I'nTense vs !!Syco-Logic!!

[sintense]

10 bars
due 36 hrs after check in

[sintense]

8 bars
36 hours

[sintense]

i'll post my links later, got some stuff to do now.

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[!!Syco-Logic!!]

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[sintense]

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how this gay dude rides
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude men like, HEY YOU GUYS!
This kid pretends to be dope but its clear I'm heaps better
Crazy Clown is willing to die an actor like Heath Ledger
This poor geek'd get gored if he ever asked for a war week
Then get knocked out cold like eskimo's who lost their door key
It's on now, I'm exposing this faggot fuck a punch, he'd be thankful
Cause if he thought I was pushing fists at him, he'd drop n grab his ankles
Syco your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and beat this bitch to the floor
I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week
I'll take ya mic from you, murk you till your bones crushed,
See i ain't takin this L cause homie I purchase my own dutch

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

I'm Real he's a Phasad, like a Fuckin Mirage
if anybody's Feelin' Tense go get a Fuckin Massage!
We All know this Bloke is a Man Lover, who ya trying to Scam Brother
You punch Relatively Hard, too bad that Relative's ya GrandMother!
His Aimless hits aint hurtin' the shows all over for him, This is Curtains
It's for Certain like Lesbos with Taped Tits, this Bitch is Perpin'!
This faggots fake, like I told you in the First Line
When I Stab em in the Temple I aint Talkin bout Church Crimes!
Self Gratification? Go Fuck yo Self! you Solo-Sexual
You really gotta "Gay with Words", you Homo-Textual!
It took him a Whole day to Compact a Compiled Verse
Still bringin' "Pain too Intense", like Natural Child Birth!
No wonder why someone Stunned em' with his Gay Propencities
This bum comes from the slums of London, he was "Raised in Tent City"
I'll see that he Lose, even tho he's CD, we Crew
he'll be the next missin victim, on the BBC News!

expo...
line 9 ...he has a drop called self gratification in th open mic forum
line 14...a tent city is where a bunch of homeless bums live in tents
propensity- a natural inclination;propensity- an inclination to do something

[sintense]

props up 1

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

up 1

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

zzzzZZZZzzzz

[Tayteezie]

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
clever punch
I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week
more like a league time punch, but still good

vs

I'm Real he's a Phasad, like a Fuckin Mirage
if anybody's Feelin' Tense go get a Fuckin Massage!
good funny opener
We All know this Bloke is a Man Lover, who ya trying to Scam Brother
You punch Relatively Hard, too bad that Relative's ya GrandMother!
creative and witty
This faggots fake, like I told you in the First Line
When I Stab em in the Temple I aint Talkin bout Church Crimes!
funny punch and effective

Both of you had some nice lines but the lenght of this battle made you guys throw in some filler/weak lines in there just to meet the requirement. i thought intense ws inconsistent and lacked personals, syco also didnt have that many personals but he had the Tense/massage and London lines. i dont have 50 post but consider this feedback. v-Syco

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

uppin

[The Nav Man™]

I'nTense

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
2/3 okay nice
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how this gay dude rides
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude men like, HEY YOU GUYS!
1/3 weak
This kid pretends to be dope but its clear I'm heaps better
Crazy Clown is willing to die an actor like Heath Ledger
2/3 nice
This poor geek'd get gored if he ever asked for a war week
Then get knocked out cold like eskimo's who lost their door key
2/3 good concept, creative bro
It's on now, I'm exposing this faggot fuck a punch, he'd be thankful
Cause if he thought I was pushing fists at him, he'd drop n grab his ankles
1/3
Syco your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and beat this bitch to the floor
1/3 not likin the CB lines
I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week
2/3
I'll take ya mic from you, murk you till your bones crushed,
See i ain't takin this L cause homie I purchase my own dutch
2/3 nice

vs


!!Syco-Logic!!

