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    Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    ahem -

    yo,

    .. been to Nirvana & back, spent countless hours plottin‘ attacks -
    though His time span escapes any chronological lapse
    Father of Jax, metal appendages, Katanas attached, with
    Blades forged of silver found on fossils under Solomon's ashes
    You'll find this note written slowly in methodical sanskrit
    From this ages-old soldier, last records of His chronicles scratched in ……...

    .
    .

    War blossoms when planted, bloody limbs grow atop of the grasses
    Once a fresh summer flesh, it now lies rotten & rancid ..
    bloody velvet red carpets, trimmed with cotton, then bandaged
    Leading to magic boxes, walls dropping for Bin Laden to vanish
    I overdose opium dreams beneath astronomical fragments,
    Calculate patterns that foreshadow the enemy's logic n' tactics
    Pullin‘ triggers on contact with hostile combatants,
    Swept every weapon we found for any possible handprints.
    Squadron been wanderin‘ since they dropped a bomb on the captain -
    Sandbox planet, saddest sight since Vietnam when it happened.
    There's nothing to do except get lost in the madness
    And patiently wait, everyday to see equality happen …
    Under command of one percent who sees a profit extracted,
    We all signed up for Uncle Sam inside his Washington mansion.
    n‘ all he wants to see is bodies, bodies, bodies and havoc,
    Yet he'll be first in line to pay respects when our coffin has landed ..
    God damn it.

    .
    …… why do we fight their battles? ……
    .

    Cobblestone walkway to the lowering drawbridge,
    Flaming arrows overhead, out of air drops a nobleman's carcass;
    Soldiers do marcheth in straight lines, torches smoldering Spartans
    catapults on castle walls, guards release boulders to launch it.
    Chain mail suited, every inch of armor overly polished
    sword sharpened, yet in a minute, both will be tarnished
    Shoved my blade through one who was approaching with caution
    Joined his friends, slumped beside a growing row of the heartless.
    Crossbow extended, lettin metal tips go with a small twitch
    moment it touches skull they might just blow it apart, bitch!
    Felt the breeze of a swing, turned to and fro in a sharp twist
    cut his organs out so clean they coulda sold in the markets ..
    A shallow trench is all that waits, awake for those who departed,
    some are brained by glancing blows & live on mostly retarded.
    Left home for the darkness, don't even really know how it started
    Just fighting for the honor of His throne, the exalted.
    When our authority is challenged, we must dispose of the target
    Their problem, but crimson leaking down our throats will resolve it.

    .
    .

    Those on flights, grippin shells .. to the knights ringin‘ bells,
    willing to die for the wealth, pride of those clutching tight to the helms
    we're all a physical stock they've been trying to sell .. so
    Whether trench hopping soldier or viking from Hell,

    A warrior's fight is only true if He fights for himself.


    - Black

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    oh yeah by the way your drop is ill we should of dropped this as a collab

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    shoulda coulda .. didn't

    we'll drop somethin else soon fam

    uppin right ...

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    i wish i could change the title that shit looks stupid.

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    A piece fit for HOF.



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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    thanks man ..

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    damn wtf .. i keep movin far as hell down the page n shit

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    Re: Blacketh : Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    last time....

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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    I overdose opium dreams beneath astronomical fragments,
    Calculate patterns that foreshadow the enemy's logic n' tactics
    Pullin‘ triggers on contact with hostile combatants,
    Swept every weapon we found for any possible handprints.
    Squadron been wanderin‘ since they dropped a bomb on the captain -
    Sandbox planet, saddest sight since Vietnam when it happened.
    There's nothing to do except get lost in the madness
    And patiently wait, everyday to see equality happen …
    Under command of one percent who sees a profit extracted,
    We all signed up for Uncle Sam inside his Washington mansion.

    ^^^Fuuuuuck my dude... never really read your work before, I've heard of you and heard that you were dope.. never really paid much attention, and for that I am sorry bruh... glad to see you posting at RB and competing in SS after reading this piece... seriously dude... actually seeing someone come along who's better then just average and writing on par with the best is refreshing.. tired of these same old faces...

    but word man... this piece hit home.. great description at parts, especially loved that section i quoted there.. flow was immaculate... definitely know what you're doing and how to write actual rap... some good shit dude... so if no body nom'ed this I'll do you the honors and fight to get it in when we decide them. props again.


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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    thanks a lot man .. i'm glad you enjoyed it

    i wasnt sure if my shit would be well received here so thats cool to hear
    I'm here to break my own ball and chain..

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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    Man, Strait dope. I'm going to quote the whole second verse:

    War blossoms when planted, bloody limbs grow atop of the grasses
    Once a fresh summer flesh, it now lies rotten & rancid ..
    bloody velvet red carpets, trimmed with cotton, then bandaged
    Leading to magic boxes, walls dropping for Bin Laden to vanish
    I overdose opium dreams beneath astronomical fragments,
    Calculate patterns that foreshadow the enemy's logic n' tactics
    Pullin‘ triggers on contact with hostile combatants,
    Swept every weapon we found for any possible handprints.
    Squadron been wanderin‘ since they dropped a bomb on the captain -
    Sandbox planet, saddest sight since Vietnam when it happened.
    There's nothing to do except get lost in the madness
    And patiently wait, everyday to see equality happen …
    Under command of one percent who sees a profit extracted,
    We all signed up for Uncle Sam inside his Washington mansion.
    n‘ all he wants to see is bodies, bodies, bodies and havoc,
    Yet he'll be first in line to pay respects when our coffin has landed ..
    God damn it.
    I love every single second of this, Fit for hall of fame for sure.
    Would you mind looking at my new OM "The Cannibal"
    ["TheIntel"]



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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    Killer as fuck flow and rhymescheme on this piece. I felt like a badass rapper reading this shit out loud over Eminem's 'Till I Collapse beat. The wording in this piece was just off the fucking hook dude. I really enjoyed the storytell that you had written here. Better than 96% of the writers who post in here these days man. I can't tell you how excited I was to see you join this site. Some fresh competition, and I knew you wouldn't let me down just by reading your shit on other sites. This piece was dope as fuck, well worth HOF.

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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    king were you on HHK ever?
    I'm here to break my own ball and chain..

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    Re: Their Wars: A Short Chronicle

    I've been everywhere bro.

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