Natural Dizaster vs Mr DJ

[The Nav Man™]

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[Mr. DJ]

Aiight Checking In Dude
Got Work, So I'll Post Later On.

[The Nav Man™]

Radio [:0=0:] Killa

Dunno what 2 say bout ur crew, shudn’t be rappin…maybe the fiddle?
No radio killa, ^^title is u and Maf’s mouths open…dick in the middle..
DJ’s a wannabe athlete, so this “jockey/jock he” likes playin catcher..
Doesn't like pitchin cuz when he catches he loves the pain, and the stature!
Think you really mean for DJ to be dick jockey..I know you told nerds..
Heard u got a doctor note, read ALLERGIC TO PUSSY...in bold words!
Swear you are mentally dumb, you the opposite of Tommy Edison fool..
Closest you will ever get to a pussy or bein' a vet...pet medicine school!
Lonely face in the pic, abandoned n need friends so he employed two..
Only time you'll get laid…..gett’n dropped in the casket after I destroyed you!




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...265/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...296/index.html

[Mr. DJ]

Aiight I'm Done For The Day, Back I'm Gonna Key Up Something Aiight.

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[Mr. DJ]

lol bloodline sucks yo, this crew seems dope i dont know natural disaster much

^ ^
Dang Homie.
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Nice Avy, But If Thats Suppose To Display Your Skills? You Crossed The Line
You Think You Strike Hard? Dude You Dont Even Strike A Thought To Mind
Your Punches Are So Forced & Weak, Even Concepts Wont Befriend You
I Can Identify It Anywhere & Know Its ALL NATURAL
...........................................So Dont Blame It On Em's Crew
Your An Embarrassment, You A Champ? You Aint Dope, Ya Hope Expired
Cuz If We Ever Crown Nat King, Mr. Cole Would Roast You On An Open Fire
His Girl Likes My Swinger So Much, She Aint Push Him Aside, She Kicked Him
Cuz See She Said You Look Good Hung.........As A Damn Suicide Victim
I'd Murder You With A Punch & Take The Battery Charge, s'All It'll Cost This Wimp
Rough Him Up Bad Til N C Double A Like College Ball Players Assaulted Him

ez

[Mr. DJ]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=417928
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...376/index.html

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[The Nav Man™]

Up1

[The Nav Man™]

My god, up 2

[The Nav Man™]

upp

[KnowP]

rtf
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Dunno what 2 say bout ur crew, shudn’t be rappin…maybe the fiddle?
No radio killa, ^^title is u and Maf’s mouths open…dick in the middle..
DJ’s a wannabe athlete, so this “jockey/jock he” likes playin catcher..
Doesn't like pitchin cuz when he catches he loves the pain, and the stature!

vs

Nice Avy, But If Thats Suppose To Display Your Skills? You Crossed The Line
You Think You Strike Hard? Dude You Dont Even Strike A Thought To Mind
Your Punches Are So Forced & Weak, Even Concepts Wont Befriend You
I Can Identify It Anywhere & Know Its ALL NATURAL
...........................................So Dont Blame It On Em's Crew
I'd Murder You With A Punch & Take The Battery Charge, s'All It'll Cost This Wimp
Rough Him Up Bad Til N C Double A Like College Ball Players Assaulted Him

Nat, you gettin good dog. you started off strong and then had some played basic punches. nothing too hard after your first 2 bars.
DJ, good solid drop my nig. Your opener was fire and your closer will be recycled soon so big ups for that... lol. jk...

v/ dj

[Jæk]

Dunno what 2 say bout ur crew, shudn’t be rappin…maybe the fiddle?
No radio killa, ^^title is u and Maf’s mouths open…dick in the middle..
oooh nice a little forced but i lol'd^^
DJ’s a wannabe athlete, so this “jockey/jock he” likes playin catcher..
Doesn't like pitchin cuz when he catches he loves the pain, and the stature!
nice generic but a deec punch^^
Think you really mean for DJ to be dick jockey..I know you told nerds..
Heard u got a doctor note, read ALLERGIC TO PUSSY...in bold words!
haha flow is off feels forced but funny ass shit nice punch^^
Swear you are mentally dumb, you the opposite of Tommy Edison fool..
Closest you will ever get to a pussy or bein' a vet...pet medicine school!
haha nice rhyme scheme felt forced but funny^^
Lonely face in the pic, abandoned n need friends so he employed two..
Only time you'll get laid…..gett’n dropped in the casket after I destroyed you!
nice closer^^


