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    The Notorious E.N.G. Engivale's Avatar
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    Tingling

    Tingling





    I'm depression's opponent when I wrestle the moment,
    My best friend is bein' alone because I'm special to noone,
    Pencil to poem, pay the people the expense that you owe em',
    Eventually show em' that you're gonna get where you're goin'...
    A tragic loss like dyin' for the cash and crops,
    Half the cost of bein' human is the pads and locks,
    The passion's lost --- And what's it replaced with?
    A job that I hate but I work every day and the pay's shit...
    And guess what? The girls are like, "Let's Fuck."
    They dress up and next thing you know I make sex love...
    That's the mistake that I make when I crash in,
    Just ask when, How soon will I hate my fatal attraction?


    I'll think of more of these topics in Florida's tropics,
    If you gloat you're gonna be a note in a coroner's office,
    I'm reapin' the benefits of bein' deep in the kennel with
    Each of the people who keep beatin' effeminates,
    I'm a chain link, always attached to the same thing,
    Until it's broken I'm smokin' so much I can't sing...
    .....Carry a tune....... Deliver a note........
    Lord, bury me soon and please give her some hope,
    See, the liquor's the joke but nobody's laughing,
    Only time I'm drunk is when I go to bed sober collapsing...
    My focus is actually on the spiritual half of me,
    But I have to be happy so my faith is the casualty,
    The human race lives in apathy, all of us faced with
    Stayin' or leavin' who the fuck doesn't get on the spaceship?


    I'm red-blooded, in debt but it's whatever you get from it,
    Like the alcohol that had to fall in my wet stomach,
    Women can seduce me easily and use me greedily,
    As usual I believe that someone beautiful could be with me...
    The world does me a favor and makes girls too ugly to pay for,
    I lie in wait for inner beauty's lovelier nature...
    I was an idiot once, a dumb kid hittin' blunts,
    But now I save my shit and take a hit from the crumbs,
    Shit, give me the funds and I'll live like a King, man,
    And fly so fuckin' high you couldn't measure my wingspan...
    I thought I bought the affection but I'm off of the wagon,
    The popular direction was one only God could imagine...
    How often does it happen? ....A real moment...
    Your whole body tingles when you really feel it --- don't it?





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    Last edited by Engivale; October 24th, 2009 at 12:01 AM

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    Choose the sword... Iglosone's Avatar
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    Re: Tingling

    The passion's lost --- And what's it replaced with?
    A job that I hate but I work every day and the pay's shit...
    -that is my fucking life in a nut shell bro.. felt that

    Until it's broken I'm smokin' so much I can't sing...
    .....Carry a tune....... Deliver a note........
    Lord, bury me soon and please give her some hope,
    See, the liquor's the joke but nobody's laughing,
    Only time I'm drunk is when I go to bed sober collapsing...
    -fucking straight fire.. sick sick sick dawg.. felt that shit

    The human race lives in apathy, all of us faced with
    Stayin' or leavin' who the fuck doesn't get on the spaceship?
    -yeah.. I'd get on for real.. lol.. I feel like you do alot man

    Shit, give me the funds and I'll live like a King, man,
    And fly so fuckin' high you couldn't measure my wingspan...
    I thought I bought the affection but I'm off of the wagon,
    The popular direction was one only God could imagine...
    -bam sick


    your are fuckin nice dawg.. multis.. flow.. content.. I felt your style all the way.. if you ever wanna collab holla

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    You've earned a custom title! Cody Nash's Avatar
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    Re: Tingling

    Shit, give me the funds and I'll live like a King, man,
    And fly so fuckin' high you couldn't measure my wingspan...
    I thought I bought the affection but I'm off of the wagon,
    The popular direction was one only God could imagine...
    How often does it happen? ....A real moment...
    Your whole body tingles when you really feel it --- don't it?


    ^^that was.. damn dude.. seriously this was on some other shit.. like, I love LOVE/LOVE-LOSS pieces and this is just on some other shit.. like you don't know what love is REALLY suppose to be so you're almost asking your readers what it is making them question their beliefs based on what YOUR experience of it was.. that's just sick lol. this is one of those piece where I'm thinkin' "DAMN, I shoulda wrote that shit.."

    do you ever make a shitty fuckin piece bro? seriously lol. you smoke rocks once a month and pop out with this shit? really? hah.. no but good shit dude.. those lines quoted just hit me fuckin hard.. like... DAMN.. dunno if it's because I'm half asleep.. but I don't think it is.. I'm still conscious enough to be doing downloads for music and shit right now so I think it's actually a dope read.. rofl..


    good stuff man.. I might PM you bout a collabo later if you're up for it..

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    Fly in under the Radar. Tactixx's Avatar
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    Re: Tingling

    Nice drop man....deep to say the least...the multi's and flow were both razor sharp in most places, transitions were also executed very nicely. The wording I thought was near perfect. very nice concept and style in which you wrote the piece as well, kinda a rhetorical feel to it? I thought anyway... Another wicked drop man.. Check out my Sun & The Moon piece... I wouldnt mind your thoughts on it bro...Peace...take it easy..

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    Re: Tingling

    Hall of Fame, easily...you fucking drunk bastard.



    This piece was really deep, and had a lot of amazing lines. I really want to hi-jack your rhymescheme because that shit tears up all others. Flow was rediculous bro. Seriously, wording was dope. You had a lot of really great concepts to play with. I loved the wingspan line a lot. But don't worry, that's not the only line I really liked lol. This was dope, deep emotion. Keep writing once a month, I enjoy every bit of it. Take a pick on which piece you want to feed on. I've got three dope collaborations on the front page.

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    Re: Tingling

    asshole, rediculous, more feed later

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