this is a disappointing battle. i refuse to vote.
this is a disappointing battle. i refuse to vote.
^ ^Originally Posted by s3oul
At Least Give Feedback Then
Idiot... What good is that? No-ones gonna get better if your just say
"Your shit, Not voting."
I'll vote later. I'm at college now.
There was one good bar in this battle and it was text emcee's opener. That shit was good. Very worthy. Everything else I read was blah or stretched or poorly worded with a shitty concept. In fact that bar was so good when I first read it my initial thought was "wonder where he bit this from?". Anyway. Ass vs. that bar + ass better worded.
v/ Text Emcee
PS: I broke down what wildcard actually is in the chat. It's not a wildcard tournament. It's one match.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...index1773.html
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Up.
In all honesty, I gotta agree with that. That opener really was fire man. If i'd read through this before my mag, I'd of put it in the top punches for sure.
Nice shit, but the rest of the battle was a lil weak.
V-Text
thanks. up.
"Confessions Of A Teenage Drama Queen" & He's The Whole Damn Subject
....See He Wears That Title So Well, Its Gonna Make Lindsey Lohan Upset
(alright)
He's Weak As Fuck..We All Know What To Expect When Text Rhymes
So When He Drops His Verse....We'll Be Looking At 10 DEADLINES
(ok)
Stop Rapping - You'd Make A Living Doing A 9-5 Making Enough Bucks
Cuz You Talk So Much,
......Yer Manager Would Pay You ALOT Just To Shut Up
(alright)
Rap Aint Paying Off For You, So You'll Just Get Dropped As I See Fit
Cuz Yer Skill Is Falling To A Degree That Sky Divers Cant Compete With
(meh)
You Already Fight Like A Girl, Now You Give Us Proof To Clown You, Bitch
Losing Is A Tragic Event...But Yer Experienced When It Comes Down To It
(playyyyyyyyyyyed)
VS
This wins in the bag for text, for this DJ to say the same? Not so much...
For him to atleast fit an L in his, he'd have to remove the lipgloss, eyeliner, makeup and such....
(stretched, and the makeup shit is so fucking played)
All of your wins courtesy of dickriders, and if you had an actually vote that'd matter?
you'd see that when a voter puts "meh" after your bar... They're usually a whack battler..
(meh)
During the after party feast for me, all the winners already moved to dessert you see....
And while were all pigging out on cherry pie, this faggots still asking for more meat...
(played)
Your voting rings doing a poor job at hiding as you can see the above notes...
And After he's seen his girl was already on my dick... He hopped right back over to s3ouls...
(strrrrretched......but ok)
Fuckin fatass, I'm suprised you could even bare look at yourself and still see...
If your thoughts were EVER designed... Why you still wondering why you have No P...
(weak closer)
so by a hair in a battle that couldn't make a horny teenager get a boner, I vote DJ since he actually made a couple attempts at punches and his lines weren't stretched. either ya'll had great metas (mostly played) or personals.
V/DJ
lol how was that bar "meh" when you're whack too.
It's all good.
up
Stop Rapping - You'd Make A Living Doing A 9-5 Making Enough Bucks
Cuz You Talk So Much,
......Yer Manager Would Pay You ALOT Just To Shut Up
Rap Aint Paying Off For You, So You'll Just Get Dropped As I See Fit
Cuz Yer Skill Is Falling To A Degree That Sky Divers Cant Compete With
...vs
All of your wins courtesy of dickriders, and if you had an actually vote that'd matter?
you'd see that when a voter puts "meh" after your bar... They're usually a whack battler
Fuckin fatass, I'm suprised you could even bare look at yourself and still see...
If your thoughts were EVER designed... Why you still wondering why you have No P...
this was basically a tie to me both were preety equal to me I mean dj ya verse was mehish but that manager line was pretty humorous...and text ya verse was also mehish but ya meh line was also humorous overall both were equal dj had better wording but text had better structure and the punches that had affect were equal.....um lemme reread again..okay sorry my nigga but I felt dj was more consistant..ya know i vote honestly no hate...hit up my battles honestly plz
The words I write are oxygen to greatness.
dick riders....blah blah blah.....wack battlers.....blah blah blah....find a new topic bruh.
"Confessions Of A Teenage Drama Queen" & He's The Whole Damn Subject
....See He Wears That Title So Well, Its Gonna Make Lindsey Lohan Upset
ok...
He's Weak As Fuck..We All Know What To Expect When Text Rhymes
So When He Drops His Verse....We'll Be Looking At 10 DEADLINES
eh... ok flip on a played concept
Stop Rapping - You'd Make A Living Doing A 9-5 Making Enough Bucks
Cuz You Talk So Much,
......Yer Manager Would Pay You ALOT Just To Shut Up
nah...
Rap Aint Paying Off For You, So You'll Just Get Dropped As I See Fit
Cuz Yer Skill Is Falling To A Degree That Sky Divers Cant Compete With
eh...
You Already Fight Like A Girl, Now You Give Us Proof To Clown You, Bitch
Losing Is A Tragic Event...But Yer Experienced When It Comes Down To It
statementish...
vs
This wins in the bag for text, for this DJ to say the same? Not so much...
For him to atleast fit an L in his, he'd have to remove the lipgloss, eyeliner, makeup and such....
not bad... pretty good flip on a played concept...
All of your wins courtesy of dickriders, and if you had an actually vote that'd matter?
you'd see that when a voter puts "meh" after your bar... They're usually a whack battler..
eh... weak...
During the after party feast for me, all the winners already moved to dessert you see....
And while were all pigging out on cherry pie, this faggots still asking for more meat...
nah...
Your voting rings doing a poor job at hiding as you can see the above notes...
And After he's seen his girl was already on my dick... He hopped right back over to s3ouls...
lol... ok...
Fuckin fatass, I'm suprised you could even bare look at yourself and still see...
If your thoughts were EVER designed... Why you still wondering why you have No P...
eh...
pretty even overall... wording kept both of you from the sting in your punches... but TE had the 2 best bars... both of you are getting better though...
vote TE
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