Okay, first of all, this is the first english language based rap forum I have ever been on, so I haven't had the opportunity to read a lot of text battles, which means I don't have a lot of insight on other people's lines.So if I accidentally wrote something that's been used before, don't label me as a biter.I'm just a beginner, and since english isn't my native tongue, you can't expect me to use some complex words yet, but I hope that will change in time.Anyway, without further bullshit, here's my verse, critics are most welcome.
How can you sound dope with that high pitched voice?
It's like someone ripped your vocal chords out...
...and threw them down the baseball court
You border with the imbecilic, MS Word is my witness
cause it spells "Idiot" on the other side of the margin once your verse is finished
spent so much time in America, you forgot British english
so when they offer you a spot of tea...
...you play connect the dots with it
stop writing, you'll never be dirty - like aristocrats
even if I plugged your veins to an oil rafinery...
...you'd still be pure-blood
And, I'm out.
