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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    don't clown me too bad lol





    16?

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    16 it is. good luck Karp.
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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    aint seen you on all week girl



    10. cuz i doubt you'll show


    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    Well...10 and 16 are similar...

    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K

    Quote Originally Posted by A. Karpis
    u fags always voting against me...!
    Quote Originally Posted by GodOfWar
    lmmfao@ karp gettin mad at people
    Quote Originally Posted by ...King Author
    oh yea, I think he's mad at me cause I voted against him...like Oh Noes I'm losing a text battle on the interwebs, now a bunch of people who will have no effect on my life in any way whatsoever will think less of me, Oh Noes!!!
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    Decent but kinda simple. Woulda been better if he beat her decisively.
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    Nah, weak.
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    Wordplay doesn't work both ways so no. Good concept tho.
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    LOL, dope.
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it
    Blah, whack.

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    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    Cool. Nothing amazing but I like it.
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    Make up shit s played.
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K
    Decent. The concept is a little blah tho cuz I don't see the connection.
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    Cool, haven't seen 'complain' wordplay. I'm sure it's been used but meh.
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show
    Ehh, not really feelin' this.

    Overall I've seen better from both, especailly from Mariah. Her verse last week was much better imo. Both had one nice bar, but Karp had nothing other than that. Mariah on the other hand, had a couple decent bars other than her main quotable.

    Vote: Mariah
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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    decent
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    aiight, not great though
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    aiight
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    not for me buddy
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it
    lol this made me laugh actually

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    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    lol nice opener
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    decent
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K
    decent
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    aiight
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show
    quite a good closer


    Vote/Mariah for better concepts and more solidity on her punches. I've seen better from both but ah well still an okay battle.
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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses

    Vs.

    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show

    benchmark/makeup/come plain are all played. Karp had more sting to his verse and the personal edge.

    v/ Karpis

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    Karp
    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    thats pretty cool..
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    swag on this is tight, feeling it..
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    eh I dont know why u spelled conducter like that, killed the impact
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    ha, thats cool
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it
    cool

    Mari
    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    wow, this is kinda super played
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    same as above
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K
    ???? I dont even get this
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    might be played but I think this is a really dope flip
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show
    hmm not bad..kinda digging it


    Mariah def aint drop to potential..her verse was kinda soft..Karp had just enough to take this comfortable in my book.

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    the flip is mad played.. you used it differently, but it's been used on me like 12 times.
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    nah..
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    nah.. not feelin it again.
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    aiight, coo
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it
    eh.. not really

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    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    lol, coo
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    aiight
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K
    not feelin it
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    played
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show
    not bad


    bleh real one-sided for me here.. mariah had better connects.. karpis had one line that i was feelin this time around.. sorry bruh..


    vote Mariah

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you
    ehh lol
    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    ok
    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face
    ehhh barely decent
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses
    lol nice
    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it
    lol nahh

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    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    ok wp
    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara
    ehh played..
    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K
    not feeling it
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match
    cool wp
    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show
    idk you just a come-wp decent..

    both basically had 3 bars i was feeling.. mariah had some cool wp, and karp had some funny bars and also had the bar of the battle with that car full of text verses line, seemed like it held a bit more harshness too..
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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    The TRASH you dropped last battle belonged in week two
    They say Big girls don’t Cry<--it’s just the fat fuck who beat you

    aight decent

    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field

    this was dope.. LOTB

    Saw your mug in the pics you posted & this whores a disgrace
    So when i conduct-her we’ll all run a Train……over her face

    lol.. i laughed, this was nice

    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses

    cool again..

    Said she likes my style and every line i got the wit
    Mariah has a Soft spot for me & i’m sticking my cock in it

    lol.. feelin this too..

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    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there

    lol cool

    You're a known fem and cosmetically speaking, you're top of the era
    Cause even if you make up your mind...you're probably rocking mascara

    nahh played.. sorry

    Even the faggots wish you strayed, you're a stupid bitch these days
    I see you're feeling a bit betrayed, but face it, every kiss begins with K

    ? hmmm not feelin this.. a total miss

    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match

    haha nice.. good wordplay here..

    You're not good, you seem clean, but you're full of wackness though
    So if you composing dope...good thing this isn't a fucking fashion show

    decent...

    OVERALL - This wasnt super one sided but I felt like Karpis took this with harder hitting punchs and a more creative consistent verse overall. Mariah had a few played lines I just wasnt feeling and one complete miss IMO. Karp had the LOTB with that pickin flowers in a mine field. Anyway my breakdown shows how I managed to come up with my vote..

    V/ Karpis

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    Re: Wk 16: A. Karpis (4-3) vs Mariah (4-4)

    Your lightweight to me mama, you better keep your eyes peeled
    Battling me? She’d be better off picking flowers in a mine field
    Flat ass Mariah rocking designer jeans & the best purses
    This bitch has no Junk in the Trunk, but a car full of text verses

    Vs.

    Stay on the sidelines herb, nobody who battles thinks "this shit is fair"
    Karp, you've set a new benchmark...for how long you've been sitting there
    Enough on orientation, you lack skill which proves that you're wack
    Cause you're quick to come-plain...bitch and moan when losing a match


    V/ karp


    way better verse overall w/ consistency. mine field line was DOPE. mariah didnt come terrible just not enough to win here.

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    Karpis wins (5-3)
    Mariah loses (4-5)



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