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2121
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2121 vs. emforce
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oh shit didnt notice i had to check within 5 minutes but ill spit within the hour tho.
sorry the 5 min deal was dumb but goo head and delete ur inbox messages...holy shit i couldnt send that last message
Capacitate your calender, 21 21 really is the switch of 12 12
hell little nigga forseeing future trends, no proof of rhyming well
2121's clerically uncorrect, ya extends overplayed...in time it swells
spittin text, wrapped up in my force's vortex
my landed punches mesmorize your minds and de-force necks
shut your dreams like this is the worst of american idol
nigga with a crack pipe would get a better response from simon cowell
only political powe 2121 holds is the dick in his hands of colin powell
fucking faggots every where state you are like skittles
cuz you taste like the rainbow, so tasty but why the penis so little?
line 7 powe shulda been power,
Bitch you a lightweight, lucky this aint pelican bay coz I’d be like your big bad inmate, ill decimate you leave ya in a bad state, inflicting you with marks 2121 like a license plate//
Boy you 16, I could teach you some new shit, call it mentoring
Coz I’ve got so many bars in my head I could create a penitenary//
This dudes probably a star wars geek, he be the start of my winning streak, coz when I grab the pen and the fucking paper I spit the flow with the force like a jedi//
I’ve got more game than the game, more heat then Miami, im that good that if I went into acting I’d probably come out with a grammy//
This dude aint no real mc, he fake like all those dudes on g’s to gents, i’ve got a sixth sense can already tell his bars wont make cents, he aint getting credit from me, now he wishin he could click edit and delete//
ill explain some shit for youOriginally Posted by 2121
Pelican bay = prison
mentoring- coz he is so young
star wars line was playing off his name with force
very weak battle,
Capacitate your calender, 21 21 really is the switch of 12 12
hell little nigga forseeing future trends, no proof of rhyming well
Vs
Bitch you a lightweight, lucky this aint pelican bay coz I’d be like your big bad inmate, ill decimate you leave ya in a bad state, inflicting you with marks 2121 like a license plate//
2121 has tried hard lookin at previous battle, Keep battlin.....
But you could have made better flips as emforce dropped first....
As emforce dropped some punches with Good opening...
V-em
i didnt think you were aloud to look at there verse then reply to it in yours :S
uppin for votes
uppin for votes
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Capacitate your calender, 21 21 really is the switch of 12 12
hell little nigga forseeing future trends, no proof of rhyming well
...
2121's clerically uncorrect, ya extends overplayed...in time it swells
spittin text, wrapped up in my force's vortex
aw jeez, em what u done? u want rhyming couplets man, this has broken your bar structure
my landed punches mesmorize your minds and de-force necks
shut your dreams like this is the worst of american idol
the force necks and vortex lines go well together, but if your being pedantic like this then they aren't part of the same bar
nigga with a crack pipe would get a better response from simon cowell
only political powe 2121 holds is the dick in his hands of colin powell
structure is back but i can't fucking stand simon cowell and i'm not sure why you mentioned him
fucking faggots every where state you are like skittles
cuz you taste like the rainbow, so tasty but why the penis so little?
wtf are you saying? that you've tasted his dick... it was too small, but it was scrumptious! are you dissing him or yourself here em?
Bitch you a lightweight, lucky this aint pelican bay coz I’d be like your big bad inmate, ill decimate you leave ya in a bad state, inflicting you with marks 2121 like a license plate//
so ur gunna fuck him in the ass and make ur mark on him...
Boy you 16, I could teach you some new shit, call it mentoring
Coz I’ve got so many bars in my head I could create a penitenary//
u aint structuring ur bars right either
This dudes probably a star wars geek, he be the start of my winning streak, coz when I grab the pen and the fucking paper I spit the flow with the force like a jedi//
this is weak, even if this connected with the last bar the rhyme scheme still isn't quite right
I’ve got more game than the game, more heat then Miami, im that good that if I went into acting I’d probably come out with a grammy//
this isn't a punch and it's weak as fuck, be more imaginative
This dude aint no real mc, he fake like all those dudes on g’s to gents, i’ve got a sixth sense can already tell his bars wont make cents, he aint getting credit from me, now he wishin he could click edit and delete//
this last bar is stretched to fuck...
this was really weak. both of you need to work a lot harder on structuring your verses. i made a point for emforce in the last battle of his i voted on but i'm gonna make it again for u 21: remember that this is a text battle and nobody can hear how you're pronouncing your words or how your flow works or anything... which means everything has to be clear as day
i'm really not sure who to vote for... but i think its gotta be emforce for actually trying to bring a punch with every bar
don't forget2 RTF: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...530/index.html
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Capacitate your calender, 21 21 really is the switch of 12 12
hell little nigga forseeing future trends, no proof of rhyming well
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Bitch you a lightweight, lucky this aint pelican bay coz I’d be like your big bad inmate, ill decimate you leave ya in a bad state, inflicting you with marks 2121 like a license plate
Overall - Em you're getting better everytime I read your battles, but you still only had 1 quotable, and it was mediocre at best, IMO.
2121 You had good concepts, but your bars are all over the fuckin' place, and mad stretched. You could've made it work if worded a bit better, but it really threw off the flow.
My vote goes to emforce mainly based on the nameplay. I know 2121 had the star wars reference in there but nameplay should be able to be noticed without explanation.
No hate.
V/ emforce
RTF - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...585/index.html
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...588/index.html
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