black_hornet vs hawgcity

[Black Hornet]

10 lines due in 24 hours..must check within 30 minutes of this post...
no editing your verse after you post...drop your two links...

[Black Hornet]

check
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=417306

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=417279

[hawgcity]

check

[hawgcity]

music is my kitchen i can cook any beef like you want it yes
the ovens hot the fires on you dont want it with the iron chef
i picasso the streets yet i michelangelo any kind of beat
this pretty pistol ugly when it bust thats beauty and the beast

i aint ate in a couple days so my reply to your challenge was pretty quick
right now you beatin round the bush like you jackin off our former president
i would diss the name but you already did that when you decided too use it
an imaginary superhero hmmmm...somebodies parents were abusive

i read your last battle hornball you aint a freestylist or raw
the only time you spit out the mouth off the head is when you give niggas a blowjob.....



-only the strong and the hard may call themselves spartans-

Grayk7an Spartan

[hawgcity]

still tryin to think of somethin huh? lol!!!!

[hawgcity]

dont this mean i like win by default or somethin?

[Black Hornet]

hawgwild.....



i'll steal the win from you like Ali Baba and the forty thievs,
stick a fork in him, hawgs done like disney and Porky the Pig,
Im the Khan, You cant climb the Steppes n defeat my empire,
i'll raze and burn City like the mongols plus London's great fire.
only you n fags can follow your lame punches home-O
since you stalk them....like shelves full of corny beef jokes,
your word play was slutty you laced them with bras and panties,
your and old fuck with flows like havin minage trois with grannies,
youve got worthless goods, like zimbabwe cash it dont matter,
i'll serve up some wild hawg on decorated shiskabob platters,

[Mr. DJ]

music is my kitchen i can cook any beef like you want it yes
the ovens hot the fires on you dont want it with the iron chef
This Bar Had Potential, Wording Failed You As Well As The 2nd Bar Too..

vs

Im the Khan, You cant climb the Steppes n defeat my empire,
i'll raze and burn City like the mongols plus London's great fire.
youve got worthless goods, like zimbabwe cash it dont matter,
i'll serve up some wild hawg on decorated shiskabob platters,

BH I Dont Know If You Were In A Rush Or What But Your Verse Was Lacking Sting Homie. I've Seen Better From You, You Just Threw Some Shit Together In Hopes Of Making Hits. Some Were Light Jabs With Your Nameplay. It Was Honestly Enough Since Your Opponent Lacked Every Concept Category. One-Sided Obviously.

v/ Black
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RTF On This Battle

[Black Hornet]

uppin 1

[4-Knuckles]

music is my kitchen i can cook any beef like you want it yes
the ovens hot the fires on you dont want it with the iron chef///concept was there just need to expand on your punches.

i picasso the streets yet i michelangelo any kind of beat
this pretty pistol ugly when it bust thats beauty and the beast//same idea

your word play was slutty you laced them with bras and panties,
your and old fuck with flows like havin minage trois with grannies,
youve got worthless goods, like zimbabwe cash it dont matter,
i'll serve up some wild hawg on decorated shiskabob platters///personally i think these are shitty battles

clearly one sidded here you both need work

vs

i'll steal the win from you like Ali Baba and the forty thievs,
stick a fork in him, hawgs done like disney and Porky the Pig,
Im the Khan, You cant climb the Steppes n defeat my empire,
i'll raze and burn City like the mongols plus London's great fire.
///look like you need work too

[A. Karp]

Very weak battle, no hate

Black, you had to many LIKE punches....Stalk/stock wasn't working for me

youve got worthless goods, like zimbabwe cash it dont matter,
i'll serve up some wild hawg on decorated shiskabob platters,

that line was okay

Hawg, like DJ said the Iron chef concept was cool if you worded it better
Overall ya verse was lackin the punches and just didn't have the creativity
Keep working on it

V/Black, better punches

[Jæk]

music is my kitchen i can cook any beef like you want it yes
the ovens hot the fires on you dont want it with the iron chef
i picasso the streets yet i michelangelo any kind of beat
this pretty pistol ugly when it bust thats beauty and the beast
this is hella cool....... as a freestyle not a text battle^^

i aint ate in a couple days so my reply to your challenge was pretty quick
right now you beatin round the bush like you jackin off our former president
i would diss the name but you already did that when you decided too use it
an imaginary superhero hmmmm...somebodies parents were abusive
lol al ittle better now that your punchin^^

i read your last battle hornball you aint a freestylist or raw
the only time you spit out the mouth off the head is when you give niggas a blowjob.....
nice that was fire^^


i'll steal the win from you like Ali Baba and the forty thievs,
stick a fork in him, hawgs done like disney and Porky the Pig,
lol soft but clownin^^
Im the Khan, You cant climb the Steppes n defeat my empire,
i'll raze and burn City like the mongols plus London's great fire.
mehh^^
only you n fags can follow your lame punches home-O
since you stalk them....like shelves full of corny beef jokes,
haha i love corn beef^^
your word play was slutty you laced them with bras and panties,
your and old fuck with flows like havin minage trois with grannies,
nice^^
youve got worthless goods, like zimbabwe cash it dont matter,
i'll serve up some wild hawg on decorated shiskabob platters,
nice closer good concepts^^


this battle was weak from both sides
i was dissapointed to see BH drop so weak
usually you come with good stuff
hawg you need to use your multies and concepts but punch harder adn you could
be a real force bro read some battles get that idea down elevate
and BH quit slackin bro i know yhou got better
stil lno hate it was enough to win
my vote=BH

[slushcurser]

naw to be honest you guys i don't really agree with any of ya, hawg was punching with all of these bars:

i aint ate in a couple days so my reply to your challenge was pretty quick
right now you beatin round the bush like you jackin off our former president
i would diss the name but you already did that when you decided too use it
an imaginary superhero hmmmm...somebodies parents were abusive

i read your last battle hornball you aint a freestylist or raw
the only time you spit out the mouth off the head is when you give niggas a blowjob.....

that's everything except his opening two and the imaginary superhero line was pretty tight, the bush line was lacking but still, not too bad. a healthy portion of his verse huh

BH... you fucked up bad tho bro

i'll steal the win from you like Ali Baba and the forty thievs,
stick a fork in him, hawgs done like disney and Porky the Pig,

Porky Pig was a WARNER BRO's character duh.. do ya research, go watch some cartoons! lol

even though blacks verse was rushed as fuck and had a few slip ups, bar for bar he was bringing punches every time which is what counts i guess so he's gotta get the vote.. i've seen you bring much harder verses than this tho tbh man, hawg if you'd punched every bar instead wasting your openers on self hype you woulda took this

[Possible]

Black Hornet wins