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YOUNGDEE408
Vulgar
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so vulgar he is, everytime he cusses he spits/
proclaiming he's sick, but when called to battle/
vulgar,,,, you just chose to sit/
take it from a pro, who keep you in suspense of what his next word will be/
i'm HOT muthafucker, my words scorch bodies with BURNS in the 3rd degree/
tempurature intolerable, you couldn't stand me like mercury/
i can't believe u showed up to this battle/
is there a dr. around?, cuz after i defeat you/
your ego will need surgery, real talk call for help/
young dee just caused your emergency!!
After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
Your battling a beast, he thought that wack shit would be okay
& confused when strong voter turn-out……and ran the other way
Your lines are horrible, so don’t even celebrate
& 408 is how many years it’s gonna take you to elevate
You’re all over my nuts cuz your not strong as this man
^^It’s a whole new ball game, I call it 'hang as long as you can'
Rushing ya verse was foolish, and we have the proof
He’ll never be able to produce a good Kiwi…… can’t stand this fruit
Kiwi-Key we
^ for you noobs
Uppin
yea what he said
notta
v/
After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
v.vulgar
He had a better verse, young lacked punches.. vulgar had some decent lines.. one sided battle imo..
uppp
Pretty One Sided Battle YD had Nothing, While Vulgur didnt really need to do much to win he practially did it with this line
After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
And also the 408 line.
v/ VULGAR
RTF http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7413033
uppp3
c'mon
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...890/index.html
After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
Your lines are horrible, so don’t even celebrate
& 408 is how many years it’s gonna take you to elevate
vs nothing homie you barely rhymed half the time no offense check some other battles
try throwing some punches man stay up no hate just you pretty much boasted and threw statments try an change that
overall vote -Vulgar he had the quotes and overall a better battle verse
lotb everything good shit.young stay up u gotta do more then just rhyming try to joke on your oppenent at least man you'll get it
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After I’m done with young dee there’s gonna be a crime scene
With his body parts everywhere…..like his rhyme scheme
Your lines are horrible, so don’t even celebrate
& 408 is how many years it’s gonna take you to elevate
Rushing ya verse was foolish, and we have the proof
He’ll never be able to produce a good Kiwi…… can’t stand this fruit
vs
nothin..
young dee u started out real badd man ur verse had no creativity no punches...vulgar u had a solid verse u really didnt need much bu the bars i qouted did it
v/vulg
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