To the Beat of Her Drum [Bruklor and King]

[Soule]

thanks. up

[XM]

amazing drop very extensive use of vocabulary most impressive display i might add at that vivid and blantant emotion through word choice from both individuals with no lackluster for imagry as filler highly entertained well written on a compositional level well worthy of its nomination this is proof that the om movement is evolving and progressing youve come along way bell and burk glad to have afresh old face around still wordperfect bound props

[R.T. Pullo]

This is some dope shit right here, very original.

I've written about pirate ships and sung about violent kids,
published so many stories that my glory's just a silent hymn.
If I read a poem, my readers get quiet, and then they applaud,
but everything changed when my brain would fade and rot.
It's just like an on/off switch, showing people's true intent,
they love your ability, but you’re not anything to them.
You say my imagination deafens you, well, isn't that the truth?
Because without my word use, you'd just listen to what's cool.

This is tight man. The flow is great, real deep shit also, felt every word. Fantatstic use of your vocabulary skills, every line rolls of the tongue and sounds perfect.

I'm new to this board and this is one of the first few pieces I've read so far... if they all like this, I'll be sticking around a little longer.

Peace guys, keep it up ye, gimmie a shout if you put this to audio won't you?

[Soule]

thanks gents.

[Soule]

Fuck, bump one last time before the month's over!

[Cody Nash]

wow guys.. this was dope as fuck. dunno. my favorite piece out of the 4 I've given feedback on so far haha.. the 2nd stanza was my favorite, not sure who wrote what but that one just rolled off my fuckin tounge.. and that beginning to the third was just dope as hell, had some deep meaning/words all in this piece... good topic to say the least. I kind've have the feeling that the italics were dagel? if so then god damn, start writing like this more often because this is dope.. that last stanza has such an impact on the piece which really suprised me, because usually (if I'm right and the italics are in fact dagel) you can't really end pieces THIS WELL half the time.. and this ended perfectly in my eyes... as I said, good message, great writing... definitely gonna push for this one to get HoF... good work again, ladies.

[Soule]

Thanks, and yeah...the italics are me.