Rd. 2: DJ~MG vs Hank McCoy

**The Archetype** · October 9th, 2009, 10:07 PM

agree on 10-16 lines
House Rules
Blind Spit
Check by midnight EST Tuesday
verse due midnight EST Thursday

**Hank McCoy** · October 10th, 2009, 03:24 PM

check...I'll give you 10,that's it.

**DGK** · October 11th, 2009, 12:22 AM

check, damn you set battles up quick, the only thing that sucks about this format is the battles get closed quick, so you gotta go to closed battles to peep em if you didn't see em, it would be dope if the battles stayed up on the page until you set up the new rounds. idn

**DGK** · October 14th, 2009, 11:55 PM

every time we see your wack spits, i wish i could delete ur verses bitch,
just make tha words fly off the page & send em to hell like that demon in ur sig,
your a fake MC, made of plastic in a display window mounted on a stand,
cuz Hank wouldn't be a Real Mckoy, if he ressurrected that 80's boy band,
when i spray clips, i'll crush this lil hallucenagenic toad when i spit,
leave you with "nagging" wounds, worse than Be Be's kids on a road trip,
fuckin light wieght, you need to elevate your rank, in order 2 stop losing,
cuz you couldn't gain weight, if your were Jim C puttin on 50 p's 4 3 Stooges,
i'm tearing you down, like Osama posters, serving this weak clown,
cuz this battle is more one sided, than going 2 rounds on Bully Beatdown.

10. g/l

**Hank McCoy** · October 15th, 2009, 08:21 PM

DJ~MG aka>fag in drag

...finito,listen up you dick pirate>

DJ..your chance at a win,the same as you catching the stars
HOPELESS & quite a reach,like ya punchlines force when your stretching ya bars
your texting is par,below & trash - this bitch blows, it's fact
& as far as ya quality punchlines go,they don't - their equivelent to evoca raps
you KNOW your whack!& yah many alias's proves that your really lame
fag in drag?ha!homo,I don't even have to punch you-the abuse is in your name
so a string of hits will leave yah abstract & rip yah core crunchless
your a retard who will STILL try to sit up n swing,due to ya really forced punches
and in this tourney,it's more than said you suck - doubt this?psh..
faggot the only time your good to go is when I'm saying - get the fuck out bitch!!

**DGK** · October 15th, 2009, 08:28 PM

uppin, and i hate explaining punches but JIm Carey is gaiing 50 pounds for his upcoming role in 3 stooges movie as Curly. i'm looking forward to thats shit. lol

**Hank McCoy** · October 15th, 2009, 09:05 PM

votes!...

**Mystery~Murdera** · October 16th, 2009, 02:47 AM

Be aware I'm judging by LLL standards. Don't feel bad as you two are both doing well to have made it this far and one of you will still continue. I'm straight up so don't feel like I'm hating if I say a punch sucks. Chances are it sucks. But I'll be fair in any critiscm. All about elevation.

DJ~MG
every time we see your wack spits, i wish i could delete ur verses bitch,
just make tha words fly off the page & send em to hell like that demon in ur sig,
...what? gotta get more clever... send your words to hell? like your signature? The punch just isn't that effective. Good you're being direct though. Try to work on the multis and the rhyming a little bit more though. 2/10
your a fake MC, made of plastic in a display window mounted on a stand,
cuz Hank wouldn't be a Real Mckoy, if he ressurrected that 80's boy band,
okay... This was more creative than last def. Same thing with rhyme and punch was somewhat weak. Not absolutely horrible though. 4/10
when i spray clips, i'll crush this lil hallucenagenic toad when i spit,
leave you with "nagging" wounds, worse than Be Be's kids on a road trip,
I like the past references. Make something fresh again. Thinking outside the box. But the punch was just kinda poorly worded and just doesn't hit that hard. I like the idea just not the delivery. The Be Be - nagging concept was bad to begin with. 3/10
fuckin light wieght, you need to elevate your rank, in order 2 stop losing,
cuz you couldn't gain weight, if your were Jim C puttin on 50 p's 4 3 Stooges,
no. wtf really? Was that a 3 stooges punch? Seems like you were just looking anywhere for concepts on this one... 2/10
i'm tearing you down, like Osama posters, serving this weak clown,
cuz this battle is more one sided, than going 2 rounds on Bully Beatdown.
... see ^^^ okay 4/10

so... your verse shows you have an idea and you're making an attempt so I can't fault it completely. Your multis need to get better just because it helps with flow and wording. Those will end up making your punches better. Some weak punches will sneak by as decent if worded correctly. But I think once you master the basics you might surprise us with some really fresh concepts. Overall tally: 15/50. It's going to take alot for you to continue in the tourney with that verse.

