SiCk MinDz

[Calli]

yea thats why i post my verses in here.....would be nice to have a sub forum, as to not clutter yalls convos

[Race]

i m fucking stoned.. shit

[Calli]

then go drop a bolder on someone.....quickly

[Dan K]

im bout to be lol..welcome. rep it well son. we bout to do big things haha. let me go rad that verse cal.

[Race]

yall can peep my shit got two topical battles poping off, and a few text

[Dan K]

lol Calli thats pretty sick. Your concepts are dope as fuck. The only criticism i have is that your bars are really stretched. Try shortening your lines like you would in a audio. Its not necc to have them that long it ruins the feel of the verse. And also, ppl dont really like seeing all the "" and the caps and what not. Ppl are smart enough to pick up the wordplays and such (most of them) with out all the decoration and explanations it makes it seem like your trying to hard ya feel me. But your concepts and wordplay are sick dude. You have the potential to be ill at text. Real talk.

[Calli]

hahaha thanks Dan.......this will not be a trend, im not a battler bruh...i'll leave that to you

but heres that verse the collab.....i'll try and record this weekend maybe, or at least start on it.

Who am I Death homie mixed with carnage
we aint worried bout safety, ditch the harness
regardless, bout to peel ya back
tryin to step to my flow you’ll need some gills for that
this is serious business
Distinguished gentlemen only appear as some bitches
Yeaaaaaa
Then we kick back feet on the desk
Just relieving some stress to give the feeble some rest
aint no equal to test, man we better than yall
keep on prayin to GOD, cuz
Calli pulls the trigger and cause the heavens to fall
Cut your time line you aint my kind
Im at the bar ethered up you drinkin Mai Tai’s
Why even try…….just shoot yourself
Tell your moms get your tux ready, Suit Yourself
We keep the tools on our waist like Utility Belts
We don’t give a shit…….the abilities felt
Fuck killin with stealth we’ll drag em into the light
I got a sick mind designed to bring an end to your life
Pick up a Mic and react
Gotta beastly squad, prepare the lican attack
Given information when the Mayans collapsed
So by the year 2012, we the Titans of Rap
Take a breather
Only student dropped out came back and trained the teacher
So I’ll lead ya past but u cant keep the pace
So I feed em to DEATH and watch em plead they case

[Dan K]

Here's what I got so far...

I got a sick mind...so you know im perverted.
ya Dont know my name, well you fixin to learn it
Demandin' respect..and you know we deserve it
ya Wanna hear Dope...Dan's fixin to serve it
Full of Twisted concepts, we bout to unearth it
So let the the track drop, so we can disperse it
No need to disturb it, my flow is so perfect
Invest in sick mind, Garuntee it is worth it.
They staring at me, cuz the just dont know...
how this white boy can be this dope.
I got no doubt....i'll knock ya lights out
and Ya cant smoke Dan K, i never space out (think about this a min lol)
We roll deep....Sick Mindz on the beat
Ya boy Dan K, Calli, Papes, and Sleep.
So just take a seat...ya in for a treat
Aint seen 4 games like this since a word series sweep

[Calli]

ha i like that, flow on that is real smooth Dan.......

and i got cha Chris

[Dan K]

yea i aint gonna try to be too complicated...just let it flow smooth ya know haha. I like it i think lol.

[Dan K]

i guess i should do 16 more? we doing 32 each?

[xPaperBoy]

I prolly will just write whatever I feel like writing lol.

[Calli]

^^^^^same here

same to you Dan.....whatever you feel comfortable with bruh

[Dan K]

true...is there gonna be a hook?

[Calli]

naw i dont do hooks, i just jump right in........i repeat the last work of the guy before me and dont miss a beat.

BUT, if you think you can come up with one....then by all means handle up.....lol i aint mad at you