Bakkie Vs. Criticize

[Bakkie]

10 lines
No dickridin votes
No crew votes
Drop by tonight

consider this a check.

[Criticize]

how long do you need? if you are ready within the next 2 hours i will drop right after you,

if not will post when i wake up.
prefer to get this done within 2 hours though.

[Bakkie]

2 hours it is.

[Bakkie]

dawg i might be later drop if your ready

[Criticize]

dont think im racist but belittling this guy is a must,
battling a dude named after were we made his ancestors ride on the bus/
you must be drunk of warm pints 2 battle- a few beers solution,
coz in this match up your set to fail like new years resolutions
when im texting scrips crits flexing fists with incredible precision,
1 punch will fold you and make back-spasm like the medical condition
this english cat sits in his parents garage smoking bongs no job its clear that your trife,
when i pull out the 9 and i do a magic trick u will 'dissapear in a cloud of smoke' like the last 7 years of your life
there is more than 1 level between us bakkie? ur kidding; his a test?
my rhymes out-standing your more like meh... out-sitting at best


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7442870
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7442879

[Bakkie]

He's a failure that falls under the pressure when expectation starts, /
But he has no heart, just a faggot who fights with exclamation marks, /
A life without worth, just you and a computer at the end of the earth, /
Sorry to make it worse but your life should of ended at birth, /
My spit will hit your eyes, slice you down and split your sides, /
i'l take your faults and lies so there be nothing left to criticize, /
Your messing with the wrong cliq cat, i'll hit you with one slick cap, /
Homie your career like your sex life thats just one quick splat, /
Crit thats so whack what you wrote, your like a homosexual bag of coke, /
the only white stuff that gets used in a toilet and cums near a faggots nose, /


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...036/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...469/index.html

[Bakkie]

aiight come on peepz uppin 1

[Puncha Blurta]

cha, crit ur bars were stretched2 fuck an ur structure/rhyme scheme was lame
i hated ur opener an da rest of ur verse was all over da place
bak, u seemed2 b makin a few statements instead of throwin punches in places but all around ur verse was a lot stronga an u bought a couple quotables 2, it was ur openers:

He's a failure that falls under the pressure when expectation starts, /
But he has no heart, just a faggot who fights with exclamation marks, /
A life without worth, just you and a computer at the end of the earth, /
Sorry to make it worse but your life should of ended at birth, /

afta dat i think ur verse fell over a little but at least u didn't start on a bad note like crit did
no hate, gl closin dis

[Damz]

dont think im racist but belittling this guy is a must,
battling a dude named after were we made his ancestors ride on the bus/
No offense, Gay.
you must be drunk of warm pints 2 battle- a few beers solution,
coz in this match up your set to fail like new years resolutions
Ha. Could of completely called this
when im texting scrips crits flexing fists with incredible precision,
1 punch will fold you and make back-spasm like the medical condition
This was worded with nonsense
this english cat sits in his parents garage smoking bongs no job its clear that your trife,
when i pull out the 9 and i do a magic trick u will 'dissapear in a cloud of smoke' like the last 7 years of your life
ok this was stretched but went hard
there is more than 1 level between us bakkie? ur kidding; his a test?
my rhymes out-standing your more like meh... out-sitting at best
Weak

He's a failure that falls under the pressure when expectation starts, /
But he has no heart, just a faggot who fights with exclamation marks, /
A life without worth, just you and a computer at the end of the earth, /
Sorry to make it worse but your life should of ended at birth, /
Hahaha , Gettum
My spit will hit your eyes, slice you down and split your sides, /
i'l take your faults and lies so there be nothing left to criticize, /
GEttum.
Your messing with the wrong cliq cat, i'll hit you with one slick cap, /
Homie your career like your sex life thats just one quick splat, /
Ok, not as hard.
Crit thats so whack what you wrote, your like a homosexual bag of coke, /
the only white stuff that gets used in a toilet and cums near a faggots nose, /
Haha.

V/Bakkie

[Bakkie]

thanks for the votes 2-0 still uppin'

[Verbal Hologram]

dont think im racist but belittling this guy is a must,
battling a dude named after were we made his ancestors ride on the bus/
alright
you must be drunk of warm pints 2 battle- a few beers solution,
coz in this match up your set to fail like new years resolutions
weakish
when im texting scrips crits flexing fists with incredible precision,
1 punch will fold you and make back-spasm like the medical condition
na fam
this english cat sits in his parents garage smoking bongs no job its clear that your trife,
when i pull out the 9 and i do a magic trick u will 'dissapear in a cloud of smoke' like the last 7 years of your life
wasn't feeling it, too stretched
there is more than 1 level between us bakkie? ur kidding; his a test?
my rhymes out-standing your more like meh... out-sitting at best
should of had a better closer

vs

He's a failure that falls under the pressure when expectation starts, /
But he has no heart, just a faggot who fights with exclamation marks, /
ehh
A life without worth, just you and a computer at the end of the earth, /
Sorry to make it worse but your life should of ended at birth, /
seen it before..
My spit will hit your eyes, slice you down and split your sides, /
i'l take your faults and lies so there be nothing left to criticize, /
ok
Your messing with the wrong cliq cat, i'll hit you with one slick cap, /
Homie your career like your sex life thats just one quick splat, /
wasn't feeling it
Crit thats so whack what you wrote, your like a homosexual bag of coke, /
the only white stuff that gets used in a toilet and cums near a faggots nose, /
gay concepts are kinda played fam

V/Bakkie

RTF

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...091/index.html

[Bakkie]

aiight still uppin'

[Criticize]

lol uhm this cant be serious

[Bakkie]

looks like it is...cumon peeps still uppin'

[Marv.J]

dont think im racist but belittling this guy is a must,
battling a dude named after were we made his ancestors ride on the bus/
you must be drunk of warm pints 2 battle- a few beers solution,
coz in this match up your set to fail like new years resolutions

vs

A life without worth, just you and a computer at the end of the earth, /
Sorry to make it worse but your life should of ended at birth, /
My spit will hit your eyes, slice you down and split your sides, /
i'l take your faults and lies so there be nothing left to criticize, /


this was basically a tie but of you had to decent bar's the rest was ass...so ima vote on which verse i like'd more n hit harder

v/bakkie

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...084/index.html
^^^hit it