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    My Own State of Mind

    Hey long time and no posting on this forum, so I just felt like posting something new I just wrote. All of this is true, included all the shots too. Been a while since I wrote but just felt like writing something new, hope yall like it.

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    Verse 1

    Ya see I went to a private school, with all my people
    In the city god, school books beneath-a-steaple
    But I kept my skeletons hidden, inside-mah-locker
    Show it to the dean, be sure that its a shocker
    Like a collar we leashed wishin, I was deceased
    Livin inner city but learnin in a place that sold peace
    All was at cost though, we lost though
    Colosall, stacks of money in the office
    So where did it all go? My guess, it was the
    Greed the money and all the weed, I dealed in
    Bathroom buildings everyday, of the week
    How could I do that deed when I just said bye
    My mind is searching for trouble in a school state of mind

    Verse 2

    Thinkin bout all the crimes the kingpin I wanna be
    Copyin test answers, passin was a philosophy
    It bothered me though, I kept missin like a free throw
    Students just kept snitching abandonin our own people
    So i just kept down cops looked and then frowned
    Growin up latino but in a school where I was drowned
    In some-white-mess, I'd like to confess, I felt kinda different
    Something strange about me, I needed some assistance
    So I met up with blocks with straight in a parkin lot
    Theres where I was shot, three shots in different spots
    Laid for dead, this was written and this was said
    Woke up a week later cause a coma to the head
    Ignoring all the pain and just sold all the meds
    Getting the c.r.e.a.m., it was as it seems
    This cat was my bro since I was fourteen
    My friend blocks had left me so I just cried
    I think of misery...in my lifes state of mind
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    Re: My Own State of Mind

    It was alright...your flow could use some work though.

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    Re: My Own State of Mind

    Alright man, uppin for feedback

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    uppin for feedback...

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    Re: My Own State of Mind

    please, someone give me some feedback on this piece. uppin

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