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  1. November 8th, 2009, 08:31 PM #1
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    Natural

    [YOUTUBE]5YDFItS_r20[/YOUTUBE]

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    Feedback appreciated! (Good or Bad!)

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...466/index.html

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  2. November 9th, 2009, 11:08 AM #2
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    Re: Natural

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  3. November 10th, 2009, 08:34 AM #3
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    Re: Natural

    Drums are cool, melodies are nice, samples change a bit too often in my opinion, I think it would be better if it had 1 leading melody.. Its simple, but it definitely has a nice vibe to it.. Nice work
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  4. November 13th, 2009, 04:06 AM #4
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    Re: Natural

    i agree the sample changes are a lil too often otherwise its dope you might want to have just had some drum breakdowns instead of all the sample changes... but some of the flips worked nicely especially that saxophone! Ice Cold

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  5. November 22nd, 2009, 02:59 AM #5
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    Re: Natural

    yupp agreed wit II n paktraxx
    semi-dope


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    Re: Natural

    Love the melody

    But the drums kill the scenery, IMO
    This video deserves contemporary.
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  7. November 24th, 2009, 07:58 PM #7
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    Re: Natural

    Sample chops are basic, percussion set is terrible in all honestly...it just doesn't blend well at all...and its not mixed good...

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  8. November 26th, 2009, 05:32 AM #8
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    Re: Natural

    drums are coool melody simple but effective percs are blah this is a nice beat tho

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  9. November 26th, 2009, 05:40 AM #9
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    Re: Natural

    Quote Originally Posted by II View Post
    Drums are cool, melodies are nice, samples change a bit too often in my opinion, I think it would be better if it had 1 leading melody.. Its simple, but it definitely has a nice vibe to it.. Nice work
    and the kick is all over the place, you should fix the pattern
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