Thanks to : Damz and Illmatic for the tips... i think this one i improved a lot way more then my others
Beat Used :
(How Did This Happen!)
from growin up strong... to now barley withstand
from walkin with a baseball... to now with drugs in my hand
from a straight cap...to now with a hood on my head
from rich kids... to now rarely able to be fed
from clear white eyes... to now a dazed,bloodshot red
from happy celebrations... to now my friends being dead
from a broken guitar... to now my gun being jammed
from snitchin on kids... to now myself being canned
from growin up with high expatiations... to now just low
from growin up with great talent... to now just let it go
(How Did This Happen!)
"Livin"... it was was fun... but now i just hate
"Wishin... it was done.... and i could just take
"Killin" every mistake... that i just keep having to make
because what i did then... has now made god send
whatever he can... to take my life quickly to an end
because a test with a set of rules he had strickly givin me
but i disobeyed them so this pain will forever livin me
he took away all my relief and left me with nothin but grief
and in me he has no belief... so now i just pray for him to forgive
and if he doesnt care to do anythin.. than for myself ill mak sure to outlive
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