Mccoy
DJ..your chance at a win,the same as you catching the stars
HOPELESS & quite a reach,like ya punchlines force when your stretching ya bars
hmmm... not bad, direct, aggression, not extremely clever but def a swing and wording was pretty decent. 6/10
your texting is par,below & trash - this bitch blows, it's fact
& as far as ya quality punchlines go,they don't - their equivelent to evoca raps
your rhyme scheme is solid. Last time I comment on that. This was one of those weak punches that DJ needs to word better to make okay. 5/10
you KNOW your whack!& yah many alias's proves that your really lame
fag in drag?ha!homo,I don't even have to punch you-the abuse is in your name
okay 5/10
so a string of hits will leave yah abstract & rip yah core crunchless
your a retard who will STILL try to sit up n swing,due to ya really forced punches
nah... stretch. Trying a little too hard here 4/10
and in this tourney,it's more than said you suck - doubt this?psh..
faggot the only time your good to go is when I'm saying - get the fuck out bitch!!
very poor close 2/10.. rhymed something psh and said "get out bitch" pretty shitty
2/10

Hank, you get it, that's clear... direct, good wording for the most part, you rhyme well. Kept repeating the punch stretched/forced concept though. Time to get fresher so you can elevate. You're def not far. Anybody who says you have no potential is a lie. I was actually surprised. Not too bad. At all. I don't even have to tally to know you won this. Did seem like you knew it and got lazy towards the end of your verse though. ha. >15/50 I'm sure. I feel like you could be a sleeper. I don't think it will happen this tourney but I wouldn't be surprised if you jumped up and bit a sleeping vet in the ass.

v/ Hank

**DGK** · October 16th, 2009, 07:02 PM

meh, uppin, thanks for the indepth feed, i felt you were being a tad harsher on my verse cuz i voted for Sanity in your battle, but atleast you explained your vote.

**DGK** · October 16th, 2009, 07:03 PM

uppin

**Verbal Hologram** · October 16th, 2009, 09:39 PM

DJ~MG
every time we see your wack spits, i wish i could delete ur verses bitch,
just make tha words fly off the page & send em to hell like that demon in ur sig,
na
your a fake MC, made of plastic in a display window mounted on a stand,
cuz Hank wouldn't be a Real Mckoy, if he ressurrected that 80's boy band,
meh
when i spray clips, i'll crush this lil hallucenagenic toad when i spit,
leave you with "nagging" wounds, worse than Be Be's kids on a road trip,
meh
fuckin light wieght, you need to elevate your rank, in order 2 stop losing,
cuz you couldn't gain weight, if your were Jim C puttin on 50 p's 4 3 Stooges,
na didn't hit homie
i'm tearing you down, like Osama posters, serving this weak clown,
cuz this battle is more one sided, than going 2 rounds on Bully Beatdown.
wasn't feeling it

vs

DJ..your chance at a win,the same as you catching the stars
HOPELESS & quite a reach,like ya punchlines force when your stretching ya bars
ok
your texting is par,below & trash - this bitch blows, it's fact
& as far as ya quality punchlines go,they don't - their equivelent to evoca raps
meh
you KNOW your whack!& yah many alias's proves that your really lame
fag in drag?ha!homo,I don't even have to punch you-the abuse is in your name
so-so
so a string of hits will leave yah abstract & rip yah core crunchless
your a retard who will STILL try to sit up n swing,due to ya really forced punches
meh
and in this tourney,it's more than said you suck - doubt this?psh..
faggot the only time your good to go is when I'm saying - get the fuck out bitch!!
ehh should of had a better closer

V/Hank

**Mystery~Murdera** · October 16th, 2009, 10:10 PM

Originally Posted by DJ~MG

meh, uppin, thanks for the indepth feed, i felt you were being a tad harsher on my verse cuz i voted for Sanity in your battle, but atleast you explained your vote.

Your opponent voted for Sanity in my battle... your verse was how I saw it. It's a bad move to question my integrity. I've been on this site for going on... 8 or 9 years now and I've never done anything shady. When you elevate I want you to come back and read this and tell me what you think. You'll agree. I just tell how it is homie. I've always been known for that.

**A. Karpis** · October 16th, 2009, 10:20 PM

DJ..your chance at a win,the same as you catching the stars
HOPELESS & quite a reach,like ya punchlines force when your stretching ya bars

only good line of the battle IMO

DJ's didn't have anything hard hitting....alot of random punches

Hank, seen the good to go done alot lately....couple other concepts were decent...
Overall just a better verse with less misses
No hate, but i couldn't quote any of Dj's

V/Hank

**Ctrl Alt Elite** · October 17th, 2009, 06:17 AM

your a fake MC, made of plastic in a display window mounted on a stand,
cuz Hank wouldn't be a Real Mckoy, if he ressurrected that 80's boy band,

VS

DJ..your chance at a win,the same as you catching the stars
HOPELESS & quite a reach,like ya punchlines force when your stretching ya bars
your texting is par,below & trash - this bitch blows, it's fact
& as far as ya quality punchlines go,they don't - their equivelent to evoca raps
you KNOW your whack!& yah many alias's proves that your really lame
fag in drag?ha!homo,I don't even have to punch you-the abuse is in your name

V- Hank