agree on 10-16 lines
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Jcorm
Divine Intervention
agree on 10-16 lines
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verse due midnight EST Thursday
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I'm planning on 16
G/L
I only plan on dropping 10...
I've got LLL, 1-2, REBL and shit loads of coursework etc for college.
If you drop first, I guess i'll have to match though.
*Looks at your avatar...*
See i'll just wreck this ugly cunt, send punches to rattle the brains of this thick shit
Then if I ever see J corm back for more, I'll grab that bandana and choke him with it
Your nose looks red as fuck man, Like you been ill and its a severe case
If I was your nose i'd be runnin' too... Away from the poor excuse for a face
This kids not hard or scary and if he fucks with Divine i'll make him pay
I'm not really into coke and weed... But watch how quickly smoke this J
See he's whack but he's got faith, He thinks he can beat Divine in this beef
Yo, i'll send that thought to the back of your mind... with ya eyes, nose and ya teeth
cuz you don't deserve to be here, your attempts to win just fucking suck
See Divine's hotness like a fucking Vindaloo... Where-as Corma's weak as fuck!
10
I hate 10 line battles......they're as pointless as the FL champ belt
You shoulda taken 16 and had a chance:
Only ten lines? Your fucking trash and you say fire burns inside what you created
So i'll prove your right and hold my three bars cuz 10 is enough to get you cremated
Your career's ass like a bad movie...I know what the trailer'd be like
It'd have a deep story....4 wheels and complete with a slutty wife
Then when you get cremated your urn'll resemble your life and what you tell of it
Formed with dark colors and have it be completly made of recycled elements
Now this dude is mad instantly, but bitches don't show you sympathy
Your only quality of divinity is the fact that haven't lost your virginity
You only went 10 and I still expect a win cuz of your time frame
Cuz you would never match me faggot, whether it's talent or line length
Votess
See i'll just wreck this ugly cunt, send punches to rattle the brains of this thick shit
Then if I ever see J corm back for more, I'll grab that bandana and choke him with it
Your nose looks red as fuck man, Like you been ill and its a severe case
If I was your nose i'd be runnin' too... Away from the poor excuse for a face
See he's whack but he's got faith, He thinks he can beat Divine in this beef
Yo, i'll send that thought to the back of your mind... with ya eyes, nose and ya teeth
vs
Your career's ass like a bad movie...I know what the trailer'd be like
It'd have a deep story....4 wheels and complete with a slutty wife
You only went 10 and I still expect a win cuz of your time frame
Cuz you would never match me faggot, whether it's talent or line length
Jcorm had a good verse, just opener was stretched and he a couple more misses...
Divine had a good verse too....and just less misses....closer was the only line i wasn't feeling.....
v/divine
Divine took this with more qoutables.. that nose running away from your face line & the back of the mind lines where dope..J corms wording/concepts killed em' in this battle considering how cocky he was with the post before his verse..
any way.. DI gMv..if you want a b4b bd lemme know...
See i'll just wreck this ugly cunt, send punches to rattle the brains of this thick shit
Then if I ever see J corm back for more, I'll grab that bandana and choke him with it
Ok start
Your nose looks red as fuck man, Like you been ill and its a severe case
If I was your nose i'd be runnin' too... Away from the poor excuse for a face
Lol
This kids not hard or scary and if he fucks with Divine i'll make him pay
I'm not really into coke and weed... But watch how quickly smoke this J
Meh alright
See he's whack but he's got faith, He thinks he can beat Divine in this beef
Yo, i'll send that thought to the back of your mind... with ya eyes, nose and ya teeth
OK
cuz you don't deserve to be here, your attempts to win just fucking suck
See Divine's hotness like a fucking Vindaloo... Where-as Corma's weak as fuck!
Meh closer, coulda been better
Vs
Only ten lines? Your fucking trash and you say fire burns inside what you created
So i'll prove your right and hold my three bars cuz 10 is enough to get you cremated
Meh
Your career's ass like a bad movie...I know what the trailer'd be like
It'd have a deep story....4 wheels and complete with a slutty wife
ok
Then when you get cremated your urn'll resemble your life and what you tell of it
Formed with dark colors and have it be completly made of recycled elements
Ok
Now this dude is mad instantly, but bitches don't show you sympathy
Your only quality of divinity is the fact that haven't lost your virginity
Meh
You only went 10 and I still expect a win cuz of your time frame
Cuz you would never match me faggot, whether it's talent or line length
lol
Wow this one is real close, I sort of expected DI to take this one but Jcorm came pretty good... Damn I have you guys dead even in this one so it's really hard for me to decide who should get this, I think your best bars actually were even so that dosen't help at all...I guess I enjoyed DI's verse just a LITTLE bit more then Jcorms verse but this was a very close battle and could go anyway
V=DI
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See i'll just wreck this ugly cunt, send punches to rattle the brains of this thick shit
Then if I ever see J corm back for more, I'll grab that bandana and choke him with it
meh
Your nose looks red as fuck man, Like you been ill and its a severe case
If I was your nose i'd be runnin' too... Away from the poor excuse for a face
ok personal
This kids not hard or scary and if he fucks with Divine i'll make him pay
I'm not really into coke and weed... But watch how quickly smoke this J
played concept
See he's whack but he's got faith, He thinks he can beat Divine in this beef
Yo, i'll send that thought to the back of your mind... with ya eyes, nose and ya teeth
I like it
cuz you don't deserve to be here, your attempts to win just fucking suck
See Divine's hotness like a fucking Vindaloo... Where-as Corma's weak as fuck!
wasn't feeling the closer so much
Vs
Only ten lines? Your fucking trash and you say fire burns inside what you created
So i'll prove your right and hold my three bars cuz 10 is enough to get you cremated
meh
Your career's ass like a bad movie...I know what the trailer'd be like
It'd have a deep story....4 wheels and complete with a slutty wife
ehh
Then when you get cremated your urn'll resemble your life and what you tell of it
Formed with dark colors and have it be completly made of recycled elements
meh
Now this dude is mad instantly, but bitches don't show you sympathy
Your only quality of divinity is the fact that haven't lost your virginity
ok
You only went 10 and I still expect a win cuz of your time frame
Cuz you would never match me faggot, whether it's talent or line length
so-so
V/Divine
Your nose looks red as fuck man, Like you been ill and its a severe case
If I was your nose i'd be runnin' too... Away from the poor excuse for a face
This kids not hard or scary and if he fucks with Divine i'll make him pay
I'm not really into coke and weed... But watch how quickly smoke this J
See he's whack but he's got faith, He thinks he can beat Divine in this beef
Yo, i'll send that thought to the back of your mind... with ya eyes, nose and ya teeth
vs
Now this dude is mad instantly, but bitches don't show you sympathy
Your only quality of divinity is the fact that haven't lost your virginity
You only went 10 and I still expect a win cuz of your time frame
Cuz you would never match me faggot, whether it's talent or line length
Only thing that really seperated this for me was wording. Both had some punches that
could have hit way harder than they did, but one of you had a weak flow to their verse
which kinda killed a couple lines. Concepts were okay. So...
v/ DI
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