Kinetic u need 2 links
Kinetic u need 2 links
Kinetic, all the way, B's finishing was just too weak
that was close
both had an okish flow
both need to elevate
there was nothign to quote
you both need to read the 1-2 punches figure out
what a set up is and how to deliver the punch
kid your verse was not better punch wise
but your attempts and trys seemed to be more consitant
no hate
my vote=kid
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes
Aye man this battle was okay.. dont think it was yall best work but it wasn't horrible to read thru real quick..
thatkidB- Your verse had fairly excellent short bar structure and flow.. therefore it was very easy to follow. That being said, tho your multis were good, the sting behind most of your punches this battle were non existent.. i felt the connection no doubt, cause the talent is evident, but the delivery either failed or the setups never gave the punches any back up and they just didn't connect with enough force.
Kinetic Theory- You came out swingin and that opening line is what you'd actually expect from a veteran text battler, with the ability to incorporate a personal and set up a punch in one line, but when the punch failed.. the rest followed. Most of your verse was too full of self glory to truly be called a battle verse, and the small hits you made weren't great so i lost interest kinda.. which of course isn't what you want to happen to a voter. Good intensity, but in text.. you need to focus on your opponent a bare minimum of 8 out of the ten bars, or theres just not enough material left for it to look like much more than a freestytle verse.
Best lines...
cause throw your numbers out the window, its a K.O.
ya ten's just a condiment I'm eating and spittin' out like mayo
^kinda ha ha i guess but much less of a hit than it appears, with a poor setup
v.s.
Last win was over CDB the votes cast me 0 to 3,
now THIS kid jockin me while i inflict the heat to defeat,
^from the looks of it you coulda takin this to a nasty personal punch, but after the partial setup your "punch" was more like some freestyle rhymes, and the total thing ended up looking like self glory..
So yeah I gotta V/ thatkidB for having a more polished battle verse.
Hit some of these up ya'll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...639/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...488/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...725/index.html
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Kinetic dq'd for no links
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