.Mime. -VS- Yungdosia

[YungDosia]

12 Lines..

Due In 2 Hrs After Both Check In. This Will Be Mine.

g/l kiddo

[YungDosia]

Oh yeah my bad....Take ya time pre writer to check in, dont matter to me how much u think of material.. 2 hrs will start when u check in

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...523/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...427/index.html

[Mimic]

Seen.

[Mimic]

Im guessing voters knew tht u'd lose, even all ur family wouldn't see u through,
Y just further proves..
..tht even ur reletives are ashamed to appear on the same family tree as you!
So, watch me absoloutly beat on this herb, n we can all tell by the way you dribble,
fag has something to get off his chest... but only after treble's finished nibbling his nipple!

Originally Posted by TheRealSlimShady
YungDosia had some nice lyrics
i think alien went harder though
but imma give this 1 to YungDosia

'N' whoever told you to call me out, i suggest you claim for better advice dude,
Cuz, evidence proves ur chances are realslim.. considerin he's ur only dickrider tht'll vote for u!
If you were on the same level as me, trust you'll be the only dunce of the class,
I could come with a whole lot of per$onals, ...but u showed it only took one to kick ur ass!
By now you should of realised ur useless, 'N' theres not much point for you too fight,
So you could say we are all routing for ya'... in hope you get lost before u find this site!
Reffer me to as Wizard the way my verse seems magical N how it'll make u wonder,
Cuz, i just exposed that u don't need to be an aussie... to bury bitch's down under!

[YungDosia]

Look…You really aint shit! you aint no vet and im gonna put you in my signature after this battle bitch!




You talk a lot of hard shit boy.. but my punches'll have ya mouth all torn..
Becuz i guarantee Mime has no stripes where he is.. Less he bout to perform..!!
Really what vets have u beatin?...make a list...send it back my way..
Bet This nigga still wont have any Diss count on it.. Even on black friday..!!
Wish i was def when u talked..keep fuckn wit me im the best u is not..
And all those games and 'Tricks' Mime pullin.. Gon' really have him Left in a box..!!!
All ya bars are stretched…watch him vote on ya battle then say RTF..
This nigga straight pussy…and only time he ridin dirty’s when his cars a mess..!!!
I said ya lines and rhymes all played and its true really tho...
Cuz His Bars are like patches on jeans… he needs new material..!!!
And did u ever wonder what the dots were for?...im getting serious bastard..
Itz cuz my punches leave this pussy bleeding when I wreck his name…so he gonna period after!!!

[Mimic]

Lol, at your shit talk before that shitty verse..

Up'N^

[YungDosia]

LOl @ your sway^^...and ur shitty verse

[Mimic]

Upsy Daisy....

[ALIEN]

'N' whoever told you to call me out, i suggest you claim for better advice dude,
Cuz, evidence proves ur chances are realslim.. considerin he's ur only dickrider tht'll vote for u!

vs

You talk a lot of hard shit boy.. but my punches'll have ya mouth all torn..
Becuz i guarantee Mime has no stripes where he is.. Less he bout to perform..!!
Wish i was def when u talked..keep fuckn wit me im the best u is not..
And all those games and 'Tricks' Mime pullin.. Gon' really have him Left in a box..!!!

Both had some played stuff. YD had the discount/diss count & a period line, Mime had the Down Under line and lotta name dropping, not a fan of most of it but was a cool battle for sure. I seen the mime in a box shit, but I like the way Dosia presented it. I feel like YD upped his flow on this one, multis were on point for the most part, and just made a better effort to come direct. lmfao @ Mimes quote line though. But yea, i think YD was just a tad more consistent, could go either way though, wouldnt be surprised.

Vote - YD

RTF in the champ match u schmucks

[Alyse Miller]

YoungDoisa
You talk a lot of hard shit boy.. but my punches'll have ya mouth all torn..
Becuz i guarantee Mime has no stripes where he is.. Less he bout to perform..!!
this was flipped ok but played
Really what vets have u beatin?...make a list...send it back my way..
Bet This nigga still wont have any Diss count on it.. Even on black friday..!!
ok
Wish i was def when u talked..keep fuckn wit me im the best u is not..
And all those games and 'Tricks' Mime pullin.. Gon' really have him Left in a box..!!!
again i like how you flipped it
All ya bars are stretched…watch him vote on ya battle then say RTF..
This nigga straight pussy…and only time he ridin dirty’s when his cars a mess..!!!
meh
I said ya lines and rhymes all played and its true really tho...
Cuz His Bars are like patches on jeans… he needs new material..!!!
i liked this
And did u ever wonder what the dots were for?...im getting serious bastard..
Itz cuz my punches leave this pussy bleeding when I wreck his name…so he gonna period after!!!
meh closer




Mime
Im guessing voters knew tht u'd lose, even all ur family wouldn't see u through,
Y just further proves..
..tht even ur reletives are ashamed to appear on the same family tree as you!
i liked this
So, watch me absoloutly beat on this herb, n we can all tell by the way you
dribble,
fag has something to get off his chest... but only after treble's finished nibbling his nipple!
Lol this was funny
'N' whoever told you to call me out, i suggest you claim for better advice dude,
Cuz, evidence proves ur chances are realslim.. considerin he's ur only dickrider tht'll vote for u!
no
If you were on the same level as me, trust you'll be the only dunce of the class,
I could come with a whole lot of per$onals, ...but u showed it only took one to kick ur ass!
meh not really
By now you should of realised ur useless, 'N' theres not much point for you too fight,
So you could say we are all routing for ya'... in hope you get lost before u find this site!
meh
Reffer me to as Wizard the way my verse seems magical N how it'll make u wonder,
Cuz, i just exposed that u don't need to be an aussie... to bury bitch's down under!
meh closer i didnt like this




overrall i expected alot of heat from both considering this was a lil beef match doisa i liked how you flipped played concepts an your set ups are good jus need a lil more sting an you had some played shit here an there but nothing that mojor stood out from both mime you had some played shit but it wasnt that bad either but i went off who was more consistant an i felt Doia came more consitant but either way it can go then again i did expect to read some good funny shit but i guess you guys took it easy on each other thinking it was a push over but ok battle

vote doisea

[slushcurser]

enjoyed reading this battle, but i really don't have a lot to say about it. what swung it for me was mimes opener:

Im guessing voters knew tht u'd lose, even all ur family wouldn't see u through,
Y just further proves..
..tht even ur reletives are ashamed to appear on the same family tree as you!

yeah this is slightly stretched and could have probably been worded better
but the Y as a family tree with no leaves? that is what you meant right? that was dope. I been reading a lot of close battles lately, and this is another one where I can't help but say that I think this'll go either way depending on who votes.

other highlights from mime were these 2 bars

'N' whoever told you to call me out, i suggest you claim for better advice dude,
Cuz, evidence proves ur chances are realslim.. considerin he's ur only dickrider tht'll vote for u!
If you were on the same level as me, trust you'll be the only dunce of the class,
I could come with a whole lot of per$onals, ...but u showed it only took one to kick ur ass!

again, mime i never really like how stretched your lines usually seem.. but even though they seem stretched you deliver them pretty well.

Yung, you had these bars i liked:

All ya bars are stretched…watch him vote on ya battle then say RTF..
This nigga straight pussy…and only time he ridin dirty’s when his cars a mess..!!!
I said ya lines and rhymes all played and its true really tho...
Cuz His Bars are like patches on jeans… he needs new material..!!!
And did u ever wonder what the dots were for?...im getting serious bastard..
Itz cuz my punches leave this pussy bleeding when I wreck his name…so he gonna period after!!!

problem with the closer was i read a period bar against mime earlier on today. the jeans and the car lines were fine, but they were still missing the fire that you needed to win this one.

good luck to both of you on this one, votes going to mime

[Mimic]

Thanks, Up'N^

[Mimic]

Btw Slush, thats waht i meant for my opener mate

[Mafioso.]

'N' whoever told you to call me out, i suggest you claim for better advice dude,
Cuz, evidence proves ur chances are realslim.. considerin he's ur only dickrider tht'll vote for u!
If you were on the same level as me, trust you'll be the only dunce of the class,
I could come with a whole lot of per$onals, ...but u showed it only took one to kick ur ass!


....vs

You talk a lot of hard shit boy.. but my punches'll have ya mouth all torn..
Becuz i guarantee Mime has no stripes where he is.. Less he bout to perform..!!
Really what vets have u beatin?...make a list...send it back my way..
Bet This nigga still wont have any Diss count on it.. Even on black friday..!!

aight pretty close battle i though mime woulod take this easy but i was wrong young u had some witty bars that stripe lines was a nice creative personal....mime u had sum aight lines as well but i felt like u couldve done a lil better, both couldve been more consistant to me..YD if u had one more creative line u wouldve had this...jus work on being more consistant and wording ya lines better i defiently see that your elavating...overall close battle but i felt mime was more creative...no hate

ya hit up one of my battles honestly plz

[Mimic]

Thanks, Up'N^