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    $Back To The Money$ Extortion's Avatar
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    Child Resources

    Come with me young-ins
    safely cover plug-ins
    stretch the gate
    for the stairs to compensate
    this is a safety zone
    i shall provide a safeness home
    provisions of accidents
    fires because matches lit
    i wish thy neighbor wasnt so dense
    dents in the car, football over fence
    cautious by all means
    i'm leary of mints not fresh, not clean
    in good hands i deem
    kids must play even when not seen
    bring on the health department
    house cleaner than a spotless martian
    green in the mind, other forces among
    outter space is near just years for fun
    graduated the adoption course mode
    although kids hard to follow like backwards morse code
    in my life, this brings on A new dynasty
    white with chinese kids bring on the rap-in-these (rapinese=chinese)


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    Re: Child Resources

    eh, it wasn't terrible.i mean I've seen worse. this just didn't have flow and felt like you where just rhyming. nice use of multi's but you really need to work on your flow. just keep it up though man.

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    Re: Child Resources

    Decent, but wasn't really feeling it. Keep working at it.

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    thanks man

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