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    Topical Student? (Only One!)

    I'm going to help out ONE writer. I'll take you under my wingspan until I feel, or you feel, that you've reached your full potential. I'm only taking one. So post a link to your most recent Open Mic and if I feel you've got what it takes. Then your it.

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    PM sent. I know I didn't follow protocol, but I explained why in my message.
    If you're serious about music and you wanna work then holla at me. I'm here to improve my rhymes.

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    Re: Topical Student? (Only One!)

    i dont know if i am to late i just joined but i want help so i can get better here is i think my best song i have


    you can check my other songs tho on my channel but please help

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    I didnt put it in open mic I put it in this section to get better, I think I have talent but I haven't been rapping for that long, I think Im pretty damn good for someone who's been rapping for less than a year, check it out.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...644/index.html

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    Re: Topical Student? (Only One!)

    Average Man - I'm trying to help topical writers dude. Not audio heads.


    youngdizzyboy - uhh...sorry, but no.

    MC Kid - you don't seem like your going to last long. sorry kiddo.

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    what do you mean that I'm not going to last long? I just want to know...like I said I haven't been rapping for that long, so what you just saw is nowhere near my full potential, thats what I'm trying to get to

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    Maybe 10 of every 100 new writers that come on this board remain interested in writing on here. And possibly 1 of those 10 actually elevate and get good enough to do damage in Open Mic and/or Sacred Scriptures. I checked out your link. And personally, you don't seem like one of those writers that actually stay. (your name really doesn't help either though) Now, say you prove me wrong. And are still interested in my help. Then come back. But for now, I really don't see you as the next Lecomp or P. Mortuus.

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    Got nothing recent..was stuck up with work,I'm back now..to improve.If you wanna test me,just gimme any topical and I'll try not disappointing.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=399406
    Last edited by Speed Ice; December 17th, 2009 at 11:53 AM

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    Concept - Work on your concept choices man. Unless you can pull out some slick wording and amazing rhymescheme/flow like Engivale. Then gangster concepts will never workout in your favor.

    Wording - Your wording is really bland/boring. Elementary. Read a dictionary or some old poetry/novels. Get an idea on how to interest your olders readers and inspire the younger/less wise readers to elevate their own wording.

    Flow/Rhymescheme - Your rhymescheme was plain, get in some multies and multi-syllable rhymes at the end. It'll help your flow a lot dude.

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    Well yes,certainly..thanks

    I'm sending you something in your inbox,please read it through whenever you've got time.

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    Alright.

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    word I feel you... and btw I'm not actually a kid i'm 21 it's just wat my boys call me in brooklyn so I decided to use it as my rap name...but ok if you're willing to help when I'm still on here a while from now then ok I'll show you

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    When I call you a 'kid' on here. It's because of the difference in RB experience.

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    my collab with MC

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    Work on your wording and rhymescheme.

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