YD408:
so vulgar he is, everytime he cusses he spits/
proclaiming he's sick, but when called to battle/
your structure is off 1/5
vulgar,,,, you just chose to sit/
take it from a pro, who keep you in suspense of what his next word will be/
0/5 bad flow
i'm HOT muthafucker, my words scorch bodies with BURNS in the 3rd degree/
tempurature intolerable, you couldn't stand me like mercury/
5/5 good metas
i can't believe u showed up to this battle/
is there a dr. around?, cuz after i defeat you/
blah 1/5
your ego will need surgery, real talk call for help/
young dee just caused your emergency!!
meh 2/5
ttl pts:9/25 bad flow dogg, just work on your verse lil betta,
vs
vulgar:
After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
5/5 good multi, opening imagery
Your battling a beast, he thought that wack shit would be okay
& confused when strong voter turn-out……and ran the other way
1/5
Your lines are horrible, so don’t even celebrate
& 408 is how many years it’s gonna take you to elevate
funny i thought 3/5
You’re all over my nuts cuz your not strong as this man
^^It’s a whole new ball game, I call it 'hang as long as you can'
lol 5/5
Rushing ya verse was foolish, and we have the proof
He’ll never be able to produce a good Kiwi…… can’t stand this fruit
could of been worded diff. 3/5
ttl pts: 17/25 multis, better punches
v/vulgar
