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Last edited by Tim; February 7th, 2010 at 05:33 AM
Last edited by Cody Nash; February 7th, 2010 at 05:28 AM
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
12.
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercoverOriginally Posted by Tim
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
& Tim... just stick to work, whatever's protrudin from ya cubicle's novice
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
poor T.. the most laughable thought is that he drops before me
his balls NEVER dropped... closest he gets to solo will be on the 14th
yeah, fuck you..
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
vs
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
v/Tim, although I could definitely see what he meant about the wording Cry's felt like more of a battle verse with attacking wording. But it lacked real hard hitting wit and misdirection, technically both sound though. Tim had a few bars I really liked.. the falling off was a nice fresh flip on that concept and the swirly days got a laugh. Cry had the decent '12s good line' and the gruesome line which was a dope concept but not worded well enough really. Good battle though.
I'm so fly, they sent for a swat team to stop me.
HenceForward.
Tim:
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
Vs
Cry
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with
Overall: This was a pretty good battle, Tim you came out strong but near the end you kinda fell off, had me looking like wtf, but you still had 3 good bars in there to me that really stood out, overall it kep me reading, so good verse, Cry you had some nice punches in there, and good personals...But the punches that you did throw just dint connect hard enough although two of your bars stood out to me...Were all 8th plague so you already know ant no fishy shit...Good battle both of you...Close battle as well..
Vote= Tim
By a hair.
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
v.s.
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
V/Tim for better bars...
The both of you seemed timid about the competition you were facing and it showed thru in the verses in my opinion. The concepts seemed to be aimed more personally but nobody really had anything... I use to read LLL verse and this isn't a battle that could stack up to then honestly. but ya'll put on a somewhat entertaining show
Last edited by Networth; February 5th, 2010 at 01:25 PM
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
vs
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
Overall a reals good battle in all fairness, i thought both attacked each other with some mean personals and funny ass humour bars, which i thought came of real good, Cry you had the best humour and a semi-dope personal, but i thought Tim came more consistent with the personals and the humour, so for that reason im going to vote for Tim, but this was close as fuck.
V/Tim, by a cunt hair.
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
-descent
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
-eh
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
-could of been worded better
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
-eh again wording seem'd weak
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
-nah
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
-lol descent
vs
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
-comedy > clever
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
-eh descent
& Tim... just stick to work, whatever's protrudin from ya cubicle's novice
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
-lol
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
-lol
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
-meh, kinda forced imo
poor T.. the most laughable thought is that he drops before me
his balls NEVER dropped... closest he gets to solo will be on the 14th
-eh
Overall- pretty even battle, right down the middle on this one. i think Tim came more consistent but Cry had harder punches when it counted. i dunno, i'm a huge fan of comedy verses so its hard for me to decide on this. I feel like Tim came kinda bland to me, and Cry even though wasnt as consistent, what punches he did have were more harsh and better hitting. So i guess i'm just going againt the grain with this one. But i enjoyed it more and not the one to follow the leader with votes.
v-Cry
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
vs
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
aight i think cry had the comedy factor which is what wins battles for me. if u make me laugh at a dude ima think ur verse is better, and the fine line was dope to me and prolly the lotb for me so i got to give this to cry. tim i think ur concepts is good but i think wording is ur problem(its my prob to) and cry was jsu cleaner with that aswell
vote cry
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
decent...
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
almost dope but wording messed it up a little...
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
ok...
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
ok...
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
ok...
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
eh... decentish...
vs
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
eh...
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
eh...
& Tim... just stick to work, whatever's protrudin from ya cubicle's novice
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
ok...
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
eh...
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
ok...
poor T.. the most laughable thought is that he drops before me
his balls NEVER dropped... closest he gets to solo will be on the 14th
ok...
close battle but i have Tim by a bar...
vote Tim
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
^^^Okay personal opener but didnt hit hard tho
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
^^^Cool i like this one
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
^^^nah
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
^^^lol this was cool
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
^^^nah wasnt feeling this
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
^^^decent closer
Vs
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
^^^Decent opener
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
^^^lol this was good it hit
& Tim... just stick to work, whatever's protrudin from ya cubicle's novice
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
^^^decent
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
^^^nah wasnt feeling this one
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
^^^nice this hit
poor T.. the most laughable thought is that he drops before me
his balls NEVER dropped... closest he gets to solo will be on the 14th
^^^okay closer
V/Cry, this was another close one...but i felt tim had some cool ideas but his wording killed his impact on some but i did like the surprise line it was cool, but i felt crys verse was more consitent over all and his liines hit harder than tims, but stil a close battle..cool one yah'll
Name plays on me are old.
Legion Of Legends
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
...vs
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
lol
str8 battle here...tim u had an aight verse but some of it was jus to simple for me I felt like u could've made some of ya lines wittier although u didnt have nothing really wack......cry u had an aight verse to I felt like u could've been a lil more consistant as well but those 2 lines I quoted were pretty good I enjoy the humorous punches.....overalll aight battle i would've like ya both to drop more but wateva aight but expected better since both have been here in LLL for a while....but aight battle no hate v/cry for having more sting in his punches
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
tim -
He is one half of the FL finals, how Cry got there is still a little blurry
To us it will stay a mystery, who held there team up the entire tourney
- heh feeln it.
What happened to Cry? His SS and LLL stats are hurting, it’s sad to see
So ill catch him with a surprise, on account of him falling off so badly
- str8.
Used to be creative and witty, but with the ladies there’s a change look.
When Cry comes off the wall, it’s for his comments to girls on Facebook
- almost.
Cry’s the nostalgia type, picked on in high school for being a nerdy gay
When punches land flush on his face, it reminds him of the swirly days
- lolol so corny but it worked.
His sound click page hasn’t changed a bit, its still wack in all its nature
This pussies coming so forced, I keep mistaking it for an induced labor
- nahh.
Cry walks around RB with a chip on his should, it’s kinda silly to see
Id love to break him down to sighs, but his boring topicals did it for me
- ehhh .. reachn.
vs
cry -
with text & topical.. I'm rockin' both, while spittin' nothing undercover
we could look for the fine line between 'em -- but Tims an ugly motherfucker
- decent.
sure people change, even dudes thinkin' this clown ass rapper is dope
for instance, I said sure when you asked if 12's good.. now my answer is no
- heh aight.
& Tim... just stick to work, whatever's protrudin from ya cubicle's novice
I can't take a rapper seriously, when all I can imagine is a dude from The Office
- prolly woulda been better in a pic battle lol.
and bitch, get eaten.. 'cause we're already past cooking a verse
you're on that swagger I wouldn't touch if you were the last pussy on earth
- ehh.
since birth this fuck was hideous.. & it's like we knew somethin he didn't
but it's not hard to ignore eye gouging traits if you gruesome to begin with..
- old wp, at least to me.. flip was okish.
poor T.. the most laughable thought is that he drops before me
his balls NEVER dropped... closest he gets to solo will be on the 14th
- ehh maybe.
one of the closer/better battles so far. both u guys were up n down, no real consistency. all in all though, i gotta edge it to Tim, for havin like 2 more lines that i was feelin. you guys were pretty damn even in the rest of the categories. wit, execution, wording, etc. i just felt tim had a few more solid hits. was close tho. gl.
v. tim
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