Clairvoyant vs Natural Dizaster

[Bonkers]

10 lines..
Due tommorow by 11:59 est
reg. rules

[The Nav Man™]

Check. 11:59 like midnight or noon? Nvm ill have it up today

[The Nav Man™]

You get the title of "Most Boring Bars on RB", none of em even make ya think,
Him n his boy like suckin’ each other near the faucet, they call it a lip sync,
Don’t try nothin’ slick, make a sound quick? I’ll slap that smirk kid,
I'll dismantle this clown bitch like a mean ringleader at the circus,
You’re sayin’ Death is in my future? Guess ya girl’s nickname is Deceased,
When ya bitch takin’ my kids, her name for me is the “Natural Priest”,
Nowhere near the top dog, nothin’ like a rap god, no Jesus,
I keep my bars swingin’ at you like a fuckin drunken trapezeist,
You ain’t getting’ the win...stop the speech and put your toast down,
Clair gets less props than a camera crew filmin’ in a ghost town.

[The Nav Man™]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...382/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...449/index.html

[Bonkers]

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saying my bars arent creative.. you better check your own spelling
'caus in a battle nat wont come near me.. like insect repellent
an i wont embellish.. my flow will put holes in your gut
lets be serious.. nobody's feelin' diz like we were sobering up
tryna say your handling text..truth is your styles simply a bust
caus naturals normally progress..yet your bars still shitty as fuck
so you arent foolin' nobody.. were seeing through the hoax
caus your punches are literally ass.. yep the butt of the joke
with my gun to your throat.. you'll pay me if i see you in the streets
caus i get more money off dizaster then FEMA relief


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...460/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...454/index.html

[The Nav Man™]

Good shit dude. Upp

[The Nav Man™]

Up 2

[The Nav Man™]

Leave links. Ill check em out in the morning. Up 3

[slushcurser]

C:
saying my bars arent creative.. you better check your own spelling
'caus in a battle nat wont come near me.. like insect repellent
an i wont embellish.. my flow will put holes in your gut
lets be serious.. nobody's feelin' diz like we were sobering up
2 name play attempts in a row, good stuff 3/3
the rest of your verse isn't on quite the same level but it was a good read thru out

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You get the title of "Most Boring Bars on RB", none of em even make ya think,
Him n his boy like suckin’ each other near the faucet, they call it a lip sync,
lol, slightly stretched but it works 2/3

You ain’t getting’ the win...stop the speech and put your toast down,
Clair gets less props than a camera crew filmin’ in a ghost town.
dope 2/3

you had a lot of circus/clown references and your verse was built well, i mentioned your first bar being slightly stretched but not at all enough for it to be an issue, the problem with your verse was just that a lot of the bars, although clever and well built, just weren't really hitting that hard
i liked your verse and i thought this was a good battle but for overall strength my vote is going to CLAIR

respect guys, this was a good one, lookin forward2 readin more of your battles nats

[Bonkers]

thnx for the vote.. uppin'

[slushcurser]

dont 4get 2 rtf guys.. links in the sig, appreciate it

[The Nav Man™]

Uppin 4

[SonUDaily]

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Don’t try nothin’ slick, make a sound quick? I’ll slap that smirk kid,
I'll dismantle this clown bitch like a mean ringleader at the circus,
You’re sayin’ Death is in my future? Guess ya girl’s nickname is Deceased,
When ya bitch takin’ my kids, her name for me is the “Natural Priest”,
Nowhere near the top dog, nothin’ like a rap god, no Jesus,
I keep my bars swingin’ at you like a fuckin drunken trapezeist,

i thought he had good bars with proper hits, kept attacking flow good, all around solid verse kid respect 8/10


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saying my bars arent creative.. you better check your own spelling
'caus in a battle nat wont come near me.. like insect repellent
ha! solid!!
an i wont embellish.. my flow will put holes in your gut
lets be serious.. nobody's feelin' diz like we were sobering up
with my gun to your throat.. you'll pay me if i see you in the streets
caus i get more money off dizaster then FEMA relief

even though that insect repllet shit is sora played now it still was a nameplay/punch that still connect good either way, the rest was good, punches hit, flow good all around ood verse.... 9/10

^^ i also think you just edge this battle out with more creativeness and harder punches


RTF in any of my battles i have a few open that need votes!!

[Bonkers]

good looks.. upp

[Switch.]

You get the title of "Most Boring Bars on RB", none of em even make ya think,
Him n his boy like suckin’ each other near the faucet, they call it a lip sync,
You ain’t getting’ the win...stop the speech and put your toast down,
Clair gets less props than a camera crew filmin’ in a ghost town.

Vs

an i wont embellish.. my flow will put holes in your gut
lets be serious.. nobody's feelin' diz like we were sobering up
tryna say your handling text..truth is your styles simply a bust
caus naturals normally progress..yet your bars still shitty as fuck
so you arent foolin' nobody.. were seeing through the hoax
caus your punches are literally ass.. yep the butt of the joke

Decent battle with some good punches but i think clair takes this win coz his punches were pretty powerful and creative like the sobering line that was dope man. Nat ur verse was alright but just didnt match the quality of clair's unlucky dude. No hate to either.

Vote/Clairvoyant

rtf plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...588/index.html