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You exist;
between existing to suck at Life,
and not existing at all.
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You exist;
between existing to suck at Life,
and not existing at all.
Feed
You exist;
between existing to suck at Life,
and not existing at all.
up..
You exist;
between existing to suck at Life,
and not existing at all.
Its punchy so quick breakdown
It’s a new day, talking to satan on two way
combin over our plans with Donald trumps tu'pe
[B]Rhymes are nice, punch is just ok, *toupee*
creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
make everyone wear a patched iris
.....................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see
Rhymes nice again, again wordings a little off
ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks
Kinda funny in a competely nonsensical way
preachin love in every letter but not z cuz when...
I raise my hands it reveals a swastika over 3 buttons
Dont get this,
Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece
Dont like the setup, punch is just an ok cross wp
he got a hit for free in my chest compartments
but it didn’t do shit to me beacuse im heartless
Needed to push the heartlessness in the setup
manifesting the type of darkness flashlights can penetrate
the type of darkness the KKK cant even begin to hate
flashlights cant penetrate would have worked better, good KKK flip
fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
while I put meters on air tanks
........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
Cool
I lost the keys to life but my mental prowess is evident
I control anything wit a brain… now if I could only control the president
Blah
beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit
meh
lucipher gave me a phone call, wanted me to do a driveby
thing is, to actually serve this... i'd have to be sky high
nah
hold a fish tank full of serpants, i know that its certain
And a motion of my hand could make the earth spin
Ok, coulda been nicer
father time was actually my dad, but i hated this bitch
hung him with a pocket watch, ...now age would exist
set ups weak
key to the underworld, yeah im friends with the locksmith
my life would start in the womb and end in your pockets
Huh? Setups better here than the punch
leave you straight broke, create a masterpeice in 8 notes
i love that gurgling sound I hear when i slay throats
grimey, again the setups weak tho
exhale the cold smoke, i'll blend into it, no joke
flow through vents and give ammonia to old folks
Nice, tho its *pneumonia not ammonia*
run up on your block, spilled kool aid, no wait thats blood
yeah.. uh..... um..... uh........ *shrug*
Nah
needle the pentagram, i let tattoos jump in the pad
hell yes im sinnin' bad, ...spark voodoo in trinidad
Better
my mindstate is colder and Colder, Bigger then bolders
over and over, the devil is the only thing on my shoulder
Needed better wording, and this could have been done with a better setup
i get lower and lower,
.................... let the tec spray hit 100 babies.....its over
"Just wonder what god is gonna think when im older"
Weak closer
rtf
Plottin your demise.
kk.thanks
You exist;
between existing to suck at Life,
and not existing at all.
why does ur ish say meta convict but ur not rockin
anything to rep L.O.K.?
r u not with the legion or what.....
anyway....this was a good piece
the concepts where consistantly interesting
with all kind of crazy shit that was right
up my alley so to speak...wtf @ those gloves
you wanna make man...now ur fingers
gonna nut huh....i dont know why you would
want to make a glove that gets women pregnant
unless you dont have a dick and want to use ur
finger instead but hey....to each his own
your flow was witty it had a good tempo that
i was vibing with....i hope all your drops in the
near future are as interesting as this piece was
it kinda reminded me of some good ole
crazy eminem shit...
props....stay up^
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Up..
ups...
One of the mods (probably Cry) WILL bone you for how old this piece be
...
Anyway I read the second line and stopped. Way to kill my interest.
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this shit was wild, you had a decent rhymescheme throughout. ya had some pretty good vocab too. word usage was alright, and overrall it was a good read. made me lol on some of the shit you said.
^^lmao
anyway Dont sleep..
Refreshed.
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