10 Lines
due 30
10 Lines
due 30
your punches won't hurt me, and i'm just being real G
after all it takes about 5 of you, just to get me tipsy
you won't do much damage in this battle, cuz truth is your soft
dude's tryna drop a quick key, but we all know hes screwed off the top
Check..and what was that? Your check? rofl
your punches won't hurt me, and i'm just being real G
after all it takes about 5 of you, just to get me tipsy
you won't do much damage in this battle, cuz truth is your soft
dude's tryna drop a quick key, but we all know hes screwed off the top
this is an easy win, i'll just smile and grin so you best surrender
dog you couldnt hit me if your ass was a bartender
this kid has no swag, so it's quite simple to see this dudes lame
when we said do the number, we didnt mean on your damn name
you got no game, im pushing for this win full throttle
and i'm not tryna be racist, when i say i'll cracka bottle
It’s about time you got an L, cause you’re obviously getting cocky
Breaking hearts when? Not after bitches hear about your floppy
And speaking of this gay guy, how’s your old golf-buddies hard drive?
That fag had you screaming “Soft-where?! Take that club out my Par-5!”
You see I sting like a bee-hive, an ali when it comes to texts
I’ll butterfly you like a steak, fuck a break…………………………….
………………………………….…….i’ll give you a heart attack instead
Put you to rest with no stress, in an early grave with a closed casket
Cause who wants to see the face of an open and shut case of a fag with suicidal tourrettes?
Lets see your best verse after I deliver you headless in a black hearse
I didn’t need these 10 lines to tell you on time – you’re the worst
Horrible battle. 51 you got the idea of concepts now, but your delivery is killin the punches. You was endin your concepts with different ones and it messed up your flow all togther. HB attempted the only punch that madde sense, even though it was played and not flipped well, but it was still a punch...
this is an easy win, i'll just smile and grin so you best surrender
dog you couldnt hit me if your ass was a bartender
v/ HB
consider the favor returned
Thanks for feed - I've had some serious writers block lately tbheverythings been coming out forced and such *shrug* oh well...
you won't do much damage in this battle, cuz truth is your soft
dude's tryna drop a quick key, but we all know hes screwed off the top
vs nothing....
like u said smirnoff u had writers block cuz there wasnt anything in ur verse i was feeling...just didnt hit hard for me....Hb just had the better verse period
nameplays was decent...
vote=HB
rtf:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...207/index.html
your punches won't hurt me, and i'm just being real G
after all it takes about 5 of you, just to get me tipsy
huh...
you won't do much damage in this battle, cuz truth is your soft
dude's tryna drop a quick key, but we all know hes screwed off the top
nah 2 basic
this is an easy win, i'll just smile and grin so you best surrender
dog you couldnt hit me if your ass was a bartender
2 basic bad wording
this kid has no swag, so it's quite simple to see this dudes lame
when we said do the number, we didnt mean on your damn name
what....
you got no game, im pushing for this win full throttle
and i'm not tryna be racist, when i say i'll cracka bottle
nah man
It’s about time you got an L, cause you’re obviously getting cocky
Breaking hearts when? Not after bitches hear about your floppy
about his floppy.....
And speaking of this gay guy, how’s your old golf-buddies hard drive?
That fag had you screaming “Soft-where?! Take that club out my Par-5!”
creative but didnt come out right
You see I sting like a bee-hive, an ali when it comes to texts
I’ll butterfly you like a steak, fuck a break…………………………….
………………………………….…….i’ll give you a heart attack instead
decent
Put you to rest with no stress, in an early grave with a closed casket
Cause who wants to see the face of an open and shut case of a fag with suicidal tourrettes?
doesnt rhyme?
Lets see your best verse after I deliver you headless in a black hearse
I didn’t need these 10 lines to tell you on time – you’re the worst
nah 2 basic
not a good battle hb's verse was way 2 basic and some bars barely made sense 5m had 2 decent bars 1 the wording kinda through me of n the other was pretty good but again the wording was weird still imo 2 decent bars vs 0 v/5m
^you should know about too basic
bump..
5m1
the problems that i had with your verse is that none of your punches had any type of set up at all when you started ur lines out they lead in one directions an landed in the other i think u just need to keep you concepts all landin on your opponent you bascially just battle this guy with 8 fillers an 2 attempts to throw a punch just work on your basics of battlin
HB
OK by readin your verse i can see you kno what a punch is but you have to work on you wording also and making them hit directly instead of indirect punches aka fillers you did haev a mroe creative verse here an i really cant judge this battle off of who had the best verse because it was about even so imma back down to the basics a lil more an go for who had better wordplay no no not name play but work play Hb WON so im voting for
HB
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HB Was Pretty Basic But Smirnoff Tried To Hard & Came Out Weak Overall..There Was Only 1 Good Bar In His Verse - HB Used Alot Of Nameplay That Pulled Thru & Made Some Good Hits Regardless Of How Basic His Verse Seemed..He Was Consistent With His Hits & His Delivery Helped The Flow..Smirnoff Was Stretched In Some Areas & Around The End His Verse Started Lacking..Not Bad Guys But HB Was The Better Battler Here
v/ Heart Break
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RTF
