a...... dramatization
so so closer


I think notic took this one just, pretty close

TP, Ur verse didn't really lift off the ground until about half way thru, Ur first few bars were a bit meh but U had some good hits an U got a dope flow too <-- work solid witty punches into that an U on fire son
no, U had some funny clever hits, bar for bar U had the stronger verse with less misses/half hits
not a bad battle, not amazing either, let's all keep elevatin' y'all
v/NO

[iCoMeINPeACe]

The only way this fool gets Noticed is how he spaces out oftenly you betta 'niote-this'*
{{ok... could have been better for a opener}}
your bad at rapping so lets talk astronomy that death angel is blind like a man with no eyes, couldnt even Read you cant drop ten unless i help your cataracts....with a fifth of weed
{{nah... flow is kinda oFF}}
Ya record'z looking like the year after last decade ya started ..oh-1! win i'm finished with you it'll turn into 2, you'll be sum trauma tized scum
{{u started out good with the 01 punch nd then lost it with that scum shit... coulda used a wayyy better ending here}}
...all i gotta do to rip this bitch is throw a left jab to his right apendix....... not a doc but i know that'll leave his body bitten,ta get his account suspended
{{u lost me}}
i key all my work so im definately locked in when this gets published tonight your like a suicidal magazine in the works...just edit ya'self right outta sight
{{ok finisher but could have been better}}

vs

Kid thinks he's a worthy opponent, but all I see is my next victim 'cause he prepared for this battle like a pussy gets wet....he had dick inside assist him
{{not bad... could of had a better opener}}
Game recognize game.... and you ain't a key player My rhymes are carnivorous while yours a Christian with no prayer
{{ok}}
This kid's already reached his limit 'cause now he's lyrically overweight I'll admit it his rhymes gained substance..... they finally considered paperweight
{{nice}}
I go through this kid faster than Mediguard gloves in a hospital Yeah he's worn out so his minds the same as a common house plant... he's a vegetable
{{ok}}
Nigga you got confused flow each time you drop to rep your "traumatization"* 'cause his ill mind that spits raw rhymes is a...... dramatization
{{nah}}

V/N.O.T.I.C for better punches nd better delivery... his verse flowed a lot smoother then TimePunch... Time u be startin out with some good punches but then u end it with some corny shit... start good nd end better... that should be ur motto

[Notic.]

Good look on the explained votes, very much appreciated. Up!!