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Nice Avy, But If Thats Suppose To Display Your Skills? You Crossed The Line
You Think You Strike Hard? Dude You Dont Even Strike A Thought To Mind
hahaha nice personl rhyme scheme deec punch^^
Your Punches Are So Forced & Weak, Even Concepts Wont Befriend You
I Can Identify It Anywhere & Know Its ALL NATURAL
...........................................So Dont Blame It On Em's Crew
forced set up was good^^
Your An Embarrassment, You A Champ? You Aint Dope, Ya Hope Expired
Cuz If We Ever Crown Nat King, Mr. Cole Would Roast You On An Open Fire
mehh so so good rhyme scheme^^
His Girl Likes My Swinger So Much, She Aint Push Him Aside, She Kicked Him
Cuz See She Said You Look Good Hung.........As A Damn Suicide Victim
hahaha nice generic but deec punch^^
I'd Murder You With A Punch & Take The Battery Charge, s'All It'll Cost This Wimp
Rough Him Up Bad Til N C Double A Like College Ball Players Assaulted Him
haha nice and generic but a weak closer^^

this was a very close battle i mean like bar for bar its 5-5
personals you were both even but when it comes down to the line
flow will get this one and Nat your flow was off big time
you have done so much better and you know it your lines felt forced
i mean you both had lines that felt forced but ND you just had
more so ima have to give this to DJ by liek half a point
no hate
my vote=DJ

[The Nav Man™]

Good shit DJ, nice verse. Up

[Black Hornet]

alright..this was a decent battle...both of you had your ups and downs, but i thought DJ came with a more direct verse. Dj had some drag-on setups that seemed too long, but made up for it in the punch. ND had a few misses with a coupla played concepts, but delivered a few nice jabs in this bout. It was even in shots but DJ edged this one out with better flow. both of you had nice multies.

[Genocide]

Dunno what 2 say bout ur crew, shudn’t be rappin…maybe the fiddle?
No radio killa, ^^title is u and Maf’s mouths open…dick in the middle..
this was gay as fuck, but funny as hell considering it really does look like that
DJ’s a wannabe athlete, so this “jockey/jock he” likes playin catcher..
Doesn't like pitchin cuz when he catches he loves the pain, and the stature!
not at all man
Think you really mean for DJ to be dick jockey..I know you told nerds..
Heard u got a doctor note, read ALLERGIC TO PUSSY...in bold words!
no
Swear you are mentally dumb, you the opposite of Tommy Edison fool..
Closest you will ever get to a pussy or bein' a vet...pet medicine school!
nope
Lonely face in the pic, abandoned n need friends so he employed two..
Only time you'll get laid…..gett’n dropped in the casket after I destroyed you!
this was better, cool



Nice Avy, But If Thats Suppose To Display Your Skills? You Crossed The Line
You Think You Strike Hard? Dude You Dont Even Strike A Thought To Mind
lol, ok.. this was funny, not as funny as his opener tho
Your Punches Are So Forced & Weak, Even Concepts Wont Befriend You
I Can Identify It Anywhere & Know Its ALL NATURAL
...........................................So Dont Blame It On Em's Crew
this was worded and stretched out to badly
Your An Embarrassment, You A Champ? You Aint Dope, Ya Hope Expired
Cuz If We Ever Crown Nat King, Mr. Cole Would Roast You On An Open Fire
this was a cool play
His Girl Likes My Swinger So Much, She Aint Push Him Aside, She Kicked Him
Cuz See She Said You Look Good Hung.........As A Damn Suicide Victim
lmao, yeah -this was cool to
I'd Murder You With A Punch & Take The Battery Charge, s'All It'll Cost This Wimp
Rough Him Up Bad Til N C Double A Like College Ball Players Assaulted Him
lost me with this one ???

gotta vote mr dj.. just didnt like much of nats verse

v -mrdj

[A. Karp]

Your An Embarrassment, You A Champ? You Aint Dope, Ya Hope Expired
Cuz If We Ever Crown Nat King, Mr. Cole Would Roast You On An Open Fire
Nice Avy, But If Thats Suppose To Display Your Skills? You Crossed The Line
You Think You Strike Hard? Dude You Dont Even Strike A Thought To Mind

vs

Lonely face in the pic, abandoned n need friends so he employed two..
Only time you'll get laid…..gett’n dropped in the casket after I destroyed you!


Both came weak...I've seen a lot better from DJ but overall he takes it with consistency
The nat king could of been dope if worded different I think. Overall Nat had a couple
ideas but didn't execute them well, wording fucked it up....DJ takes this

V/Mr. DJ