Black Saturn:
A Critical Perspective
by 2triple0
it was kind of a mixture between a comedy and a romance
because it was about two people who are about to have a moment
of love/hate relationship sort and in the end of something like that
someone always gets hurt... after your finally on the right track
this was very funny and very depressing at the same timeOriginally Posted by Three Days Grace
for this man because a girl just turned him into a hate crime..
i guess where the woman tells the man he's nothing
wasn't enough for this guy.. he didn't understand this woman
had more to deal with like her unborn child,
i think this guy shouldn't have taken up all of your time
and the girl just hasn't been paying attention to him,
and he doesn't know how much she is intending to give
their relationship a chance when it all depends on who he is..
a person's rhyme scheme must be a critical course
because even when topics lack, rhymes are a literal force
and when i saw the one Black Saturn used it amazed me,
although there were a few words in the wrong place, g.
the multi's that Saturn used, meant he kept the story direct
and made it seem that Saturn wrote an allegory for sex
everything that he was trying to connect to the topic...
could have been taken in many directions, which was awesome
where does the man go from here
when his woman's been pregnant half of a year...
she wanted him because he got shit at a price that's low
what was their history together? it would be nice to know
how they became involved in the first place...
i tried to understand and she just gave me the worst face,
it sounded like the man was just in lust for a woman
and it could have been any woman to be honest
but the girl was needing something that would make her proud
there's definitely more in there, but that's all i can say for now..