!!Syco-Logic!! -VS- YungDosia

[YungDosia]

10 Lines...

Due By Midnight Tonight West Coast Time.

This Will Be My Check In...

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

cool ...check

[YungDosia]

Drop in the next 30? we both online just pm'd u

[YungDosia]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...084/index.html

Dropping In The Next 30, Try and Drop urs soon Since Ur Online

[YungDosia]

LETS GET IT INNNN....

This Niggas Hard??..pssh, he couldnt pop in a clip like a busted slide show..
I Thought he was a fake...till he said his rhymes crazy..then I knew he must be syco...
Look, Im a Blow that smoke in the air...and if the votin goes fair...
My rhymes'll defy logic with out having to float in the air...
Listen, Youll get no recognition here...no matter how many spits u drop!!..
Nigga RB to you is like Charades, the way nobody gives you props!!...
So stop sayin u bring heat, boy u a damn liar..
and you are insane for battling me syco...cuz ill burn log's like a campfire..!
Look...This little dike ho syco gets his wins off newbs, so we can all agree that
My punches'll be ya worst critic..similar to how you got KO'd with Feed~Back...!!


10
Explanations..
**Feed~Back KO'd Syco 5-0

Drop soon as you can logic since you online...dont wanna wait all nite

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

Look we already told you, ya style is gay and we loathe you
I bet ya ass is still sore, from when that Alien Probed you!
Yd's an undercover fag, who tries hard to conceal his love for Men
His Uncle visits for the holidays, just to start feelin young again!
a child fuckin with a sycopaths How Dums that?
I'll eat this kid like the Chinese, I Chow Yung Fat!

2 more dont post

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

He knows he gettin ate, like we know he isnt straight
he be "Rushin home" with men, and I aint talkin Soviet Estates!
Too many youngs on this site, the other one, yer his double
yall dubious, you like a juvy kid... just another "Yung stirrin Trouble!"

[YungDosia]

Good Battle Fam...Uppin 4 Votes

[Pants IQ]

< 50 posts, but feedback for what it's worth:

This Niggas Hard??..pssh, he couldnt pop in a clip like a busted slide show..
I Thought he was a fake...till he said his rhymes crazy..then I knew he must be syco...
could have gone somewhere. didn't. +1 for effort
Look, Im a Blow that smoke in the air...and if the votin goes fair...
My rhymes'll defy logic with out having to float in the air...
filler.
Listen, Youll get no recognition here...no matter how many spits u drop!!..
Nigga RB to you is like Charades, the way nobody gives you props!!...
nice. now you got jokes. +2
So stop sayin u bring heat, boy u a damn liar..
and you are insane for battling me syco...cuz ill burn log's like a campfire..!
alright, alright. +2
Look...This little dike ho syco gets his wins off newbs, so we can all agree that
My punches'll be ya worst critic..similar to how you got KO'd with Feed~Back...!!
good personal, but probably could have played it up more. +1

vs

Look we already told you, ya style is gay and we loathe you
I bet ya ass is still sore, from when that Alien Probed you!
better version of YD's last line. +3
Yd's an undercover fag, who tries hard to conceal his love for Men
His Uncle visits for the holidays, just to start feelin young again!
laughed out loud. +3
a child fuckin with a sycopaths How Dums that?
I'll eat this kid like the Chinese, I Chow Yung Fat!
nice, would've liked the chow yun fat reference getting worked better. +2
He knows he gettin ate, like we know he isnt straight
he be "Rushin home" with men, and I aint talkin Soviet Estates!
you killed this AND on that four-syllable shit. +3
Too many youngs on this site, the other one, yer his double
yall dubious, you like a juvy kid... just another "Yung stirrin Trouble!"
eh. +1 for the personal

6 to 12, v/ syco

[STACKSSS]

Listen, Youll get no recognition here...no matter how many spits u drop!!..
Nigga RB to you is like Charades, the way nobody gives you props!!...

So stop sayin u bring heat, boy u a damn liar..
and you are insane for battling me syco...cuz ill burn log's like a campfire..!

Look...This little dike ho syco gets his wins off newbs, so we can all agree that
My punches'll be ya worst critic..similar to how you got KO'd with Feed~Back...!!

Look we already told you, ya style is gay and we loathe you
I bet ya ass is still sore, from when that Alien Probed you

Yd's an undercover fag, who tries hard to conceal his love for Men
His Uncle visits for the holidays, just to start feelin young again!

i thought young had a nice flow in this battle but 2 personals back to back is hard to overcome
v/syco
got to be a rematch this shit good

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

upps

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

i meant to say cat like the chinese...lol

[YungDosia]

uppin

[MoMaui]

Look...This little dike ho syco gets his wins off newbs, so we can all agree that
My punches'll be ya worst critic..similar to how you got KO'd with Feed~Back...!!
^^not bad decent punch, but setup worded badly

vs.

Look we already told you, ya style is gay and we loathe you
I bet ya ass is still sore, from when that Alien Probed you!
^^sweet personal, and decent rhyme scheme
Yd's an undercover fag, who tries hard to conceal his love for Men
His Uncle visits for the holidays, just to start feelin young again!
^^LMAO, playedish set up but nice name flip and punch
a child fuckin with a sycopaths How Dums that?
I'll eat this kid like the Chinese, I Chow Yung Fat!
^^decent nameflip, concept and punch

this battle was over without syco even needin' to put in the last 2 bars. some elevation showen from yung but still lacking on punches and consistancy. you also had some issues with wording and played lines or set up which let down the concepts you were trying to deliver. syco good verse, tight and well rounded but let down a little by the lack of fire in the 5th bar and was followed by an average(compared with your usual) closer, still Kia Kaha Bro.

v/ Syco

[YungDosia]

Lol...Thought this was a lot closer then that but whateva's...

thanks 4 votin