Y'all don't seem to like my style, I'm 3rd this month on another battle site withlike 40-15 record but u guys seem on another level poetry wise which I really find intriguing... I also did myself as more of a lyricist in songs n shit, and not battle but I enjoy the competition......
here's my 4th battle on this site, I think its dope lemme hear any and all tips or criticism ya got, thanks


Get this wanna be "harvey dent" up off rb before I leave him two-faced!
matta fact ill just call him "Anne Frank" cuz his bars are bitch & jew-laced!!
and go call "tarrantino" cuz this battle is inglorious bastards two-based!!
HT bout to be "more exposed than playboy" with his bitch made center-fold!
cuz my punches make all the voters call Webster's, new term for it..inter-polled!!
You're verse woudnt have tested my niece, since your verse is infested with fleece!
God said that by the powers vested in me I must make sure the cowards rested in peace!!!
If you think you're takin this win then ur "fucked in the head,"
like when you're pops touched you after you were tucked in the bed!!
even if you brought ur best u hear "T sucked" when they read!!!