hovaflow VS. RapAttack

[Uncle Sam]

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10 lines due 24hrs. discussed in PM at 10pm

[Uncle Sam]

RapAttack VS HovaFlow
Hova flow you aint never beating me in your whole fuckin life.
Naw not even if you found me with my throbbing ass dick in your flirty ass wife.
Rap Attack is winnin this, everybody witness this wicked shit as I’m blessin the mic
After I’m done spittin,this, imma put this pen down, pick up a knife and end your nerdy ass life.
You always disappoint with your rhymes like bad economic times poor ass ppl pinchin dimes
I’m good I make folks say “oh shit!“ like sticky green chronic the color of limes
I’ll make you take your last step and make sure you never come back like a cured alcoholic
I get my money fast as hell like usein bol, runnin shit like sonic, you’re a fat ass into electronics like doctor robotnic,
Your rhymes are so simplistic, my rhymes are horrific, they’ll reach out of the computer screen grab your neck and twist it
This fool is going down yeah he’s a professional sucka, leaned from your girl? Fucka you musta cuz her head go down faster then a late night trucka

[Jæk]

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[Your Sperm Doner]

How you gone post a thread, saying drop in 24 hours...

...Then two minutes later, drop 10?

[Jæk]

How you gone post a thread, saying drop in 24 hours...

...Then two minutes later, drop 10?

because he's super whack^^
hov will show him how a rapattack an leave you in a cardiac
its skills you lack fuck a gun a snack is all you ever pack
doggie style is the only time your hommies got your back
as far as what you spit i hope you wasnt countin on that pre writ
i could chew you up and even in my guts you couldnt be shit
im on a free spit you love to read it soakin up what we did
im with his mom he states he banged my chick haha so be it
one last thing i hope you know your post was plain ubsord
you'll see me on the ophra show "first man to kill with words"

quick ten

[Uncle Sam]

Props homie! Luck to ya
Ight well uppin votes please n thanks
and to the other young man up there askin how i can do that in 2 minutes... just like hova.. off the top that's why i don't like that much time limit on battles, but he set it like that in the PM he sent so whateve ya know

[Jæk]

uppin 1

[slushcurser]

Hova, you're taking my vote

RA, you're verse flowed and rhymed well but there wasn't anything that was aimed specifically at Hova, it was all generic and could have easily been shot at anybody, all filler essentially. No hate though bro, i mean it when i say it rhymed well and flowed good– just work on pointing your verse at your opponent. best bar of the match was probably...

because he's super whack^^
hov will show him how a rapattack an leave you in a cardiac

dead simple, but effective and followed nicely by your second bar

RA, a suggestion: try and squeeze your skills down, see if you can keep that flow and rhyme scheme but compact it into some shorter bars like the one I quoted from Hova

happy christmas guys, v/HOVA

[Jæk]

good vote fam, well explained^^

uppin

[Uncle Sam]

uppin 2

[Jæk]

Uppin

[Kindle]

Hova flow you aint never beating me in your whole fuckin life.
Naw not even if you found me with my throbbing ass dick in your flirty ass wife.
weak
Rap Attack is winnin this, everybody witness this wicked shit as I’m blessin the mic
After I’m done spittin,this, imma put this pen down, pick up a knife and end your nerdy ass life.
you don't have a pen, you have a keyboard. no punch.
You always disappoint with your rhymes like bad economic times poor ass ppl pinchin dimes
I’m good I make folks say “oh shit!“ like sticky green chronic the color of limes
no...
I’ll make you take your last step and make sure you never come back like a cured alcoholic
I get my money fast as hell like usein bol, runnin shit like sonic, you’re a fat ass into electronics like doctor robotnic
i run track so i gotta correct you... 'usain bolt,' pimpin. you had a punch, but it was hella weak
Your rhymes are so simplistic, my rhymes are horrific, they’ll reach out of the computer screen grab your neck and twist it
eh... punchless
This fool is going down yeah he’s a professional sucka, leaned from your girl? Fucka you musta cuz her head go down faster then a late night trucka
stretched... and not hard-hittin even though the punch was there


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because he's super whack^^
hov will show him how a rapattack an leave you in a cardiac
ight
its skills you lack fuck a gun a snack is all you ever pack
doggie style is the only time your hommies got your back
lol @ the setup
as far as what you spit i hope you wasnt countin on that pre writ
i could chew you up and even in my guts you couldnt be shit
played but okay
im on a free spit you love to read it soakin up what we did
im with his mom he states he banged my chick haha so be it
no punch
one last thing i hope you know your post was plain ubsord
you'll see me on the ophra show "first man to kill with words"
'absurd,' homie. and weak punch

v. hovaflow

more punchlines, better punchlines. flowed better and wasn't stretched like rapattack's. your flow was off, homie.

[Uncle Sam]

lol i forget it's all about punches here haha
Anyway uppin more votes please and thanks

[A. Karp]

its skills you lack fuck a gun a snack is all you ever pack
doggie style is the only time your hommies got your back

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nothing

Rap came too basic with his punches. Although they seemed like hard disses, this is text and you gotta be more creative. Hova had a couple decent lines and enough to take it

V/Hovaflow

[Uncle Sam]

lol like i said forgot here it's all about the punches... not really multies and wordplay.. atleast that's what gets you the votes.
Thanks i'll keep it in mind for all the rest of my battles now haha
Hova looks like your gonna get this
Uppin votes either way haha