User Tag List

Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Showing results 1 to 15 of 22

Thread: Productions and Topicals.

  1. #1
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Productions and Topicals.

    I'll take one for both...

    That is all..

    -XM
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  2. #2
    You've Earned a Custom Title! iLLin L's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    T-Dot
    Posts
    250
    Battle Record
    4-4

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Can you help me out with topicals? Thanks.

  3. #3
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    sure drop a link to ur latest and I shall evaluate from there
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  4. #4
    You've Earned a Custom Title! iLLin L's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    T-Dot
    Posts
    250
    Battle Record
    4-4

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Been working on this one for a couple days. This pieces inspiration was this

    I don’t get it anymore, the world done change
    Hip hops on a different scale, different range
    Government telling us what we can’t write
    New generation rappers take credit for shit they bite
    Where the skilled emcees at? Keep hip hop alive
    Back then they were rapping just to survive
    It’s a business now, where the talent at?
    I ain’t hating but how we got soulja boy at bat?
    Hip hops all about who the best entrepreneur?
    Just to sell a record the pain we gotta endure
    Are we doing the right thing? Spike Lee
    Got cops attacking, why they wanna fight me?
    The youth right, who else is to blame?
    Aren’t we the main reason rappers got fame?
    Politicians blame, fuck it they all the same
    I’m painting you a picture inside the frame

    Chorus:
    Hip Hop done change.. x1

    Verse 2:

    They rap about partying, money fame and bitches
    When real rappers don’t care if they got a mil in riches
    It’s the only time where we can let loose
    Let emotions become the rhymes that we choose
    Big L, Papoose, Biggie, 2pac,
    Now they rhyming about the Jin they pop
    The rap industry been altered since when we going to church
    Before you say I’m wrong at least do some research
    Change does come over time, I have to agree
    But the rappers that produce lines, it’s nothing but debris
    It’s like ’79 was a ship, crash landed into hell
    Old rappers dipped, fake rappers overtook like a cancer cell


    and I got another piece I been working on, I'm trying out a different rhyme scheme in this one..
    Lemme tell you about a girl, with the perfect frame
    Way out of my league, so this was the game
    She had blue eyes, the Caribbean cannot describe
    The way her blond hair would add to that vibe
    Compliments never said, she thought chivalry was dead
    I told her that I liked her and she said "go ahead"
    Now this girl had a friend who I dated
    Should I stay or leave for her I contemplated

  5. #5
    You've Earned a Custom Title! iLLin L's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    T-Dot
    Posts
    250
    Battle Record
    4-4

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    XM, my msn.
    leonlev1@hotmail.com hit me up.

  6. #6
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Ok I can already tell what type of writer you are. You have an audio sense like me, you're just undeveloped when it comes down to it. It'll just come off basic. Your vocabulary need some serious work. But this isn't an actual topic it's just lyrics to a song your writing.

    I can help you write better songs through topicals and I think that is what you're really looking for.

    I have a thread stickie called Topical and Text 101 read it.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  7. #7
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  8. #8
    You've Earned a Custom Title! iLLin L's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    T-Dot
    Posts
    250
    Battle Record
    4-4

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Haha that's kind of true. I'm more of an audio person. I'll check out your topic, and yeah, I'd like to write better songs in topicals.

  9. #9
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Sorry Holiday's if you would like to continue just let me know.

    I will need you to take an SS topic and write 22-60 lines. Let me know your topic and i'll do the same. I start with creativity and show you the difference between a predictable approach and a clever one that draws the readers in.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  10. #10
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Sunderland
    Posts
    59

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Verse 1 Got a girl in the fucking trunk, She has tasted my spunk, Now the fucking trunk is smelling like a skunk, She should never went with that punk who she thought was a hunk, I'm driving the car down quiet lane, She has caused me too much pain
    Last edited by MC Ghosty; January 4th, 2010 at 02:44 PM

  11. #11
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Don't post in here again.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  12. #12
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Sunderland
    Posts
    59

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Can i ask you why? Did offend you?

  13. #13
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    I can tell by your username you chose alone that you actually progressing will be unlikely. You have 2 post and the likelihood of your activity is questionable. If you really wanted help you would have asked instead of just dropping a random writing built around a style already done.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

  14. #14
    You've Earned a Custom Title!
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Sunderland
    Posts
    59

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    When has this style been done, if your thinking that i am copying off Eminem, this is my own stuff.

  15. #15
    Expression Is Everything XM's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2003
    Location
    Virginia
    Posts
    15,092
    Battle Record
    45-8
    Awards Legendary Audio ABL Champion BOTW AOTM AOTW Legendary Member - Award Request Accepted

    Re: Productions and Topicals.

    Quote Originally Posted by $LIM $H&DY View Post
    Verse 1 Got a girl in the fucking trunk, She has tasted my spunk, Now the fucking trunk is smelling like a skunk, She should never went with that punk who she thought was a hunk, I'm driving the car down quiet lane, She has caused me too much pain
    This whole concept of killing a female for being with another dude was off the song Kim done by Eminem...

    ..the concept itself is played and a typical start with somebody using that name. Perception is everything, it's never what it is but what it looks like.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
    Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
    Stress oceans try to drown me
    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

Similar Threads

  1. Topicals?
    By NewlyBorn in forum Bitch Slap!
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: May 15th, 2011, 07:27 AM
  2. The Topicals.
    By Astronomical in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: February 17th, 2011, 09:15 PM
  3. --Need Topicals--
    By Relli_Mak in forum Closed Battles
    Replies: 24
    Last Post: May 6th, 2007, 03:07 PM
  4. Topicals pt 3
    By Loggix in forum Resolved Issues
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: June 24th, 2003, 11:24 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •