rupture -
Against me you'll crumble & have your face filled in
My verse is a tower of strength.. yours resembles Haiti's buildings
- this concepts gettn beat to death.
This big headed faggot is gonna get crushed with clout
Only hard labor you've had is when your moms cunt pushed you out
- bleh. decent concept i guess.
Fuck his topicals all of that shit is foul & corny
The only moving story he can tell is when his GF kicked him out, for me
- heh.
Fuck G, He's never got guns & i'm on fire & blazin
Whats wordz shootin? you'd only Seychelles talkin about the Island nation
- hmmm decent.
In scrappin you won't find much worse than this geek
1 punch'll make his Backdrop on the floor like Artwork in the street
- nah
Joins every league, that usertitle shows your a joke more
Change it to: ROFL @ this nigga who only won a RB 1-2 belt since 04
- pretty forced. humor angle didnt hit.
You got no rep here, who you ever been rippin son
Forget RB's golden boy, wordz is just the kid everyone pisses on
- aight flip..
Won't go mainstream or top 10, I can back my facts lame
Your songs'd be so Uncharted they could be the soundtrack for that game
- coo
Quit this shit, all your bars have us annoyed worse
Just take the advice of what you write, cuz everythin is Avoid verse
- ehh ..
Forget champin, you verses are descending blackness
Only way your writing would Convey a belt is cuz it's never ending wackness
- didnt like it.
vs
wordzahgod -
My punches fly n bing.. ur ugly ass chick looks like that guy, Sting
N' she's the most beastly of them all.. cementing ur status as the lion king.
- ehhhh
Stop dropping played shit.. Im breakin down n pleading ya
cos we'll ALL be battling TimeMage.. in hopes one of his powers is amnesia.
- missed.
I see u plottin.. rubbin ur fingers together thinkin its Ru time
lookin for UK votes.. in hopes an accent n readin disorder'll help this dude rhyme.
- hmm maybe. wording made it a lil forced.
its become a fact to me that weak bars r a strain n hard to read
n ur verse is a tragedy.. or as the rest of us like the call it.. the Katrina version of RB
- didnt like.
ur bad habits haven't changed, my foot.. Im bout to break it into u
cos with all the confusions with sigs, urs just explains ur mating ritual.
- heh, better.
I run the local militia fam.. so my fist'll land right where ur mouth is
Dude claimin Army with his green barrette.. when all it does is match his purse and outfit
- coo
my flow is raugh nigga.. it won't take a genius to see this
while ur's is like water.. n apparently, the rest of us are Jesus. (seawalkin')
- (no)
20 lines is nothing, u lifeless bitch.. I do it in my sleep if u'd like me to
N I might just use that method, cos thats the only way Id have as much free time as u.
- ehhhhh reachn
so quit acting gay n being attracted to guys who lets u inside they're rooms
cos at this point, the closets being bolted shut.. n we're expecting u to run out of air soon.
- ??? nah.
My rep here is legendary.. ur's is about as high as an all male sex forum
n by now ive disrupt enough to shit on what little respect we had left for em
- bleh, sry.
kinda dissapointed in this one. was expecting alot better reads. maybe just off days from both. shit happens. anyways, this was pretty close nonetheless. i think both of em had 2 solid lines .. but what separated the winner, being Rup, for was was basically having less bad stuff, a little more polished verses concept and punch wise. seemed to me wordz was relying on jokes too much, and it kinda backfired. still was close tho, but i gotta edge it to Rup.
v. rupture