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Thread: whur'd i go wrong

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    King of da 440 Sticky da Kid's Avatar
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    whur'd i go wrong

    u gonna be fly till ill show u da effects of gravity,
    aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRe is gettin brought down to face reality,
    u thought u was bad as me, ill prove otherwise to u happily,
    u better be a gud friend of grey da way imma fuk up ur anatomy,
    boy i spit catastrophes ur loss is jus calamity,
    hope u read da bible, get left holy like Christianity,
    yea im jus a kid, but imma work u like a factory,
    da boy marv is jus a commodity, u lackin in quality,
    i dnt fuk wit lamers, between us thur aint no amity,
    get chewed up n shyt out, u sweet like a cavity
    Sticky or da Kid, which one if these two is able to write and awe,
    One's business one artistic so its likely they would tie or draw,

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    Re: whur'd i go wrong

    sum1 any1
    Sticky or da Kid, which one if these two is able to write and awe,
    One's business one artistic so its likely they would tie or draw,

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    Re: whur'd i go wrong

    After i last gave you tips,i see you have taken my advice on board,and you are on the right path,but you need to realise no matter how much info i give you,or help,tips etc,you only become a better battler by doing it..ive had over 300...and anyone who you look at on this site and think 'wow he's sick',i bet he/she has had alot too,just keep at it,stay battling actively,and dont try punching above your weight,if you post an open callout in bitch slapped,and someone comes in looking for an easy win,i'll send them packing,dont you worry...i'll keep an eye out for your battles to make sure people dont try beating on you for an easy win

    peace

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    Re: whur'd i go wrong



    da kid is a savage, leave ya face smashed in da granite,
    ya flow weak like a calender, so dont fuk wit me maggot,
    well nigga, i had it, bustin loose n i let you have it,
    i followed da rainbow n ended up meetin dis faggot,
    i kno u cant stand it, boy ill toast ya like toof,
    calm n mellow in da streets, but a beast up in da booth,
    seems like yo missions impossible, like a tom wit no cruise,
    witout me u wldnt kno wat to do, like u was hitler wit no jews,
    u think u up in da game, but u really quite low,
    like my eyes n shouldes after i get dun smokin da dro

    ^ that was the first verse you showed me...



    u gonna be fly till ill show u da effects of gravity,
    aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRe is gettin brought down to face reality,
    u thought u was bad as me, ill prove otherwise to u happily,
    u better be a gud friend of grey da way imma fuk up ur anatomy,
    boy i spit catastrophes ur loss is jus calamity,
    hope u read da bible, get left holy like Christianity,
    yea im jus a kid, but imma work u like a factory,
    da boy marv is jus a commodity, u lackin in quality,
    i dnt fuk wit lamers, between us thur aint no amity,
    get chewed up n shyt out, u sweet like a cavity

    ^ this was the second... and i thought it came harder

    so it shows you can,and will get better,just keep thinking of new punches to diss your opponent with,by comparing other things to them...


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