this shit is free for underground Mcs to make a diss.
Produced by Nepbeats
check this out,
[soundclick]8406287[/soundclick]
Uppin for feeds
this shit is free for underground Mcs to make a diss.
Produced by Nepbeats
check this out,
[soundclick]8406287[/soundclick]
Uppin for feeds
1. You must reply to atleast 2 other threads before you create a new thread... you must also post the links to the other threads at the same time you make the post for your song... no edits.
-XM
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
I actually really like this, but it feels unfinished to me. The composing is awesome and if it had a bit more mastering it would be sick as hell.
As far as the downtempo synth instrument I would have made it wider and panned it to extreme left and right so it's more of a melodic soundscape and fills up the empty areas in this mix.
For the beat, the snare sounds too filtered and feels out of place a bit. I would filter the entire drum track evenly, bump up the Lows on the EQ, add a slight reverb, and a vinyl effect - so it sounds like it's coming out of an old record player.
The composition for the strings were alright but could have been more exciting - the main issue I had was the strings sounded too Midi. I would get a new VST for your strings and play around with reverbs, filters, and EQ to get a more realistic sound.
I can hear how this sound *could* sound without changing any of the composition and just mastering it a bit - and it sounds awesome. Hopefully you can come back to this and do a little more to it and make it into that song because this has the potential to be really good.
"Art is never finished, only abandoned." -Leonardo da Vinci
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ok.. I like the video game kinda back ground music.. makes me think of zelda kinda.. lol.. which is cool.. the drums good.. like the scratches.. though u used em maybe a lil to much.. but this a dope beat.. simple boom bap.. my fav style
orch hits were dope
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^New Track - Your Dues
Hence/Scytso
HoF x 8
really slick homie
kinda feels like it is missing something though.
maybe a 2nd lead in the verse?
could be...
idk.
pretty hott tho.
not a diss beat at all though.
KritiK / Altered Innovations (Urban GFX Designer)
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Send me the download link.
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niceeeee work
i like that beat a lot
nice melody
got a sad feeling