10 lines
due 1 hour
10 lines
due 1 hour
Allow the seemingly impossible dreams, fathom for a moment.
this ma check dude gudluck
Allow the seemingly impossible dreams, fathom for a moment.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...331/index.html
^ Why accept and not even show...
dude says hes nothing but skill yet we remain unimpressed by this weed
if his lines remain as wack as this then theres no hope for the new breed (sig)
he thinks he brings fire to a battle, pssh he comes in tensed and muscles flexed
your name'll never be as big as most on here judging by what u call 'sick text'
this cats got like 10 battles open and each of them is like a ghost town
gatherin dust cause your shit nobody guna vote between a herb and an ass clown
fuck text u need to quit man u aint sic and your going nowhere fast- believe it
cause u gotta admit ur better than nobody which is notice able with every spit...
you drop cause it aint helping you make your self proclaimed name and ur to blame
kid how you gunna grab the starlight when all the spotlights say your lame.
Allow the seemingly impossible dreams, fathom for a moment.
haha... this a dq?
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes
this is my check-in
In This Battle of Rhymes I guess your “Vision” IS Mixed-Up
“your intelligence is like your girls pussy”…another Spit To A “Thick Cunt”
thinks hes actually the Nicest Rappin? Never! You a Mild Attatchment to a Snipers Action
what I Write Is Magic, I Would Send You A 'Hot-16' But Didnt Want No Parents Sueing R.B For Child Harrament!!
Who Care What OTHERS SAY.. If He "Knows-Stuff" Imma Have His "Throat-Clutched" Till He 'Suffocate!'
Patience! Or He "May tense/May 10th's" when "Celebrating" his "MOTHERS DAY!"
Better Run Fast Or Have His "Meta-Collapse/Medical-Lapse" like he "Missed A Dose!
Rap As A Queer Cuz An "Acting Career" Couldn't Cure The "Fear N Drama" Of The "Murder He Wrote"
** Last Bar **
is a t.v drama show called Murder She Wrote its old but since i wrote it its murder He Wrote..
If You Dont Get None Of My Word-Play Or Punches Dont Vote
this cats got like 10 battles open and each of them is like a ghost town
gatherin dust cause your shit nobody guna vote between a herb and an ass clown
vs
what I Write Is Magic, I Would Send You A 'Hot-16' But Didnt Want No Parents Sueing R.B For Child Harrament!!
Who Care What OTHERS SAY.. If He "Knows-Stuff" Imma Have His "Throat-Clutched" Till He 'Suffocate!'
sic_text had sum pretty nice punches, rhyme u need to elevate .
v/ST
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dude says hes nothing but skill yet we remain unimpressed by this weed
if his lines remain as wack as this then theres no hope for the new breed (sig)
^good personal
he thinks he brings fire to a battle, pssh he comes in tensed and muscles flexed
your name'll never be as big as most on here judging by what u call 'sick text'
^haha funny2/5
this cats got like 10 battles open and each of them is like a ghost town
gatherin dust cause your shit nobody guna vote between a herb and an ass clown
^haha personal and funny
fuck text u need to quit man u aint sic and your going nowhere fast- believe it
cause u gotta admit ur better than nobody which is notice able with every spit...
^forced and stretched but your punch was in the right direction
you drop cause it aint helping you make your self proclaimed name and ur to blame
kid how you gunna grab the starlight when all the spotlights say your lame.
^haha good closer best line 3/5
vs
In This Battle of Rhymes I guess your “Vision” IS Mixed-Up
“your intelligence is like your girls pussy”…another Spit To A “Thick Cunt”
^meh forced so so punch
thinks hes actually the Nicest Rappin? Never! You a Mild Attatchment to a Snipers Action
what I Write Is Magic, I Would Send You A 'Hot-16' But Didnt Want No Parents Sueing R.B For Child Harrament!!
^started off good but stretched kills the punch/ no real diss
Who Care What OTHERS SAY.. If He "Knows-Stuff" Imma Have His "Throat-Clutched" Till He 'Suffocate!'
Patience! Or He "May tense/May 10th's" when "Celebrating" his "MOTHERS DAY!"
^good rhyme scheme but really forced and choppy
Better Run Fast Or Have His "Meta-Collapse/Medical-Lapse" like he "Missed A Dose!
Rap As A Queer Cuz An "Acting Career" Couldn't Cure The "Fear N Drama" Of The "Murder He Wrote"
^ good meta but still forced and stretched
sic i have seen better from you but ur structure was off and your stretched forced lines made a horrible flow
rhyme i have seen better from you as well but you had a better flow and a rhyme scheme that set up good punches and enough to win this one
ok battle needs elevation but dont loose the vasics try to hard
my vote-rhyme
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes
rtf
shut the fuck up! he's in here tellin jokes
bump to the top
?? My shit was forced and choped up??
Wordplay/werdplay
To help you understand the wordplay,
And my flow off and strech??
They are called multis my friend I have shit loads of them so get use to them.
Upp'in to end this shit
?? My shit was forced and choped up??
Wordplay/werdplay
To help you understand the wordplay,
And my flow off and strech??
They are called multis my friend I have shit loads of them so get use to them.
Upp'in to end this shit
hey u cant sway dog more votes on this shit plz
Allow the seemingly impossible dreams, fathom for a moment.
you drop cause it aint helping you make your self proclaimed name and ur to blame
kid how you gunna grab the starlight when all the spotlights say your lame.
dude says hes nothing but skill yet we remain unimpressed by this weed
if his lines remain as wack as this then theres no hope for the new breed (sig)
vs
In This Battle of Rhymes I guess your “Vision” IS Mixed-Up
“your intelligence is like your girls pussy”…another Spit To A “Thick Cunt”
i think ryhme should work on ur flow n ur set ups some homey, and sic fuckin fix ur structure ur all over the place man n ur punches lack if u got to use 4 bars to make one statement
vote ryhme
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