Natural Dizaster vs Hypo

[The Nav Man™]

Aight
10 lines
Due by midnight
House rules n shizz
Check before droppin, this is mine

[fo11]

back from work, My check

[fo11]

told ya to set no bar limit lmao,, Im droppin in some mins

[fo11]

i slip-in the crevice of your inner mind to rape your conscious
think your hip hop? you 'dont fit the lifestyle, like your impotent- grandpa- wit- condoms
intricate- onslaughts- im- bombin, that fragile style in which your nursin'
victory is sumthin youll never see, like Lil Kim as a born again virgin
its apparent im tearin you bare-an', shove a limb in your mouth to stop-your-bitchin
ill speak your eulogy and use your open casket as a pot-to-piss-in
Find your little monkey ass stolen, from the sideline I score everytime,
shine blind i can battle crimes or battle nights with lines
Cause poetically I'm like Shakespeare I entergetically right rhythmes, 36 crimes through fifty life lines
Take heed and fuckin read the lyrics that hit non stop every since my first line my whole verse has been hot

[The Nav Man™]

Said by midnight...but im droppin in a couple hrs

[The Nav Man™]

I thought you weren’t gonna show, cuz word on the street is..bitch you duck,
Fag plays with more balls than an equipment manager who’s bored as fuck,
If you were lost in the desert, hidden on a cactus, just please say a prayer,
Nevermind, can’t find you, ur camouflaged with the rest of the pricks there,
When you were done with work, you dropped, gay stripclub..Dude why?
How could you even see or type…already wiped the cum out ya eye?
Hypo musta been a typo,I think you meant your name to be hypno,
Cuz hypnosis is the only time ur lines n rhymes are fuckin sick bro,
Need help with your verses, ya know there's a thread called Elevation,
Lotta frustration, needa vacation, theres also a temptation...of termination

[Switch.]

I thought you weren’t gonna show, cuz word on the street is..bitch you duck,
Fag plays with more balls than an equipment manager who’s bored as fuck,

Vs

Nothing

This was a weak battle ...hypo sort out ya structure and come up with harder hittin and creative punches. Natural ur gettin there jus need to put more sting in ya punches but that first bar was kinda funny but not hard. Keep elevatin fellas no hate.

Vote/Natural Dizaster

[The Nav Man™]

Word. Up fo some more votes

[KnowP]

I thought you weren’t gonna show, cuz word on the street is..bitch you duck,
Fag plays with more balls than an equipment manager who’s bored as fuck,

Vs

Nothing

Hypo, you need to think of better punches. alot of your verse was either played or
a statement. learn how to strike your opponent creatively
Nat, you had punches but some of them were pretty weak. You had the one i quoted which okayish, but it was enough seeing how your opponent had no punches to match

v/ Nat

[The Nav Man™]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post7389119
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...363/index.html
Uppin 2

[Uhb.]

intricate- onslaughts- im- bombin, that fragile style in which your nursin'
victory is sumthin youll never see, like Lil Kim as a born again virgin
^ok bar, rest was ok at most, sum self hype

vs
Fag plays with more balls than an equipment manager who’s bored as fuck
^LMFAO
If you were lost in the desert, hidden on a cactus, just please say a prayer,
Nevermind, can’t find you, ur camouflaged with the rest of the pricks there
^wasnt a hard it but decentflip

Vote: ND

[sILLable]

hypo-your still sacrificing punches and personals for multis,and thats not gonna get you the win,its about punches and personals and wording,not complexity,i usually end each line with a multi when i text battle,not every time but it gives it a smoother feel if done right,work on creative punches and personals those are gonna give you the win.


natural-your verse was not that good,but you did throw punches and some personals,but they werent creative and your wording was iffy in some spots,youve got the hang of usin punches and hypo doesnt yet,so that alone gives you the win but you just need to elevate more with pun./pers. and youll get better.

vote-ND

[The Nav Man™]

Word thanks everyone cor the criticism. I needa be more creative n shit. Upp last vote

[Old-SkooL..]

Vote Natural Disaster

I thought you weren’t gonna show, cuz word on the street is..bitch you duck,
Fag plays with more balls than an equipment manager who’s bored as fuck,

Nicest bar from u kinda tailed off toward the end the 1st 2/3 bars was better, but easy win 4u overall more consistant

Hypo u needaa direct ur punches at ur opponent more so they hit play off his name or something nothing really hit home

[Ctrl Alt Elite]

The only bar that worked for me in this battle, i gotta say, was ND's opener... and even then I have a feeling i've seen a very similar bar before.
Hypo, I still like your style and your witty... you are witty but you need to use it better to form hard hitting punches. You have LOADS of potential. Don't give up because your losing a few, keep battling here and soon, I KNOW you'll be coo'.

ND, nothing great... only liked the opener like I said. Although you won this, I don't see the potential that Hypo has... Strange... but true..

V-ND