Humanity

[.Prime.]

Humanity

Goes to the beat of:

I've learned to realize that, everything is the same
Repeated history through actions we can never maintain
The kind balance which was given to us, grace of God
Declare war on a country and we begin to applaud
This type of world we livin in is a test of mind
Placed on a single land mass, to kill off our own kind
This kind of shit happens in cycles, its been to long
Began with genesis, and from there it just prolonged
I see a vision of prosperity, can you see it too?
Peace is the kind of rhythm we should all listen to

I've been up on the blocks, in Peru dealin spots
The type of crowd who only changes when someone gets shot
Maybe it's everybody though , we in this thing together
Like Nas said this type of shit can last forever
So I be waving my banner in all my city streets
Before we all wet the bed and make God change the sheets
I'm jammin up the system so this thing don't repeat
I'm needin all humanity to represent peace...

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[.Prime.]

uppin for feedback, please don't sleep on this.

[143]

Nice drop. I like the topic of peace in this using the right amount of vocab. A little short though but you got the message over. i Also like how you ptu the humanity vs god thing together.

The kind balance which was given to us, grace of God
Declare war on a country and we begin to applaud
This type of world we livin in is a test of mind
Placed on a single land mass, to kill off our own kind
This kind of shit happens in cycles, its been to long
Began with genesis, and from there it just prolonged
I see a vision of prosperity, can you see it too?
Peace is the kind of rhythm we should all listen to

my fave part right here. Check out my drop "stealing home"

[[k]onquerer]

This piece definitely shouldn't be slept on, I like the topic and how you came at it and hit it head on. Agree with the one above me, kinda short but that's okay cause you still managed to get your point in and you didn't leave us hanging at the end. Overall, good piece, work on extending and enhancing some vocab and I'll be lookin forward to new drops from you bro. keep it dope. rtf

[.Prime.]

These are the first two verses for my song, humanity, on my mixtape. I'm working on a hook right now so for now this is a work in progress but I just felt like sharing it with yall. Thanks for the feedback, uppin for more and please don't sleep on this.

[.Prime.]

uppin for feedback

[Raw Talent]

great lyrics..if u write three verses and make each longer tho you're song would be extreamly dope on the lyrical side..however i didn't like the beat,take my advice and try to find something else..keep looking man and great piece in my opinion.

peace

[.Prime.]

uppin for feedback

[TheNBT]

The idea is real as hell... we should all be peaceful and quit trippin just as human beings in general. The things you say help reinforce to that...

I've learned to realize that, everything is the same
Repeated history through actions we can never maintain
Good line, so true too ya'll pay attention in History class lol
The kind balance which was given to us, grace of God
Declare war on a country and we begin to applaud
Dope that's how shit works and it's kinda messed up. This helps get your point across
This type of world we livin in is a test of mind
Placed on a single land mass, to kill off our own kind
This kind of shit happens in cycles, its been to long
Began with genesis, and from there it just prolonged
I see a vision of prosperity, can you see it too?
Peace is the kind of rhythm we should all listen to
I like this ending and it flows well
I've been up on the blocks, in Peru dealin spots
The type of crowd who only changes when someone gets shot
Maybe it's everybody though , we in this thing together
Like Nas said this type of shit can last forever
So I be waving my banner in all my city streets
Before we all wet the bed and make God change the sheets
I'm jammin up the system so this thing don't repeat
I'm needin all humanity to represent peace...
Second is sayin the same things as the first verse... it works for the topic man good piece.

[Blood Fiend]

great topic and nice beat....i agree with you when you say everything is the same. that part had me hooked it was honest and real. nice work

[Cody Nash]

your feedback links were terrible. closed.