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    Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

    "The Crazy Mind Of Rivalyn: Walking With the Devil"
    By: Rivalyn

    It’s a new day, talking to satan on two way
    combin over our plans with Donald trumps tu'pe
    creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
    make everyone wear a patched iris
    ......................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see
    ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
    creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks
    preachin love in every letter but not z cuz when...
    I raise my hands it reveals a swastika over 3 buttons
    Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
    Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece
    he got a hit for free in my chest compartments
    but it didn’t do shit to me beacuse im heartless
    manifesting the type of darkness flashlights can penetrate
    the type of darkness the KKK cant even begin to hate
    fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
    while I put meters on air tanks
    ........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
    I lost the keys to life but my mental prowess is evident
    I control anything wit a brain… now if I could only control the president
    beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
    Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit
    lucipher gave me a phone call, wanted me to do a driveby
    thing is, to actually serve this... i'd have to be sky high
    hold a fish tank full of serpants, i know that its certain
    And a motion of my hand could make the earth spin
    father time was actually my dad, but i hated this bitch
    hung him with a pocket watch, ...now age would exist
    key to the underworld, yeah im friends with the locksmith
    my life would start in the womb and end in your pockets
    leave you straight broke, create a masterpeice in 8 notes
    i love that gurgling sound I hear when i slay throats
    exhale the cold smoke, i'll blend into it, no joke
    flow through vents and give ammonia to old folks
    run up on your block, spilled kool aid, no wait thats blood
    yeah.. uh..... um..... uh........ *shrug*
    needle the pentagram, i let tattoos jump in the pad
    hell yes im sinnin' bad, ...spark voodoo in trinidad
    my mindstate is colder and Colder, Bigger then bolders
    over and over, the devil is the only thing on my shoulder
    i get lower and lower,
    .................... let the tec spray hit 100 babies.....its over
    "Just wonder what god is gonna think when im older"
    -damn




    *Walks out*
    Last edited by Rivalyn; February 2nd, 2010 at 11:50 AM

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    Last edited by Rivalyn; September 30th, 2009 at 01:01 PM

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    Re: Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

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    Re: Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

    man -this whole fuccin piece was str8 nasty homie.. definitely surprised to find what i found in here, ur on a different level of creativity with this joint.. break down as follows..

    It’s a new day, talking to satan on two way
    combin over our plans with Donald trumps tu'pe

    man -sicc way to open this

    creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
    make everyone wear a patched iris
    .....................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see

    nasty -love the break in the rhyme scheme, dont know why people dont see it when i do this

    ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
    creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks

    interesting concept.. i prefer the old fashioned way lmfao!!

    preachin love in every letter but not z cuz when...
    I raise my hands it reveals a swastika over 3 buttons

    lmfao!!!!!! -this will prolly go over some heads.. loved it, i mean -i am adolf spitler man, come on

    Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
    Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece

    cool.. always love the battle between god n the devil type shyt

    he got a hit for free in my chest compartments
    but it didn’t do shit to me beacuse im heartless

    slipped a little in the smooth department here.. only by like half a syllable though lol

    manifesting the type of darkness flashlights can penetrate
    the type of darkness the KKK cant even begin to hate

    lmfao!!!!!!! -nice fuccin kkk flip man

    fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
    while I put meters on air tanks
    ........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath

    ok.. seen it done a little better before -but yeah, cool

    I lost the keys to life but my mental prowess is evident
    I control anything wit a brain… now if I could only control the president

    i feel u man..

    beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
    Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit

    wow -sicc fuccin lines man, loved this part the most so far

    lucipher gave me a phone call, wanted me to do a driveby
    thing is, to actually serve this... i'd have to be sky high

    not sure if i really liked this part..
    fucc a drug induced thug

    hold a fish tank full of serpants, i know that its certain
    And a motion of my hand could make the earth spin

    pretty sick

    father time was actually my dad, but i hated this bitch
    hung him with a pocket watch, ...now age would exist

    nice concepts here.. pretty nasty

    key to the underworld, yeah im friends with the locksmith
    my life would start in the womb and end in your pockets

    ok

    leave you straight broke, create a masterpeice in 8 notes
    i love that gurgling sound I hear when i slay throats
    exhale the cold smoke, i'll blend into it, no joke
    flow through vents and give ammonia to old folks

    the first two bars were nice.. wasnt really feeling the second two

    run up on your block, spilled kool aid, no wait thats blood
    yeah.. uh..... um..... uh........ *shrug*

    lmmfao!!!!! dumb ass

    needle the pentagram, i let tattoos jump in the pad
    hell yes im sinnin' bad, ...spark voodoo in trinidad

    lol -nice.. your gettin sick with the syllables. love it

    my mindstate is colder and Colder, Bigger then bolders
    over and over, the devil is the only thing on my shoulder
    i get lower and lower,
    .................... let the tec spray hit 100 babies.....its over
    "Just wonder what god is gonna think when im older"
    -damn

    nice way to close this piece out man.. in all this was real sicc... type of verse i would vote as HOF material.. thats just me man

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    Re: Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

    Lmao

    thankz


    iwas high when i wrote it..so thankz


    up,,

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    Re: Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

    i have to admit this was nice and would definitely be a dope audio. the whole verse had a real good flow to it. people need to wake up and quit sleepin on skills. anyway i'ma quote some shit right now..

    creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
    make everyone wear a patched iris
    .....................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see
    ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
    creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks
    that finger fuck line was some funny shit and in a way got me thinking you one crazy mothafucka. this whole piece was quite interesting to read though....

    Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
    Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece
    this was dope as fuck and not only that but it's creative too. gotta say man you got one hell of a brain.

    fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
    while I put meters on air tanks
    ........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
    lmfao haha *dead*

    beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
    Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit
    this was dope and fucked up at the same time.. i like it though.

    my mindstate is colder and Colder, Bigger then bolders
    over and over, the devil is the only thing on my shoulder
    i get lower and lower,
    .................... let the tec spray hit 100 babies.....its over
    "Just wonder what god is gonna think when im older"
    dope ending and flowed real nice too.. let the tec spray hit 100 babies its over lol.. your crazy and im serious when i say that yo lol.. real dope shit though.


    overall your one crazy mothafucka and i liked this piece. some real creative bars in this verse.. high or not you did a good job and kept me entertained. lol @ the asthmatics bar though. by the way i peeped your sig and just wanna say the audio was dope too. congrats on this drop too. keep writing and pz riva.

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    Re: Crazy Mind of Rivalyn: Walking With The Devil

    Thankz bro


    Up.

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    It’s a new day, talking to satan on two way
    combin over our plans with Donald trumps tu'pe
    creating a phat viruses corruptin files and promotin piracy
    make everyone wear a patched iris
    .....................cuz I'm to evil for the naked eye to see
    strong beginning the best way to catch the NETCEE's mind.

    ejaculating over latex and ivory and putting em in a Lincoln truck
    creatin a new glove so women can get pregnant off finger fucks
    lol this is funny......

    Riva comin wit trovolta movies and leave you bleedin grease
    Lucifer tried to cross me and stab me wit a jesus piece
    he got a hit for free in my chest compartments
    but it didn’t do shit to me beacuse im heartless
    strong powerful part here.....can feel wat u said....

    fuck it I spit in your face and jack the crowns off your teeth
    while I put meters on air tanks
    ........................and tell asthmatics that it costs to breath
    I lost the keys to life but my mental prowess is evident
    I control anything wit a brain… now if I could only control the president
    nice im feeling this....

    beatin up Christians wit leather bits cuz there big headed and lucrative
    Christ only died by crucifix cuz I couldn’t find a noose ta fit
    lucipher gave me a phone call, wanted me to do a driveby
    thing is, to actually serve this... i'd have to be sky high
    fuckin nice rite hear.....would def sound nice as n audio with a few edits you've got a mixtape BANGA.....tired of croppin n pastin for verse edit....but yo this spit was creative, skilled n smartly presented stay up...

    leave feed for the bermuda kid...
    The Becoming...

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    thankz up..

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