Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

[Rivalyn]

Wtf...

[metaphoric]

one of the sickest pieces i've read man this was ridiculous,
loved it from beggining to end!

[Oranges]

awesome drop Riv the lyrics on here were str8 gully.

while I put meters on air tanks
........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
I lost the keys to life but my mental prowess is evident
I control anything wit a brain… now if I could only control the president
beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit

AWEsome piece right there, don't get me wrong the rest was great I liked your topic and format. Others have done the topic similiarly before you though so that does diminish it a bit but this is still a really good piece. Well Done man. I could envision this being spitted over Trapped in a Psycho's Body or something like that. eerie.

Kind of refreshing to see an artist come with that kind of perspective I mean the things people might think about in fleeting moments of their days but dont speak about with anyone. real cool.

[Rivalyn]

This wasnt really a topic lol



i was literally walking with the devil

lol

this is what i was literally thinking....so i decided to write it

[The Incredible Hulk]

It’s a new day, talking to satan on two way
combin over our plans with Donald trumps tu'pe
lol
creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
make everyone wear a patched iris
.....................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see
nice
ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks
lol
Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece
nice
manifesting the type of darkness flashlights can penetrate
the type of darkness the KKK cant even begin to hate
yeh
fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
while I put meters on air tanks
........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
lol nice,i had something like this abit ago,but this is different
beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit
lol
lucipher gave me a phone call, wanted me to do a driveby
thing is, to actually serve this... i'd have to be sky high
nice
father time was actually my dad, but i hated this bitch
hung him with a pocket watch, ...now age would exist
nice
key to the underworld, yeah im friends with the locksmith
my life would start in the womb and end in your pockets
nice
leave you straight broke, create a masterpeice in 8 notes
i love that gurgling sound I hear when i slay throats
nasty
run up on your block, spilled kool aid, no wait thats blood
yeah.. uh..... um..... uh........ *shrug*
haha

i get lower and lower,
.................... let the tec spray hit 100 babies.....its over
"Just wonder what god is gonna think when im older"
-damn
ok ending


Overall this was a DOPE drop...i havent seen much from you,but this was sort of a vent piece,and you wrote it perfectly..i ending up quoting 70% of the lines at least...nice..

i am nominating this for H.O.F...as i thought it was that good...

keep writing,and dropping more...also if you ever wanna collab,hit me up,as this is my kind of work..

[Rivalyn]

Thank you Hulk


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