this is my check ten lines due in half hour
this is my check ten lines due in half hour
check
your a lonely desperate loser and you could never make a big show
your life is best expressed...from the view of your basement window
your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
your style blows and your not up to speed with how a battle goes
and im sure we've all seen yung guns... about twenty years ago
i know your impressed with the my sig "blow ya mind" moves your bones
closest you'll ever come to hot soundclick...is the sound my gat makes to ya dome
shit i didn't have to try on this but trust me i still produce killer bars
you like celebs? sick! then ill flatten you on the pavement to view the stars
look who's got a big mouth, but bitch did I ask for your opinion?
better watch that mouth now cuz your entering my dominion
frontin with your trapping shit, you made a joke of yourself on open mic
I expected that piece to be followed by "live from new york its saturday night"
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
Maybe Im a psychic cuz I can feel unintelligent jokes about my name coming
but before you do, remember that at least my name means something*
I'm not gonna try and get too in your face,your not worth more
Hey how does it feel running that trap shit... over at the drugstore...
Illestry isnt a word. I'm stupid Lol.*
your a lonely desperate loser and you could never make a big show
your life is best expressed...from the view of your basement window
LMFAO
your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
nah
your style blows and your not up to speed with how a battle goes
and im sure we've all seen yung guns... about twenty years ago
nah
i know your impressed with the my sig "blow ya mind" moves your bones
closest you'll ever come to hot soundclick...is the sound my gat makes to ya dome
ok at most
shit i didn't have to try on this but trust me i still produce killer bars
you like celebs? sick! then ill flatten you on the pavement to view the stars
aight ending
vs
look who's got a big mouth, but bitch did I ask for your opinion?
better watch that mouth now cuz your entering my dominion
nah
frontin with your trapping shit, you made a joke of yourself on open mic
I expected that piece to be followed by "live from new york its saturday night"
eeeh
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
lol
Maybe Im a psychic cuz I can feel unintelligent jokes about my name coming
but before you do, remember that at least my name means something*
wtf nah
I'm not gonna try and get too in your face,your not worth more
Hey how does it feel running that trap shit... over at the drugstore...
lmfao
vote: young noting for having 1 better bar, illestry porobly didnt u was good but ya last bar edge this battle out to me
your a lonely desperate loser and you could never make a big show
your life is best expressed...from the view of your basement window
-nice
your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
-ehh... Worded horrible, nice hit
your style blows and your not up to speed with how a battle goes
and im sure we've all seen yung guns... about twenty years ago
-nice
i know your impressed with the my sig "blow ya mind" moves your bones
closest you'll ever come to hot soundclick...is the sound my gat makes to ya dome
-liking this bar
shit i didn't have to try on this but trust me i still produce killer bars
you like celebs? sick! then ill flatten you on the pavement to view the stars
-nahh
vs yung
look who's got a big mouth, but bitch did I ask for your opinion?
better watch that mouth now cuz your entering my dominion
-lame as fuck
frontin with your trapping shit, you made a joke of yourself on open mic
I expected that piece to be followed by "live from new york its saturday night"
-no
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
-k
Maybe Im a psychic cuz I can feel unintelligent jokes about my name coming
but before you do, remember that at least my name means something
-okay... Worst punch in this battle though.
I'm not gonna try and get too in your face,your not worth more
Hey how does it feel running that trap shit... over at the drugstore...
-weak
okay ill took this mad easy... yung came weak and played.... good shit ill
V/Illestry
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your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
i know your impressed with the my sig "blow ya mind" moves your bones
closest you'll ever come to hot soundclick...is the sound my gat makes to ya dome
vs
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
.
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That Bar About The Children Saying They Came From Nothing - That Was Funny IMO...Ill Made Some Ok Hits, Some Bars Were Whack But overall, He Came Out Swinging Ok, Did Pull Off Some Hits & Wasnt As Weak As His Opponent..Yung, Your Verse Was Lacking On Creativity & Punches..You Didnt Seem To Put Much Effort Into Hitting Him, Not Bad But That Whole Verse Lacked...Only 1 Bar Was Ok At Most & Even That Wasnt Enough..
v/ Illestry
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RTF On This Battle
word
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upp iv voted on so many battles....
your a lonely desperate loser and you could never make a big show
your life is best expressed...from the view of your basement window
aight
your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
ha
your style blows and your not up to speed with how a battle goes
and im sure we've all seen yung guns... about twenty years ago
lol
i know your impressed with the my sig "blow ya mind" moves your bones
closest you'll ever come to hot soundclick...is the sound my gat makes to ya dome
ok
shit i didn't have to try on this but trust me i still produce killer bars
you like celebs? sick! then ill flatten you on the pavement to view the stars
cool
vs
look who's got a big mouth, but bitch did I ask for your opinion?
better watch that mouth now cuz your entering my dominion
ok
frontin with your trapping shit, you made a joke of yourself on open mic
I expected that piece to be followed by "live from new york its saturday night"
lol
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
ok
Maybe Im a psychic cuz I can feel unintelligent jokes about my name coming
but before you do, remember that at least my name means something*
aight
I'm not gonna try and get too in your face,your not worth more
Hey how does it feel running that trap shit... over at the drugstore...
lol
this was a close battle honestly. very close
i think illestry took this because he had more memorable lines
both played but close
just idnt fall off as much
v/illestry
vote DQ'd
-Arch
Last edited by The Archetype; November 1st, 2009 at 04:18 PM
word up
your children will be born into poverty so just trust me cause i ain't bluffing
don't be surprised if they whine and claim that they came from nothing
your style blows and your not up to speed with how a battle goes
and im sure we've all seen yung guns... about twenty years ago
vs
look I know you think you got skills oh if wishing made it true
cuz then you could summon up some balls and maybe strap them on too
Maybe Im a psychic cuz I can feel unintelligent jokes about my name coming
but before you do, remember that at least my name means something*
Both of you came hard, i think illestry's verse was powerful with hard hitting punches and yung's verse had a more comical approach. So in that case i have to go with illestry on this one even though sum of yung's lines made me chuckle. I just feel illestry had a more creative verse with harder punches. Good battle. No hate guys
Vote/ Illestry
word up i wanna close this
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