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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    Rushed work

    NONCentz.... couldnt be exposed even if i walked naked,
    i over expose those who fake it, foes....that bitch
    acting like gay kleptos... all they really do is take it.
    im known ....for purposley provoking,
    leave em split like a gang sign for a vulken,
    skull open, bones broken,
    gayer then macaulay culkin, sulken,cause as far as mics...
    im held as sulten, for revolting punches and insalting
    you till your categorized somewhere between skeelo and michael bolton.

    so when cats say "im better" i can agree with,
    centz anticipated like chino's "the secret"
    as for your title.. ill leave with.. you'll leave pissed
    with being kinged in checkers as your crowning achievement.

    lines is scortchen, my thymes will torch them, when aimen
    so say you amens, before i put your name in the box like wheel of fortune,
    filled with misfortune, and a mom asking why she aint get that abortion.

    aint no taking me out like luncheons,
    spit your diss lines by the bunches,to me they sucker punches.
    your flow is tortue your booth must be in dungeons.

    i never back down finish what i started and i have to brag,
    for me its harder to raise white flag...
    then it was for your father to raise a straght fag.
    and i know it,hell i take jokes to far,
    so do most of these retards,
    who demand respect for bitten bars, funny...
    years past no money
    act famous turn nameless nobody knows who you are,
    discard like chico debarge,and Daewoo cars.
    alot say my spot in the top ten dont fit when i spit,
    and i tell them well fecies aint shit, no need to say it,
    you know they name,
    what language art you major in? your lyrics is the mosaic for lame.

    me on the mic equals no joke once spoke i drop cemantics,
    so deep you could find the titanic and atlantis.

    you scheduled to face me then asked for different arrangements ,
    im the type to waint till you tattoo my name then chage it.

    enetr myself twice then battle for gold and silver spot at braggin events,
    then write my name in my hand and slap you into some centz.

    never anemic, love beaf so when drama comes and i get heated,
    anyone saying i aint hot or dont believe it
    can watch me cook a raw steak in my mouth while i eat it.

    an emcee this rare happens as often as the planets alignment,
    someone who writes rhymes like im serving a bid in solitary confignment.
    Last edited by noncentz; July 11th, 2009 at 09:10 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    uppin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    This was a good read. It was very easy to follow, the flow was great. Vocab was pretty good, at some points not as great, but good none the less. All around I thought it was a good piece, nice work.

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    thanks alot twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    uppin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    so when cats say "im better" i can agree with,
    centz anticipated like chino's "the secret"
    as for your title.. ill leave with.. you'll leave pissed
    with being kinged in checkers as your crowning achievement
    i think i liked this part best

    you have some nice multies and a nice flow going which faltered at first but those lines picked it back up. good read bro. just make sure you keep your rhyming straight and it's pretty decent.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...121/index.html
    return the favor & drop some feedback on this for me bro

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    Re: Rushed work

    Yo nice flow N nice vocabulary its wasnt simple it was complex which makes it betta.
    Nice multies

    you scheduled to face me then asked for different arrangements ,
    im the type to waint till you tattoo my name then chage it.
    Lol i duno why but i laughed at this part

    It was overall a good post.. Keep it up

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    thanx for the love no doubt
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    i got much more coming
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    Favorite lines:

    you scheduled to face me then asked for different arrangements ,
    im the type to waint till you tattoo my name then chage it.



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    To be honest I didn't think it was that great. The flow started off choppy and it was off and on all the way through, you had some good multies though. Vocab was on point. I thought you had some pretty cool metaphors/concepts in there, like 5-6 bars but there were some really played ones and a few I just wasn't feeling period. There was only one bar that I found quotable, solid piece if it was really "rushed" though, stay up keep working at it b.

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    Re: Rushed work

    uppin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Rushed work

    some of this was hard for me to follow which means 1 of 2 things. im either sufering from readjusting to reading text again, or it wasnt put together well enough. im thinking its more of the first because i definitely picked up on the multi's. props on that. your vocab was straight for me...nothing ridiculous like other pieces i've seen. now though i didnt like the whole piece, i do have my favorite parts which takes nothin from your work in total. and the daewoo cars hit a funny bone. lol @ that. more or less, this was decent look forward to more.

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    Re: Rushed work

    Yeah the metophores are easy to understand
    keeps flowing nonstop great peice

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    Re: Rushed work

    Thanx
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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