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    Get Touched abiona's Avatar
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    Picture Perfect . 1



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    microcosm spokenoh's Avatar
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    Re: Picture Perfect . Week 1

    there is something growing inside of her

    the feeling is insurmountable,
    it contorts along the edges
    of her ribcage - gnaws at her
    small intestine

    there are nails piercing her belly
    and the almond shaped button
    is turning into a wrinkle, fading
    and disappearing as
    bones depress
    and sink like structures built
    to crumble daylight

    the horror of the outside,
    there is something becoming
    but she need not inhale it,
    to know this kind of sickness -
    her eyes are desolate

    her hair is fraught with nerve
    & the moment she lifts her
    stab-wound eyes to
    a shadow's dance,
    her toes curl
    like the wall-paper

    her body is balled up, legs strewn -
    full of blotches and bedsores -
    and the ail of her
    stoned murmur is
    piled in pale vomit
    - ghastly and ghostlike

    the silent panic, sullen inebriation
    - cries unheard and a dial tone drone
    retorts but all this kicking
    is entangling her & she
    sucks in the stale stench
    of defeat

    there is something growing inside of her
    Last edited by spokenoh; December 1st, 2009 at 11:01 PM
    can I kick it?

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    pre-meditated mindset MoMaui's Avatar
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    Re: Picture Perfect . Week 1

    Melancholy state
    Benign breathe Melignnt breathe
    Alone thoughts unanswered
    Words are always getting conventionalized to some secondary meaning.

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    ^^ should be malignant, sorry tired --.
    Words are always getting conventionalized to some secondary meaning.

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    Re: Picture Perfect . Week 1

    Pitiful little monster eater,
    Black smog settling in the crevices of those baby blues,
    Looking down on me from the crescent spire of the moon,
    And it's alabaster gaze swallows the putrid glow -
    Crippled, cross-eyed gestures and vivilian nonsense,
    God, that look is crazy baby.

    To be consumed:
    I had never once considered it in such a context;
    Kill me clever with well-wished winks and stone cold
    Stares, don't take it easy on me sleazy, no offense - sex;
    Pink velvet lipstick smeared and sweltered on my tongue,
    Yummy Yum - poison never tasted so bad.

    Girl, give me that knife.
    You know I won't let you die - right?
    Cleave, cut and gash those rosy-reds up like lamb chops,
    Yea baby, get it out of your system - all that meddlesome
    Marrow and dried, auburn droplets of hemo-globs and goober fish,
    Those vital organs are so vacuous, silly really;
    I assume you agree.

    Smile,
    Eternity aint all that bad, you're overexaggerating the boredom,
    Or um, maybe you're just ungrateful. But I still love you.
    Empty cadaver girl, puppetry in looming vex of my hard-earned
    Maliciousness - I tried really hard to make you cry,
    And there you go wiping the tears away -
    They don't grow on trees you know.

    I find it funny when you slash your face open,
    Hey paper machete maiden, come over here and tickle my fancy.
    Don't bite your tongue, just go ahead and slit it down the
    Middle and kiss me slithery serpent slut - no offense - sex;
    Black eye-liner drips and stained mascara-cter, Yea, play the part,
    Brooding, busted porcelain eyes - I love ya doll.

    Girl give me that knife.
    You know I won't let you die - right?
    It's me, you, and the moon forever and ever, shaded landscapes
    And tainted side-walks, it's you and me forever baby.
    And I do mean
    Forever.

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