I'm Real he's a Phasad, like a Fuckin Mirage
if anybody's Feelin' Tense go get a Fuckin Massage!
3/3 nice play
We All know this Bloke is a Man Lover, who ya trying to Scam Brother
You punch Relatively Hard, too bad that Relative's ya GrandMother!
2/3 lol
His Aimless hits aint hurtin' the shows all over for him, This is Curtains
It's for Certain like Lesbos with Taped Tits, this Bitch is Perpin'!
1/3
This faggots fake, like I told you in the First Line
When I Stab em in the Temple I aint Talkin bout Church Crimes!
2/3 okay
Self Gratification? Go Fuck yo Self! you Solo-Sexual
You really gotta "Gay with Words", you Homo-Textual!
2/3 lmao...
It took him a Whole day to Compact a Compiled Verse
Still bringin' "Pain too Intense", like Natural Child Birth!
2/3 nice
No wonder why someone Stunned em' with his Gay Propencities
This bum comes from the slums of London, he was "Raised in Tent City"
2/3
I'll see that he Lose, even tho he's CD, we Crew
he'll be the next missin victim, on the BBC News!
1/3 weak

I'nTense-13/24
!!Syco-Logic!!-15/24
Good Battle. No Hate.
V/!!Syco-Logic!!

RTF link in sig if u wanna...

[!!Syco-Logic!!]

uppin....

[A. Diction]

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you
very played concept, but I liked the wording...still meh'ish though.
Don’t act like you get chicks, We know how this gay dude rides
This Gooney jumps in rooms with nude men like, HEY YOU GUYS!
whack...
This kid pretends to be dope but its clear I'm heaps better
Crazy Clown is willing to die an actor like Heath Ledger
Played...very played lol...
This poor geek'd get gored if he ever asked for a war week
Then get knocked out cold like eskimo's who lost their door key
lmao...nice, played concept but a good flip
It's on now, I'm exposing this faggot fuck a punch, he'd be thankful
Cause if he thought I was pushing fists at him, he'd drop n grab his ankles
lol, nice...again a played concept but a good flip
Syco your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and beat this bitch to the floor
naa, played and weak
I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week
lol, nice...
I'll take ya mic from you, murk you till your bones crushed,
See i ain't takin this L cause homie I purchase my own dutch
weak...

Vs

I'm Real he's a Phasad, like a Fuckin Mirage
if anybody's Feelin' Tense go get a Fuckin Massage!
nice concept, but your wording killed this one...
We All know this Bloke is a Man Lover, who ya trying to Scam Brother
You punch Relatively Hard, too bad that Relative's ya GrandMother!
played concept and ya wording was off again.
His Aimless hits aint hurtin' the shows all over for him, This is Curtains
It's for Certain like Lesbos with Taped Tits, this Bitch is Perpin'!
whack
This faggots fake, like I told you in the First Line
When I Stab em in the Temple I aint Talkin bout Church Crimes!
again, played and weak
Self Gratification? Go Fuck yo Self! you Solo-Sexual
You really gotta "Gay with Words", you Homo-Textual!
no
It took him a Whole day to Compact a Compiled Verse
Still bringin' "Pain too Intense", like Natural Child Birth!
nice concept and nameplay but your wording is off.....again
No wonder why someone Stunned em' with his Gay Propencities
This bum comes from the slums of London, he was "Raised in Tent City"
whack
I'll see that he Lose, even tho he's CD, we Crew
he'll be the next missin victim, on the BBC News!
no

Overall: This battle was pretty close, one had played concepts but flipped em good and the wording was on point. The other had original concepts and nameplay but the wording killed them. I got it 3 good bars vs 2 good bars, so I'm gonna have to give this win to In'Tense. Syco, you got a lot of potential dude but you need to fix your wording, you're killing almost all of your good concepts with your wording.

Vote = In'Tense

[YungDosia]

I'nTense

...Favorite Lines...

Really, This kid is gay and his spits are played..not nearly on cue
And my rhymes are sick with Aids..So yeah, I went Eazy on you

Hahahaha Fire! 3/3

I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week

Okay Nigga Hard Line!! 3/3


Overall= 8/10 I Liked Ur Verse 2 Siiiick Bars!




!!Syco-Logic!!

...Favorite Lines...

I'm Real he's a Phasad, like a Fuckin Mirage
if anybody's Feelin' Tense go get a Fuckin Massage!

Ookay Nice Nice Nice Opener Hard As Fuck! 3/3

We All know this Bloke is a Man Lover, who ya trying to Scam Brother
You punch Relatively Hard, too bad that Relative's ya GrandMother!

Hahahahahaha Had Me Laugh Out Loud! 3/3

It took him a Whole day to Compact a Compiled Verse
Still bringin' "Pain too Intense", like Natural Child Birth!

Whoooo....3/3


Overall= 9/10 I Really Liked This Verse Dope Punchlines!

VOTE=!!SYCO-LOGIC!!